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Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2011 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 19: Blonde Visit Number One
I've read ahead on ff.net and am hoping for an update, because I really do like this story :D
Reviewer: ThinkPink (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 19: Blonde Visit Number One
Okay, I have just read this whole story for maybe the 5th, 6th time........ and I just love it. You do Edward and Bella SO well. Please update soon,
Author's Response: My apologies! I sometimes forget that I have my story posted here. You can find a few more chapters on fanfiction.net, under the name 'alchemilla mollis'.
Five or six times?? Wow, I'm really flattered. :)
Reviewer: EMILIE00 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 19: Blonde Visit Number One
always good, all so real .
how come he has erections when he can"t make urine
Able to perfuse penis but not kidneys? some vampiric trick of nature
Reviewer: chrisnor (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 19: Blonde Visit Number One
UPDATE SOON . LOVIN' IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 19: Blonde Visit Number One
Tanya strikes again?
Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 19: Blonde Visit Number One
So good, I missed this story a lot...so detailed and amazingly written. YAY!
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 19: Blonde Visit Number One
Hi, I did like this chapter. (well , every chapter) Bella is growing fast and Edward is a delicious mix of wise and clueless. Not to speak of shower activities. The less they need the hateful, ridicolous implements you have invented, the happier I am.
I am confused : did you post it here before posting on ff net? I never got any alert from there, while normally I read your chapters on ff.
Finally, I deviated from my normal plots and posted here a story where Edward is not a vamp and has a Greek name - but it is not AH, it is a mythological fantasy called The Archer. Since herbalism has a part in the story, you might like it.
Reviewer: littlerose4574 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 18: Control
is that the end, write more now lol!!!
Reviewer: littlerose4574 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 17: Ready for splendor
I wish the blue teeth guard thing was white, I just have this god awful picture in my head lol
Reviewer: littlerose4574 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 15: Nearly Naked
i hope no one i know ever finds out i read this stuff lol
Reviewer: littlerose4574 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 14: The Gift of a Kiss
mmmmmmmmmm......
Reviewer: littlerose4574 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 13
Excellent
Reviewer: littlerose4574 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 12: Do me Screw me
Devastated that he let Tanya anywhere near him!!
Reviewer: littlerose4574 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 11: 1968 All Over Again
yes do an outtake!!
Reviewer: littlerose4574 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 8: A Lovely Mouthful
Amazing, go team Bella!!
Reviewer: littlerose4574 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 7: Manhunt
I cant think of anything else to say other than love it!!
Reviewer: littlerose4574 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 5: My Deliverer
loving it
Reviewer: littlerose4574 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 4: Come Here, Handsome
wow
Reviewer: littlerose4574 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 3: Somethin' Different
Im laughing so hard right now, is that wrong?? Poor Consuela!!
Reviewer: littlerose4574 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 2: It's not Natural
Loved it, now on to the next chapter!!
Reviewer: littlerose4574 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 1: First Kiss
Loving it, got the shock of my life when he broke the teachers arms lol
Reviewer: xiolaperry (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 18: Control
great story!! Can't wait for more. You have an exquisite balance of innocence & sensuality. Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: Thanks -- more coming soon...
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 18: Control
Hmmm....
I'm curios to know if Bella reacts in a positive way...or a negative way to Edward's behavior...
Reviewer: westosobear (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 18: Control
pant,pant! You stopped too soon!!!! Need and want more.
Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2010 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 18: Control
GOD, I love it when Edward acts like a vampire! The bloodlust in the middle of the makeout scene was AWESOME, and somehow exactly right. I don't suppose you'd write me some Vampire Carlisle, would you? Great chapter!!
Author's Response: Thanks beta!
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