Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
oh man, I love the B/C relationship but was REALLY hoping for this to turn B/E, I am kinda disappointed, but I am still looking forward to more! :)
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
Fantastic! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions
Oh my! Must keep going!
Reviewer: green_eyes4646 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
im soo excied to see this chapter i cant wait for more!!!
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
Wow lemony goodness ;)
I want to know where (if anywhere) the thing with Edward is going to go.
Achilles
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 11: The Wedding
Another fantastic chapter!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 10: Babysitting Edward Cullen
Another great chapter... excellent dialog in that one. :)
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 9: Secrets and Lies
That was fantastic!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 8: Anticipation
Ooohhhh!!!
Gotta hurry to the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: songster51 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 9: Secrets and Lies
Well, I don't hate you for your Edward even if he comes off as a spoiled brat here. He's obviously been poisoned by Carlisle's stupid lie. Doesn't he realize that by poisoning Edward towards him he really takes away both parents. He can blame Carlisle all he wants but the bottom line is he has neither.
Reviewer: twighlit (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
YESSSSSSS! the a/n sealed it for me, i LOVE non canon pairings... im actually writing a story fairly similar to yours but completely backwards... edward, bella, bella's daughter. weird right? ill stick with you til the end, us anti ExB girls have to stay together.
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
I have spent the last two days reading your story, and I have to say that I have fallen in love with the idea of the Doctor and Bella together. You have developed a wonderful storyline that is easy to read. Bella is witty and smart, Edward is an ass (sorry, but true), Esme is...well...Esme, and Carlisle is so enduring. I have loved reading every word!!!
Reviewer: christianna1157 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
Each chapter just gets better and better!!! I can't wait for chapter 14!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations
That was amazing!
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
The next chapters will be rough? Okay. Thanks for the warning. I think it's good to be able to prepare yourself for that sort of thing.
I, for one, am relieved that E & B didn't have sex. I hope they don't. I really, really hope they don't. How would Carlisle be able to get past that? Knowing that his son had sex with the woman he loves ... not that he's admitted that yet, but they are in love. And Bella? How would she live with herself after that?
I'm all for the sexy older man thing. As hot as Carlisle is, I don't see how anyone could be interested in a little boy after having him.
You have me so intrigued and I always love to see that you've updated.
Reviewer: Ladyrose (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
NO E/B HEA!!!! Yay!!!! woohoo! Does that mean Bella and Daddy C can have a HEA? Pretty pretty please oh please? I heart this story so hard! I love Mcnaughty! Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: adenglem (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
I'm so confused with who is going to end up with who here. I understand why Carlisle has such a need for Bella to understand what went down between him and Edward and I understand why Edward hates his father. However, as much as I like the Bella/Carlisle thing, I don't think they are meant to be. He has a lot of baggage that he needs to deal with and for me personally, their age is a factor in why I don't think things would work out. But then again, I don't think Bella and Edwards relationship will work out either because he has stuff with Tanya he needs to deal with. Maybe Bella's sole purpose with these men is to act as their healer of some sort so their relationship can be better and they can be on good terms. Who knows! Anyways can't wait for more!
Reviewer: AvaConner (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
I am loving this story! Just everything about it. I love your Edward and can't wait to see the trouble he creates.
This is the first C/B story I've enjoyed. All the others I've ever started reading got bad pretty quick. I was starting to wonder if I'd ever find a good one. BTW, I found the link to this story on youtube with a C/B vid.
I'm so sad there are only a few chapters left. :(
I would be forever happy if you could rec a couple of C/B stories you may have read.
I CANNOT wait for an update! So great!
Author's Response: OMG it's a vid on youtube?? That is so freakin' fantastic! I have to find it! Thanks for the the info.
Oh andI've never read any other C/B fics. I'm sure there's others out there, but I've never heard of them :)
Reviewer: cecpet (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
Love that this is not a ExB HEA story since Bella and the hot doctor is such a hot couple here and match far better. Still like E shaking things up though...
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
Oh! Update soon?
Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
This chapter was fucktastic, pun intended.
I don't think I could deal with an E/B HEA for this story. I think Carlisle needs her more than the Bratward does.
Now I'm not saying I am against Bratward getting some. I mean I still him. He's hilarious, I just don't think he's for Bella.
Now you're one more closer to 1000. I should probably go back and review the other chapters that I didn't. We'll see about that later...
Reviewer: tigger4 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
I LOVE IT im so obsessed with this story everyday i come and check if u updated lol but anywhozzle plz update soon keep up the good work ;0)
Reviewer: Sakkosekk (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
Aaaah, UPDATE more often!
Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
wow, the chapter end notes are definitely intriguing. as always, i can't wait for the next chapter! i think it's a good thing e/b didn't have sex, but wow, the bella carlisle part was...intense.
Reviewer: finallycaved (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
I don't know how you're going to do all you say you're going to do in the next few chapters, but I have faith in you! And I can't wait to see what's next :)
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