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Reviews For Screwing Up
Reviewer: Softballfevers (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2014 04:52 PM · On: Welcome to My World

Is there any way that I could read your story? I just found it and it looks amazing! Please let me know either way. I understand if you don't want to put it up again. You seem like an amazing writer

Reviewer: jane (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2011 05:14 AM · On: Welcome to My World

Just read this chapter over at Fanfiction and so thrilled that you posted here.  Can't wait to continue the ride!  Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: KatnissGale (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 06:23 PM · On: Welcome to My World

I like the story so far!

Reviewer: dizzym729 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 10:27 PM · On: Welcome to My World

started reading from FF and decided to join twilighted to read more but where it  the more??? update please!

Reviewer: layla1 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 10:40 PM · On: Welcome to My World

Hi, just wondering where the rest of the chapters have gone? One day they were there and the next day the weren't. Anywhere else I could find them? Best of luck with your very soon to be released novel. Thanks

Reviewer: BellaMarie4 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 08:47 AM · On: Welcome to My World

Just found this and can already see that I'm gonna love it!  Can't wait to delve deeper!

Reviewer: BRANDY0925 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 05:58 AM · On: Welcome to My World

started to read this on FF..and had a minor heart attack until i read that you moved it here...Shewww...sounds great so far:)

Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 01:02 PM · On: Welcome to My World

interesting chapter

Reviewer: eclipstress (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 10:00 PM · On: Welcome to My World

I'm interested. And I LOVED LOVED LOVED the way you ended this. 'No shit' ahaha I mean it was just perfect for the chapters ending.

Reviewer: fearandloathing (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 11:19 PM · On: Welcome to My World

great start! I'm totally interested!

Reviewer: kaye dizzle (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 05:02 PM · On: Welcome to My World

Just started reading this and so far so good. Can't believe that Alice goes for a walk at 2 in the morning. That's not normal. Lol. Can't wait to figure out the unanswered questions.

Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 06:40 PM · On: Welcome to My World

Excellent opener, most definitely grabbed my interest! I can't wait to read more!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Welcome to the family of fans. Enjoy!

Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 10:21 AM · On: Welcome to My World

Wow.  That was great!  Hurrying off to read more now!

Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 12:02 PM · On: Welcome to My World

wow thats the finale!!!! hmmm

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 06:50 AM · On: Welcome to My World

Reviewed this on FF, got to second chapter and was sent here. If you didn't get my review earlier, sorry. Interesting, can't see what happens.

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Welcome to My World

did you republish this story? has it changed?



Author's Response:

It hasn't changed. I just put it back up so people would stop complaining that I took it down while they were halfway through it. I'll give a warning next time I take it down though it seems it won't be for awhile.

Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Welcome to My World

I really like it so far =)

Reviewer: Minoy (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 09:24 AM · On: Welcome to My World

nice start... different world.  I am in.

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Welcome to My World

I am SO intrigued.  I am eager to read how it develops.

Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Welcome to My World

I love your description of Alice and her walks, I can picture it very easily in my head.



Author's Response:

Why thank you!

Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Welcome to My World

When I can flew out the window forever ago - good fanfic is compulsory everything else can wait!

Reviewer: wolf blossom (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Welcome to My World

hi i read the first chapter to this on fanfic and liked it. i created an account on here just so i could keep reading it. hope your good and keep up the good work :) lol x



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! The website's great so you won't regret it. They promise the very best fanfics and they do deliver.

Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 06:06 AM · On: Welcome to My World

I'm glad you decided to put the story back up. I have been wanting to read it. I love the chapter!

Reviewer: Lou B Jones (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Welcome to My World

855 reviews for TWO freaking chapters? To say you've hit upon an interesting storyline is putting it mildly! Can't wait to see where you go with this. And fast postings? Yay!

One thing though. When reading Bella, and she sounds like a guy to me. I do like my Bella a little more...feminine. Hopefully the plot outweighs her toughness (for lack of a better word). Another hopeful, is that I am mistaken, and that from chap 2 on, she is not so...masculine.



Author's Response:

Ah, I'm glad you noticed. She's masculine around Jazz. He's kind of her pillar of strength after her mom so she adopted a lot of his style and, obviously, language. She is MUCH more feminine around Edward, even a little vulnerable, though that's just the way I wrote her character. And the review thing is misleading, I promise. I'd put up the story a while ago (all 20-something chapters), got attention from a publisher on a similar original novel, and decided to take it down but my fans complained. I'm now starting to put it back up. Enjoy!

Reviewer: awsmtxn (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Welcome to My World

Love it so far..can't wait to read more!!!

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