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Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2020 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 12: You Are My Life Now
I was hoping for a next
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2020 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 10: Looking For The Other Half of Me
I think I spent a week researching kidney transplant..
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 12: You Are My Life Now
I found out about this story from FreeWriters and Readers.. thought I would get caught up a bit.. LOVING IT!! Will you update on Twilighted?
Or perhaps another website, may I suggest
http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/index.php ?
It's hard to read on FW&R, but I will try!
Reviewer: mdcrh (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 12: You Are My Life Now
awesome story, can't wait for the update!
Reviewer: elsiemanville (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 12: You Are My Life Now
Update?
Reviewer: glo4twilight (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 12: You Are My Life Now
well i am very pleased with this chapter finally having their long awaited talk, i don't think edward could've been too angry cos his agenda is to get his son's health back. and he loves bella way too much!! you fucking rock it was absolutely awesome and i am so rapt that they're back together. their love for each other runs so deep it's just beautiful! jacob of course was an asshole but other than that it was great although i would've liked to see esme and carlisle when they saw caleb!! i would also love to see more edward and caleb interaction that would be awesome!! well done chapter and please please update soon i just love it!!btw i don't blame that their hormones were running wild while they were making out!! their connection and passion is so strong!!mmmhmmmm!! they do have roughly a year to make up for ..lol.. nice work!!
Reviewer: EdwardsHeartbeat (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 12: You Are My Life Now
such a sweet chapter. I love Edward Cullen!!! Please let Caleb be okay.
Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 12: You Are My Life Now
its about bloody time these two got their heads out of their asses!!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 12: You Are My Life Now
So happy that they talked and were able to explain the past. I am thrilled that they are back together and can't wait to see them really reunite! ;)
Looking forward to the surgery -- hoping all goes well for them.
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 12: You Are My Life Now
you are amazing every word was perfectly placed and we know he cant hold a grudge for long i am so proud of how your writting gets better with each chapter oh drama in the or well you know that is just as dangerous for the doner and cableb has to be ok cause i will just die if he is sick but reaction to OR drug or a reaction to iv atb could send our doner into cardiac arrest scare the shit out of our cullen family and bella maybe shock some sense into her i know shut up sit down and let you drive i got that but requests from the group 1) a scene with them all together before the or i know one scene a kinky boy who i wont name wants to see he wants to see edward walking in while she is feeding the baby and bending to kiss the babys head oh no I wont even finish his kinky fuckery thought and you think i am bad oh no not always me he can tell you him self he spends to much time with fify or he has watched the blue laggon one to many times but we love where your at with with but edward said he feels this coming to and end soon get back to the drawing board sister love ya and dont you dare go mia on me again
Author's Response: God, Edward you are such a naughty boy! Girl, what are you doing to do with him? STOP!! I don't want to know! Forget I asked! Hee, hee.
I've done research upon research to make sure the next chapter sounds intelligent. Especially with you and all your group reading it. Please beg for my forgiveness ahead of time and tell them I counsel the mind...the body I know very little about beyond ungrad biology.
Edward is right. It is winding down. My outline has another five chapters...maybe six if I add a whole chapter of smut to make up for all the angst. I'm sure you want mind that, right?
I'll drag a few tears from you with the final moments before the surgery, 'cause you know I love to see grown women weep! Not really, but hell, what's a story without some heart touching moments, right?
Anyhoo, I'm working on both stories at the same time and AMP should go in this week and a new chapter of TSOP the week after. I'll try to hurry.
Love ya!
Stacy
Reviewer: terrabella (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 12: You Are My Life Now
Nice coming together on their part - well written!
Reviewer: michangelina (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 12: You Are My Life Now
Excellent chapter totally loved it!! I hope it all turns out for them.. And pleaseu update as soon as you can..
Reviewer: Niluvien (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 12: You Are My Life Now
You did it right, they both fucked up so really neither of them would have been justified in getting angry.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 11: Confrontations & Confessions
Bella needs to talk...no letters
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 10: Looking For The Other Half of Me
So, will Victoria try to cause more problems?
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 9: Bump Blues and Bundle Trouble
Poor Bella and Caleb.
Glad he has a normal name, not something like Calebreneseme
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 12: You Are My Life Now
YAY YAY YAY!!! :) They're back together. I'm absolutely adored this new chapter. Hopefully it'll continue with Caleb getting better and the three of them being able to put their little family back together.
Reviewer: fabandfriendly (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 12: You Are My Life Now
lovely moving chapter i love this story
Reviewer: xxDebbieCullenxx (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 12: You Are My Life Now
The chapter was great and you were right to change it - he moved his job ditched Vapid Tanya and set about finding Bella for nearly a year - now if you want and need to be with someone that bad and life presents you with that second chance I feel you would grasp it with both hands which is essentially what Edward has done.
He ia a grown man that spends most of his days inside a court room so how mature would he have been to find out 1)he has a son then to find out 2)his son was very poorly 3)only to end up at logger heads with the mother of his child and the love of his life.
In all honesty you were spot on - hats off to you
Regards - Debs (UK) tapping her foot and waiting for next update!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 12: You Are My Life Now
perfect
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 12: You Are My Life Now
I thin it was the perfect waY to take this chapter. Their relationship had to ge better because they have one common goal... CALEB. They CANNOT waste time fighting
I loved the chapter. Lots of emotions and I just LOVED IT. And have I told you I LOVED IT? I'm looking forward to Caleb getting better and meeting his daddy
Reviewer: Scully (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 12: You Are My Life Now
I agree, with how hard he searched for her, for him to now be angry...total shit. You did it well, thank you for your dedication.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 8: Changes
He needs to hire a PI to help him.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 7 Surprises
Glad she isn't a cheater...thought she lied but u never knew.
Glad she is prego
Great writting
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 6: Beginnings and Endings
So, Bella is a cheater? Or was she lying. At least E and T had a =n open relationship
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