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Reviewer: Nightmare1991 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Streets
Very interesting concept! Loved the first chapter... This chapter was just one of those things that really didn't need a lot of dialogue. Usually, this turns me off, but you pulled it off very nicely! :D
I'd love to see more! Can't wait to meet the "knight in shining armor"!
Reviewer: usaprincess242 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Streets
it sounds really promising. i cant wait to read more!
Reviewer: Lasha (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Streets
I love it... Please write more
Reviewer: twilighter767 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Streets
i looking forward to see where you are heading with this...update soon!!
Reviewer: obsessed668 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Streets
loved it
you have an amazing way with words
cant wait for more
Oxo
Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Streets
GReat idea! Can't wait to see what you'll make out of it.
Reviewer: vamppassion (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Streets
I really like the story so far. Keep updating.
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Streets
very interesting... you're right it is something different, but i am looking foward to reading more
Reviewer: anabella (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Streets
keep writing. I am already interested in what will happen in the story.
Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Streets
What an amazing amazing start!!!!
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Streets
I'm really liking this! You painted Bella's miserable world extremely well, and already I'm hooked and wondering what will happen next. Please update and keep going... you did a great job!
Reviewer: milZ1 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Streets
That's a really awesome start!! I really like it and I think you've developed it really well so far, my only hope is that you don't rush E/B getting together. There are soo many stories that have great starts but then rush it and have E'b declaring their feelings. Grrr :S
Anyways, it's an awesome start and don't be nervous, lol.
Tc
Reviewer: rere90 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Streets
This is really good. We never know the perspective of homeless people, so it's a nice change to read something different. I really like it.
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Streets
Interesting, promising start. Not every story is wine and roses. I am enjoying the complexity of the character and her musings..
Ready for more when you have it..
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Streets
i'm interested already!!
Reviewer: Draven Angelis (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Streets
It's different. It has a stark realism. I'm wondering where this may go. Fine start, Draven
Reviewer: ForeverxWithyou_ (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Streets
i like this story alot, keepup the good work! :)
xx
Reviewer: miztrezboo (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Streets
Nervous.. your such a nervous nancy!
I will WILL slap you if need be ;)
its a ride peeps.. a COMPLETE AND UTTER RIDE
andI can't WAIT to get on board ;)
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Streets
Great story! I can't wait to read more! Please update soon?
Reviewer: Randy (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Streets
Interesting story.
Reviewer: duchess_of_malta (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Streets
very good - can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: nanny (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Streets
this story is very interesting
the doctor in the clinic edward or carlile ?
wonder whats gonna happen next
please update soon
Reviewer: Nikki (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Streets
I totally love it. And your right; people are oblivious to the world around. Good job and write more.
Reviewer: SinAndShame (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Streets
This is so wonderfully written. I'm fascinated and looking forward to reading your journey through this topic.
Reviewer: twilightrocks98 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Streets
I feel for Bella so badly...it's very sad. I'm intrigued, so I'll put this story in my favorites! Can't wait for the next chapter.
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