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Reviewer: tellytubby101 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 3: Mother Theresa
Amazingly original and I am absolutely intrigued to read more.
Your writing methods (spelling & grammar) are up to par, and your eloquent use of language makes for an engaging read. It has been a while since I've some across a story worth getting a review, and your certainly deserves many more than what you are getting.
Thank you for taking the time to post this story and for taking the time to write it out. Personally, I think people nowadays take FF writers for granted.
And I'm liking the way you are taking the AU. This (technically) counts more like Original Fiction with Twilight characters pasted in, rather than real FF, but I am really enjoying the tale nonetheless.
Though I will not push for you to update like some do (OMG UPDATE OR ILL DIE!!! PLEEZ U R SOOO G8!), I will wish that inspiration hits you so you actually want to write instead of being pressured into it.
From Tubby. :-)
Author's Response: Wow, Tubby, thanks for such a well though review and for pretty much being every author's dream reviewer. Seriously, you had me smiling and your compliments were much appeciated.
This story is actually my original fiction that I decided to convert into a fan fic, which is why it probably seems like Original fic and has little (if anything) to do with Twilight.
You had me laughing out loud with you immitation "OMG UPDATE OR LIKE UMMMMM ILL DIEEEE!! SRSLY!!" HAHAHAHA It's so true, though. I don't really mind when reader's say that because honestly, I'm just thankful they're revieweing, but it is always refreshing to get a reviewer such as yourself. But yeah, I'm flattered if people tell me to "update soon" because I guess that means they're excited about my story. So, yeah, thank you! And, I'm so thrilled you're liking my little story so far!
Reviewer: pillow912 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 3: Mother Theresa
Great Chpater!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: bethc_88 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 3: Mother Theresa
This is a really cool story - can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm thrilled you're liking it so far!
Reviewer: bemily (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 3: Mother Theresa
I like that neither is thinking about a relationship with the other right now. Edward getting in "trouble" for texting during the meeting was cute. I loved how he took the day off. It should be interesting.
Author's Response: Hey! I'm so glad you appreciated the fact that Edward and Bella didn't fall head over heels in love at first sight. Also, I thought Edward getting in trouble was rather humurous. I guess my point was to show that although he seems like a tough and stubborn guy, he has weaknesses too. Impressing his parents is one of them. Anyway, thanks for reviewing! :-)
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 3: Mother Theresa
Well, this is going to be an interesting experence to see. Please keep up the great work, I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and taking the time to review! I'm hoping it should be an interesting experience, indeed.
Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 3: Mother Theresa
What an amazing fic! Really - you have me so captivated. Wonderful writing!
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate your kind compliments and the fact that you took the time to review. I hope you enjoy the future chapters to come.
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 3: Mother Theresa
I loved Edward's pov. He is a very intresting character and I look forward to more from his pov. Excellent chapter and I love how Bella stood up to him. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hiya! I'm so glad I'm not the only one that love edward's character. I think I just really wanted to create a man that wasn;t perfect like the Edward in the books. He has a lot of learning and growing to do. Anyway, thanks so much for reviewing.
Reviewer: obsessed668 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 3: Mother Theresa
aawwww LOVED IT!!!
cant wait for more
Oxo
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyd it so far!
Reviewer: thal89 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 3: Mother Theresa
I can't wait to read more. I barely saw this story today and decided to check it out. I'm really glad I did because it's very good so far. I love that Bella has a pitbull. I love them, they're so cute; and Sophie kinda looks like one of my pitbulls. My pitbull Blanca is all white with brown spots on her eyes. : )
Author's Response: Hey there! I'm thrilled that you found my story, too. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Sophie is actually inspired by my pitbull named Shelby. Shelby looks exactly like Sophie is described, only Shelby is A LOT more devious, haha. She's only seven months old and is full of piss and wind. Anyway, I love pitbulls, also, which is why I thought it was appropriate for Bella to have one. Thanks for the review! :-)
Reviewer: dandyvamp (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 3: Mother Theresa
I love this story! Can't wait to see what happens on Friday!
Reviewer: spunkransom30 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 2: The List
I like it so far!! :) Hope you keep writing! :)
Reviewer: spunkransom30 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 2: The List
I like it so far!! :) Hope you keep writing! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :-)
Reviewer: ale_ap (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 2: The List
This is an amazing fic! It's a bit sad =/ poor Bella, I hope she could do everything what she wrote on her list. Keep writing, yo're doing an excellent job =) I'm willing to see what is going to happen with Edward! ..Pardon my English, I speak Spanish ^^
Author's Response: Hey! No worries, you english is just fine! Thank you for reviewing and I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far!
Reviewer: Katrina (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 2: The List
Very interesting! Really enjoying what there is so far..though a litle nervous about the heartfail in the prologue. Eeeek. Still great writing and I look forward to seeing more as Bella embarks on her challenge. Thanks for sharing :)
Author's Response: Hello there! Thanks for the review! The prologue was basically to set the tone of the story, and I agree that it does make things quite sad! I can't wait to dive more into the story! :-)
Reviewer: justagirl (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 2: The List
Aw, I really like this. I hope to read more soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm glad you're liking it so far! :-)
Reviewer: Pao_7 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 2: The List
I am really liking this story. Update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you're liking it! :-)
Reviewer: vannaaaaheartsjacob (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 2: The List
Update this soonnnnnn!
Please :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I already have the next chapter written, so it should be up soon! :-)
Reviewer: pillow912 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful Man
Great Story update soon!!!!
Reviewer: LilyMay (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful Man
oh my goodnes..way to pull on a poor girls heartstrings....
this story sounds perfect. You already basically gave the whole thing away yet I am yearning to read more. Please please please please don't abandon it, its beautiful. You are a very talented writer to show so much depth to the characters and life of Bella and the gang...
Basically I love it, please pleaseplease write more :)
Author's Response: Hey there! So sorry for the delayed response! I'm so glad you're liking the story so far and I promise I won't abandon it. Thanks so much for the compliments and I hope you'll continue to enjoy the future installments.
Reviewer: JuicyBooteyhh20 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful Man
PLEASE update asap!!! I love it!!
Reviewer: Gryphon (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful Man
You've captured my interest already...impatiently waiting for next instalment.
Thanks,
Author's Response: Awesome! I'm so excited, I was hoping the first chapter would peak some interest! :-)
Reviewer: milZ1 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful Man
I'm loving this story so far, so much mystery about Edward and Rosalie, you even described Alice too. And ofcourse, why is Bella all alone, its sad actually, but I love it, calls for great angst. Anyways I like this concept, very original and can't wait to see where you take this story!!! :)
Tc
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I agree the story is sad, it isn't really meant to be a happy story, though it will have its moments. I'm so glad you're liking it! :-)
Reviewer: EASEmama (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful Man
Wow. Wonderful. I love your Bella!
Author's Response: Thank you! I was hoping she'd be more likable in this story!
Reviewer: littleangel531 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful Man
ohh off to a great start..looking forward to reading more
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! So glad you're liking it so far!
Reviewer: vivaciousv1114 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful Man
I am totally loving this fic. I really can't wait to see what happens.
Author's Response: Awesome! I guess that means I did my job if I have you anxious for the next chapter! :-)
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