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Reviewer: twilightie04 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 5

oh wow, i was so confused when i first started reading this.. for like 2.3 seconds i thought maybe it was jacob she started talking to but then it said edward and i was oh ok but then the gun and all that other stuff happened and i was like no way seriously hes not a good person.. but as i kept reading the more i got into it and i love it so much he is sucha sweet heart totally helping her with her cramp and being all mr wonderful... i really wanna know what happens after this.. i cant wait :)

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 5

I just read through the story and please please I need more

Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 5

Just wondering when you might be updating again?

Reviewer: BabyBlues (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 5

I love all your stories - you definitely have a gift!!
I really love "Nice Catch", as it's the best written "Bella has a child after Edward leaves, and they meet up later" stories out there. Despite the a bit overused storyline, it's really unique written and special. This story however, is very unique, I haven't read any like this -- and I love it!! Hope you'll start to update your stories much more often!!

Reviewer: katie29 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 5

Hi!

 

I just wanted to say that I am completely hooked on your story. Your portrayal of Edward and Bella make them seem so real, I feel so bad for Edward! Also, your plot is so different and refreshing to other fanfics I have read lately. It is so sweet how they are slowly building a sense of trust between each other, I am already anticipating the wonderful moment when they share their first kiss:-) 

 

Please update soon!

 

 

Reviewer: Alotalittle (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 5

I just found this story and I love it!
Screwed is right! How Jailward is going to get out of this pickle is a complete mystery, but I sure hope he does. The best parts of Bella's character were always her sincerity and bravery, qualities she has in abundance in this story. And Edward has got to be the nicest and sexiest escapee on record, it really makes you root for these two. Cool story, but pretty stressful.

Reviewer: Twilightedaddict (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 5

I really like this story!  I love that you kept the danger aspect alive even though Edward's human by making him an escaped convict.  I also love that you've made him so emotional and vulnerable.

Loved this last scene in the ocean-- it was very sweet and intimate without jumping into something hot and heavy right away.

look forward to your update!

Reviewer: ale_ap (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 5

I can't stop thinking about this fic. Please update soon! I'm dying to see what's going to happen between Edward and Bella!!

Reviewer: Joanna (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 5

Fantastic idea for story. Edward is sweet and i really hope that he is innocent. I love it and can't whate to see what will be next, and who is the killer?

Reviewer: llg5437 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 5

I really like this story.. it's sweet, in its own bittersweet-ish way. Poor Edward :(

Reviewer: KRYork (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 3

O.k still reading. And it’s almost funny at times. You know the whole teacher homework assignment and excuses thing. And Edward just seems so tiered!

 

K~

Reviewer: KRYork (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 2

I like it … and I’m still reading!

Reviewer: KRYork (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 09:12 AM · On: Bella - Day One

Interesting, Is this like a fugitive Dr. Cullen mistaken identity killed his wife when it was really the one armed man?

Reviewer: msclark2008 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 5

Great chapter.

Reviewer: drkvctry (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 5

i think i love this story so much...that is what i think

!!!!

;)

 

Reviewer: sammygirlxo (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 08:47 AM · On: Bella - Day One

This is officially a favorite of mine. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: iblong2edwardcullen (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 5

Oh.My.God. i absolutely loved this chapter. My heaert is  beatin gout of my chest right now.

 

Really.

 

Can't wait for the next update.

 

Stacy

Reviewer: Angelinasway (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 5

This is incredible. I love it!

Reviewer: SALTIRE884 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 5

Another great chapter, really loving this story and your doing a reat job writing it.  Everything was slow and easy here but you could feel the underlying current between them as they lowered their walls and trusted each other.  Although I believe Edward has trusted her for a while, he's a sap like that.lol

The swim was just gah, it must have been the first normal activity and conversation poor E has had in a while, you could basically feel the happiness roll off him.

Him taking care of her and rubbing her sides while floating with her, how innocent yet yummy and tingly at the same time.  He's totally into her.*sings* He wants to hug her... He wants to love her... He wants to hug her... He wants to smooch her.

Another home run, I really don't know why I keep using sport analogies as I don't know anything about sport. But good work champ, home run, golf clap, you knocked it out the park and all that cheesy goodness.  Looking forward to the next chapter and stop stressing about the time it takes to get out, people would rather the chapter have merit than just a super fast update and if they don't they are idiots.

Reviewer: dena82484 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 5

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 5

I just started reading this today, but I'm liking it a lot..How could she not be taken in by Edward???

Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 5

Holy crap, waiting for this story to update honestly paid off. I'm so in love with this chapter, it was amazing. This is my new favorite story and you're doing a marvelous job writing it.

Reviewer: Kirbs (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 5

Ah beautiful chapter, i love Edward's vulnerability, and his phone conversation was very touching!. Next time i wake up screaming from leg cramp i want an Edward to massge it away whilst holding me....... Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: MichelleLeah (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 5

This is amazing.

Reviewer: wowza (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 5

Awesome kiss. And it wasn't even on the mouth! LOL

Great, lengthy chappie =)

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