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Reviewer: KimiD (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 07:51 PM · On: One Shot

The old adage "Always Leave them Wanting More" would work really, REALLY good about here!! That is not at all fair! You need to make this more than a o/s You could really take this story somewhere with very little effort... I have a million questions, why was he headed for her floor, who is her roommate, is he somehow related to said roommate, i.e. Alice or Jasper... So many questions and only YOU can answer them. LOL I really love this as a starter but i think it would do much better as a main course. Ever thought about making it a real story?? Hmmmm? Would love to read if you do. KimiD

Reviewer: doggie (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 06:10 AM · On: One Shot

what a wicked way to end that... :( was still fun to read

Reviewer: vampire-25-princess (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 08:04 PM · On: One Shot

haha, nice. very amusing. I'll bet it was Aro. or make it a two-shot, and make it be alice or rosalie or someone and the next one could be a three way. hahaha.

Reviewer: Jadeite (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 11:43 AM · On: One Shot

That was so fun! Thank you

Reviewer: Spoiledash3139 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 08:30 AM · On: One Shot

I loved it!!!

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 02:27 PM · On: One Shot

Uh oh! Caught in the act, lol. That was very hot. I'd love to be stuck in an elevator with Edward, too.

xoxo Sarah

Author's Response:
It would be amazing :)

Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Lyxa (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 02:04 PM · On: One Shot

haha, not bad :D not bad at all

xoxoxo

lyxa

Author's Response:
Thanks :)

Reviewer: Zara Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 11:12 AM · On: One Shot

hot story....but how did Bella know his name???

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for pointing that out :) i feel like an idiot now lol

Reviewer: uscfbfan (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 08:21 AM · On: One Shot

It was fantastic - great one shot - if only I was stuck in an elevator with an insanely hot guy.

Author's Response:
i would love it :)

Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 07:53 AM · On: One Shot

LOVE IT!!!MORE PLEASE!!!!

Author's Response:
I wish :) Edward in an elevator is hot!!

Reviewer: kaylee_bella (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 05:36 AM · On: One Shot

I really liked this but the cliff hanger is a killer.

Reviewer: kaylee_bella (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 05:33 AM · On: One Shot

I really liked this but the cliff hanger is a killer.

Reviewer: kaylee_bella (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 05:29 AM · On: One Shot

I really liked this but the cliff hanger is a killer.

Author's Response:
:) that's what i was planning on :)

i'm evil that way :)

Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 09:38 PM · On: One Shot

That was really good very hot great job

Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 08:06 PM · On: One Shot

That was hot, and they just got caught! *blush* Of course... I wish it was me. *grin*

Author's Response:
Doesn't everyone :)

thanks for taking the time out to review :)

Reviewer: bonou2suz (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 07:49 PM · On: One Shot

I've been stuck in an elevator before, but it certainly wasn't that hot, haha!

Author's Response:
All i know is that if I ever do get stuck in one, i hope that i meet edward cullen ;)

thanks for your review

Reviewer: eddiejazz (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 07:43 PM · On: One Shot

that was soo cute. i loved it.

Author's Response:
Thanks for your review :)

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