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Reviews For Heart and Soul
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 06:36 AM · On: We Should Date

Wow!  You really captured the intensity of the moment!  Very well Written.

I also like the history that you gave for each person.

Reviewer: vampire-romance (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 01:12 AM · On: Waking Up

well...honestly...the whole mind reading thing coming into it, kinda let me down a little bit. =[

will keep reading though. the first chapter had me wanting more. it was such a powerful and descriptive chapter.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks...Sorry to dissapoint you there...

 

Edward's gift, and his angst over it, is really is one of my favorite aspects of him. I wanted to keep things as in character as possible, and having a "secret" that the family would have to work together to hide was something I wanted to keep in the story as well. As I couldn't have excessively handsome sparkly vampires as their secret, I decided that giving Edward his gift lent well to the situation.

Near-death experiences are surrounded by mystery. Many people who have these sorts of experiences wake up feeling that something has changed. While mind reading hasn't exactly been reported, I figured that this was fiction and mind-reading after such an episode isn't such a stretch when the story as a whole is based on a story that includes the mythical undead.

 

Hope you stick with it, and enjoy it in spite of it:)

 

ebhg:)

Reviewer: Lespin01 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Biology Blunders

LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT!

Write more!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

 

I do in-fact have this story completed:) 

 

I'm posting as quickly as validation allows:)

 

ebhg:)

Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Cafeteria Sightings

Really good story so far. I am excited to see what comes next. Biology ?

Reviewer: morganlizard (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Cafeteria Sightings

very good. I love the lunch room scene and it's fun to read it again with different, but the same nuances. Next, Chemistry lab! *wringing hands in anticipation*



Author's Response:

Thank you:) 

 

I've currently got a one-shot in the queue, then I'll be posting the next chapter of Heart and Soul:)

 

Thanks again for reviewing! I had thought that perhaps there wasn't too much interest on this site...

 

ebhg:)

Reviewer: morganlizard (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Healing

Wow! I am so loving this! The first chapter was a little hard, I mean, Edward and Tanya? But I got into it, and now I can't wait to see what's next!



Author's Response:

Ha ha! Thank you:) I don't read/write non-canon pairings. Tanya may have had a brief shining moment in chapter one, but alas, she's dead now isn't she? ;)

 

It's all a part of the plot- I don't hate Tanya though, even in canon. Hope you enjoy the ride:)

 

ebhg:)

Reviewer: Lespin01 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Healing

Now, is he in love with Tanya? That would suck in my opinion. I love the chapter. Update quickly please.



Author's Response:

Haha! Friends can love each other, but not be *in* love- it's a different kind of affection. I think you'll see that Edward and Bella have a very different love than Edward and Tanya:)

Reviewer: Lespin01 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Waking Up

In love with the story! i'm going to review every chapter! I hope he didn't love her like that because then it would be even more difficult for Edward and Bella to fall in love.



Author's Response:

Thank you:) Love is a very big thing. It comes in all shapes and sizes, so to speak, so I hope you'll enjoy the ride!

 

ebhg:)

Reviewer: Lespin01 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Out of Body Experience

Oh my god! She got Tanya's heart! I know it! Poor Tanya, if she was like the other characters in other fanfics, I'd probably say screw her and pity Bella for having her heart. But she's not, so everythings cool. :) Update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I will:)

 

ebhg:)

Reviewer: Lespin01 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 06:45 PM · On: We Should Date

Shit. Scary. I was still the whole time i was reading the crash.



Author's Response:

Hee hee! I hope it didn't disappoint, even in it's intensity:)

 

ebhg:)

Reviewer: Nicki9900 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 02:56 AM · On: Out of Body Experience

Wow.  Just...wow.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 

ebhg:)

Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Healing

Excellent chapter again.  I'm glad that Edward is finally starting to heal and I can't wait for Edward and Bella meet.  I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 02:26 PM · On: Out of Body Experience

Yikes!  The sad part about this type of orgn transplant is someone must die for another to live. 



Author's Response:

Very true. Few people realize that it is also the families of the donors who are the true heros in this kind of situation:)

 

ebhg:)

Reviewer: EmberRayne (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Waking Up

awwww, only 3 chapters. this is a really sad beginning, like tears and hiccups and teddy bears on the sidewalk. make it happy eventually, ok? sad stories make me want chocolate, and we don't have any here anymore, i ate it all:((

Reviewer: Jojo3508 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Waking Up

OH i can see this story is going to have me in tears. The surgery had me choked up. I can't wait to see what is going to happen next.

Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Waking Up

nteresting twist to the story ahuman mind reading Edward would love to see where this could lead . Keeep writing

Reviewer: MidnightSapphires (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Waking Up

I'm still reading!!   I think it is a great story so far...   looking forward to more!

 

~Sapphire

Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Waking Up

Awesome chapter! I like how you keep bouncing from Edward's story to Bella's story. I'm hoping that they will be meshing soon :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! You won't be dissappointed; Bella comes to Forks in the very next chapter:)

 

ebhg:)

Reviewer: spawyer (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Waking Up

Just read all this and it is great!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 

ebhg:)

Reviewer: tatie1970 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 06:28 AM · On: We Should Date

Great writing.  Nice storyline. Keep it up !

Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 03:17 AM · On: Waking Up

I love it.  It brought tears to my eyes. you are doing a fantastic job with this story I would like more.  Keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm always amazed to hear that I've evoked such an emotional response:) That's what keeps me writing! I'll keep it coming!

 

ebhg:)

Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Out of Body Experience

this is so fantastic! I love it love it love it. keep it coming, PLEASE!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'll get it all posted!

 

ebhg:)

Reviewer: Azrielstar (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 12:01 PM · On: We Should Date

Well- I like the premise so far- but Duchovny- it's kinda cheesy...I get that it is a hats off to the movie with David in it, though so I am going to read the next chapter:)



Author's Response:

Well, I needed a surname for Tanya, and I didn't want to use Denali.  For one, it's not a Russian name, and two, I think Denali as Tanya's last name is over used- it's her canon location, not her name. To me, Tanya Denali is pretty cheesy.

(I know you could probably care less about the Denali bit, but it's all a part of the story)

 

Long story short, I wanted to keep the initial- one Google search for Russian last names starting with "D" sealed the deal.

 

I'm all about the in-joke;) I'm quirky that way:)

 

No offense taken, none intended, but that is why I went with Duchovny, other than the fact that he was a fav actor when I was in high school, and as you said, Return to Me starring David Duchovny. In all reality, the name has no real bearing on the story, so I hope that you'll overlook it and enjoy the ride:)

 

ebhg:)

 

Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Out of Body Experience

I loved the update.  I was on the edge of my seat hoping Edward would make it.  The out of body exsperiance was great.  I'm going to be sad when he finds out about Tanya.  It is going to devastate him. I can't wait to read more.   Great work.



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it! Of course, I can't kill Edward...he's my favorite:)

 

ebhg:)

Reviewer: mchurch928 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 10:26 AM · On: Out of Body Experience

I must say this is not was i was expecting, sooo much better. keep it coming!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad I could surprise you, and make it enjoyable!

 

ebhg:)

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