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Reviewer: morganlizard (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 07:31 AM · On: Black Icecapades
I loved it! Great way to incorporate the accident, and they both saved each other in more ways than one. Of course Edward would flash back, and Bella knew just what to do. It makes me wonder when Edward is going to figure out that bella had a transplant. He heard Charlie panic.
Author's Response: I like a strong Bella:) And I really enjoyed having her be the strong one here:)
Edward did have a lot on his mind while he was under that truck;)
ebhg:)
Reviewer: twidiehard0302 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 05:58 AM · On: Black Icecapades
I like it - keep it comin!
Author's Response: Thank you! Will do!
ebhg:)
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Black Icecapades
loved your acident very cool!
Author's Response: Thank you:) I have plenty of real-life accident experience to draw on, so I'm glad it comes across so well;)
ebhg:)
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Black Icecapades
I'm kinda surprised that Charlie didn't think anything about her heart, due to the stress that she would have gone through. Of course, he may have, when Edward was focused on someone else.
I can't wait to see the hospital scene, especally since it was Edward on the gurney this time.
Author's Response: Edward did have a lot on his mind;)
Thank you!
ebhg:)
Reviewer: Lespin01 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Black Icecapades
I love this chapter! I love how you reversed the original situation to Edward hitting his head. Can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: Thank you:) My penchant for maiming Edward aside, I couldn't have Bella on the gurney. Some of the first questions EMT's ask pertain to your medical history. So, plot holes had to be filled and Hurtward stepped up once again;)
Thanks for reviewing!
ebhg:)
Reviewer: ratqueen (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Fishing for Information
This is great. I like that though this is an AU-human story that you have kept it so close to cannon.
Author's Response: Thank you:) I debated the whole way about how close/far I should take things. I loved adding the little tweak here and there:)
ebhg:)
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Fishing for Information
LOL - I can just see Alice bouncing and wanting to get at Edward's closet.
Got to love Charlie and his not giving out information. I always look forward to reading more of this. Thank you for the lovely work.
Author's Response: Thank you for your compliments!
I loved writing Alice, Esme, and Charlie in this chapter, so I'm glad you enjoyed them:)
ebhg:)
Reviewer: Nilla (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 11:42 PM · On: Fishing for Information
Loved the chapter, only wish it had been much longer. :) Can't wait for more, this story is great.
Author's Response: Thank you:) This was the first story of real length that I ever wrote, and it remains the longest story I've ever written. I've found that length comes with practice:)
So, I wish these chapters were longer, but at the time, I just wasn't practiced enough as a writer:)
Thanks for reading AND reviewing!
ebhg:)
Reviewer: morganlizard (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Fishing for Information
Grrr! Why won't he tell her more! This was great, and I loved Alice! Fun!
Author's Response: Alice is a favorite of mine. I love it when she and Edward are portrayed as close siblings, and she has more than a passing interest in things other than shopping:)
ebhg:)
Reviewer: Lespin01 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Fishing for Information
New chappie! Yay! I love your story! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you!
I'll be posting again soon, hopefully validation will move quickly:)
ebhg:)
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Fishing for Information
Loved Charlies retort!
Author's Response: Thank you! I personally love Charlie as a character. He doesn't get portrayed very well very often. I'm glad you like him here!
ebhg:)
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Fishing for Information
love esme in this chapter
Author's Response: Thank you:) I think Esme is largly overlooked in fanfiction. I love her strength.
ebhg:)
Reviewer: Nilla (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Biology Blunders
I just found this story and now I'm hooked. Please update again soon!
Author's Response: Thank you:)
I'm puting the next chapter up very soon:)
ebhg:)
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 05:28 AM · On: Biology Blunders
Welcome back, it's nice to dive back into a story and not have to do any back reading, just take it back up as if you never left it. :)
I love human Edward having to listen to everyone's thoughts, but the new girl, who is silent to him. It was actually kind of sweet to see him flirt right away instead of running away for a week.
Author's Response: Thanks:) I love flirtatious, shy Edward. Of course, then there's Daddy Edward, Husband Edward, Music Edward...*sigh* I could really just keep going, but I think you understand;)
Thanks for reviewing!
ebhg:)
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 04:41 AM · On: Biology Blunders
Beautiful chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you:)
ebhg:)
Reviewer: vampire-romance (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Biology Blunders
will definately keep reading. =] im looking forward to more
update soon =]
Reviewer: JAYS1 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Biology Blunders
Great story, please keep going.
:)
Author's Response: Thank you:)
I've got the story complete, I'm just posting as quickly as validation permits:)
ebhg:)
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Cafeteria Sightings
Loved that last paragraph!!!!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Healing
So sweet!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Waking Up
Wow! What emotion!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 08:54 AM · On: Out of Body Experience
ok....I am with you, lets see how we get them together.
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 07:47 AM · On: Biology Blunders
nice i like it
Author's Response: Thank you:)
ebhg:)
Reviewer: spawyer (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Biology Blunders
I am so impressed with your story and writing. I look forward to your next update and can't wait to see how you develop this story - so many possibilities!!!
Author's Response: Thank you:) I'm glad that you are enjoying the story:) Thank you again, for taking the time to review. It really makes a writer's day:)
ebhg:)
Reviewer: Sugarbaby17 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Waking Up
I think I'm going to really enjoy this story.
Reviewer: morganlizard (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Biology Blunders
I loved the P&P stuff. It was the perfect tool for the biology meeting, and the Johnny Carson thing was funny, too! I'm just totally bummed there isn't more! So, is our brokeward going to disapear now? and what will angela do when she finds out about the transplant?
Author's Response: I love Pride and Prejudice:) I thought that it was very fitting for Edward's non-bloodlust reaction:)
Thank you:)
ebhg:)
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