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Reviewer: Jackie Lautner (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 01:18 AM · On: Sunless

Awwww Jake is so cute....He was scaring me for a second there though with all that thought about waitng.

Reviewer: Jackie Lautner (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2011 10:49 PM · On: Killed the cat

I love this story!! No offense but whats with the wink i am sick of it! i love the story so much i always liked jakes pov better!

Reviewer: wingedcolors (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2011 06:17 AM · On: Epilogue


Reviewer: Jackie Lautner (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2011 12:14 AM · On: Monk

They are too funny together!! I love jake but he got what he deserved..

Reviewer: mrsTwizzler (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 04:34 AM · On: Epilogue

What a CRAZY cliff hanger!!! Not Cool! .....Other than that, I loved your story!!!!

Reviewer: lauranessification (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2010 06:51 PM · On: Epilogue

You, you need to put on that sequel real fast. Real fast, that is.

I liked this story a lot :) Jake's "plan", me wantsa know >>

And the epilogue is interesting. Interestingly interesting.

(I actually read it in less then three days :D)

Reviewer: bucksgirl731 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 10:25 PM · On: Epilogue

This story/fanfiction is AMAZING!!!!!!! You did a wonderful job!

Reviewer: taramisu (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 06:57 AM · On: Rain drops

This is actually quite good.  Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: fullmoon422 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2010 08:21 PM · On: Killed the cat

stupid stupid stupid????   OK this story might be a little too cookoo for me!!  I can't imagine the Jacob I imagined after reading the books, or Taylor Lautner from the movies doing that.  But OK.  I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and keep reading. 

Reviewer: delicouslyweird (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 01:05 AM · On: Monk

OMG I can't stop laughing.

Reviewer: bucksgirl731 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 06:50 PM · On: Rain drops

Great job. It was awesome!!!

Reviewer: amoresuicidio (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 01:46 AM · On: Sonnet

this is funny. love it!

Reviewer: Chuckles (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 08:50 PM · On: Detective

Great story! I like how it doesn't seem all out of character, like a lot of stories do. I am a bit confused about the last chapter though. At the end, Jacob told Bella he wanted to skip the waiting a few years part, but there wasn't anything about that in this chapter. Like I said, just a little bit confusing. Anyway, thanks for the awesome story! 

Reviewer: basaltone (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 09:20 PM · On: Epilogue

Thanks I enjoyed it, I look forward to the sequel.

Reviewer: MelanieBlack2014 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 04:55 PM · On: Monk

I couldnt stop laughing. I loved it, ur amazing u kno? The way u portray the characters. WOW it was awseome!

Reviewer: angel 057 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 12:59 AM · On: Nothing

OOh chapter 2 was good too. and what a way to end it with a cliff hanger.  well on to chapter 3

Reviewer: angel 057 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 12:41 AM · On: Rain drops

I think the first chater was very good and l liked how Bella made the first move.

angel 057

Reviewer: Wondabug (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 04:12 AM · On: Rain drops

Oh my goodness! I love that you are so unique! "Jake was not Paris". That was brilliant. You can't compare them and I hate it when peoplr do and just make Paris seem like the guy that should have been given a chance. So thank you, miss, I now love you. Man, the teeth clacking and the missing blue clothes was genius too! I really enjoy the little details you add in, they are gorgeous. *sigh* I wish you had no life so you could just write all day and have stories for me to read at my leisure...

Reviewer: pheebs33 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 03:29 AM · On: Epilogue

Good job!! Excellent story.

Reviewer: JBC719 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 01:24 PM · On: Talk

Loved this chapter from Jacob's POV. And I'm still loving this story. You've done a great job with this!

Reviewer: JBC719 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 12:57 PM · On: Sonnet

I really like the mood you've got going on here. Feels right somehow. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: JBC719 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 12:23 AM · On: Nothing

Oooo...I really liked that! Well done! Love the idea of the one way conversation!

Reviewer: doodliedoo21 (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2010 12:58 AM · On: Detective

Haha Charlie and Billy are like two old gossiping women. 

Reviewer: doodliedoo21 (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2010 12:15 AM · On: Bus

shrieking bus hahahahahahahaaaaa

Reviewer: doodliedoo21 (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2010 11:51 PM · On: Nothing

That was such a weird phone conversation but she needed the closer. I could really see her doing that too. 

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