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Reviewer: TeamJacobYeah (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Sneaky
This story is amazing! I love Jacob and Bella together, and this story is so HOT!! Edward had better not get back together with Bella. He sucks! Go Team Jacob!
Reviewer: DreaC (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Sneaky
I love this chapter as well! As I was reading the last part I felt so compelled to scream "There's no hope, Edward! Leave!" lol You have a really great story! It's so great that it captivates me and makes me want to scream for Edward to leave lol. I can't wait to read what Edward does to try and win her back!
Reviewer: Megan39 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Giddy
I love this story! I think this is one of the best written stories on this site. I'm looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response: No way! Really?!?! Thank you so much!
Chapter 8 has been submitted and is waiting on validation. I hope you like it!
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 03:51 AM · On: Giddy
Just lovely!! Pack talk, the way B treasures the previous night, Alice... aaahhh! Leaves me wanting more...<><3
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 03:39 AM · On: Edgy
*whew* - running these marathons takes it out of a girl! VERY NICE! <><3
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 03:18 AM · On: Anxious
I think I'm having heart palpitations... and hot flashes and... <><3
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Anxious
Yay!!!
Reviewer: Alice Black (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 11:23 AM · On: Guilty
Again fantastic chapter! I loved how you made Bella so tense in the room with Edward...the emotion was so real! This story so far is absolutely fantastic...you are a great writer and deserve an award...of some kind...
Author's Response: YAAAY!! Thank you so much! I am having a bad day and you just made it so much better! :)
Reviewer: Jaz (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Giddy
omg Im Lovin this story so far
yay* update soon
Reviewer: Alice Black (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Awake
la! That was amazing! I haven't seen Jacob captured soo well in a story...that's fantastic!
Reviewer: Fsternu (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Giddy
ive read a lot of these stories and i realy like the way this one is layed out. I like being able to get both points of view at the same time .
Reviewer: cavilah (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Edgy
I always knew it was supposed to be Jacob, too! Thanks for letting everyone else know... ;-) I love me some Jacob & Bella romance & hotness...
Reviewer: JasperBella0015 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Giddy
OKAY, I LOVE THIS STORY! BUT THERE IS ONE PROBLEM, ............... I RAN OUT OF CHAPTERS TO READ, SO I THINK YOU REALLY NEED TO WRITE SOME MORE. THEY ARE REALLY GOOD!
~LOVED THEM~
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Giddy
Great chapter. Alice is supporting Bella's relaionship with Jacob? Intersting. Will Edward let Bella go? Will she be able to resist Edward when she goes to tell him to leave--- We know she will.....
Thanks
Reviewer: JennB21 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Giddy
Loved it! I hope Bella get's the balls to get Edward out of her life. I love the Bella Jacob paring! Please post more chapters ASAP!!! Thank you!
Reviewer: dollface (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 04:12 AM · On: Giddy
awwww i love bella and jacob! :D thanks for writing them, i hate edward!!!
Reviewer: smoochie (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 03:20 AM · On: Giddy
I love this twist with Alice! But I'm on Bella's side, I'd hate to have to talk to Edward again. ugh! I can't wait to see what she decides to do!
Reviewer: mellyfrisco6 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 09:34 PM · On: Giddy
Can Alice see the pack in her visions? It would be such a change! I like your story so much!!!! Thank you for sharing it with us.
Reviewer: Colum (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Giddy
Well thats a tough one but Bella has to make her decision final, she just can't leave everybody in limbo.
Reviewer: Colum (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Edgy
Mind blowing amazing chapter, I absolutely loved it!!!
Reviewer: Becky2288 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Giddy
wow! i loved this chapter! but why is edward always such a drama queen! and why doesnt bella just tell him that they're no more that she doesn't really love him that way anymore! I feel so bad for edward in this! I hate how bella is always jerking guys around! i hope i'm never like that! but i love how its so true to her character! lol i know i know i'm a sadist! lol but seriously! anyway I'm looking forward to an update! oh and alice is just so alice in this! I've always known she'd be like that if bella would've chosen jacob! although how can she see a future i thought all she saw was darkness when it came to the pack? I guess she got around it or maybe it was black until jake stopped phasing? i dont know! can you explain that?
Author's Response: Wolf blindness? What wolf blindness? Here...look over here at this shiny thing! Ooooo...pretty shiny thing...
Reviewer: lyns13 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Uncertain
Awwwww!!!!!!!!! THAT SO SWEET
Reviewer: DreaC (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Giddy
I love the fact that Alice doesn't hate her! And Charlie "waiting in the wings" ,so to speak, for Alice, those were my exact thoughts when I read NM to find that Charlie liked Alice. Bella telling Edward to leave? Now I'm curious as to whether she will decide to tell him to leave, and how that would go. Great chapter!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Giddy
Love it!
Reviewer: Bethie26 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 01:47 AM · On: Edgy
MORE MORE!!!!!
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