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Reviewer: YxControl (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 1 - One Shot
Awww, this was really good, and definitely deserves more reviews. I love the details also. Very well written. :)
Author's Response: thanks a lot! :] you fed my ego and my greediness for reviews!
i'm glad you enjoyed! :)
Reviewer: Dustyrose0394 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 1 - One Shot
OMFG! This is amazing! If fanfiction.net hadn't died I probably wouldn't have gotten round to reading this for another few days, but I'm glad I did, 'cus this was fucking awesome! It's definitley going on my favourites.
You used amazing detail, I actually felt that I was there it was so good. And Edward was so brave as well as his soldiers, its sad that things like that even happened.
I was so sad when Edward went crazy at the end :( But I am glad that Carlisle bit him :)
You said this was coursework?? What did you get for this? It better have been good because it you deserve it :D
- Charlotte
p.s I did write a better review, but then twilighted logged me out so I had to remember what I had written... which I couldn't very much :P
Author's Response: Thank youuu!!!! :D I love getting reviews out of the blue and this sure was one!
I'm so glad that you liked it 'cause I spent sooo much effort changing it from coursework into something usuable for fanfic....
I'm gunna do a continuation...Edward won't be crazy, it was the pills making him go crazy.
Ahyway, thanks again.
- Bethan x
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 1 - One Shot
oh.....woooow. i must sat Bit.....
I LOVED IT!!
omgeesh!! i absolutely love your wrighting! AH! words cannot explain.....wow.
great job Bit!!
Author's Response: thank you soooo much! I really love that review! You spelt write wrong and said it wright and that's my surname so that kinda made me smile! :D
Reviewer: Halawia (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 1 - One Shot
Wow, very descriptive, I literally felt like I was there with him. And talking about the different kinds of love, that was done really well.
The end was my favorite. The part with the pills and Carlisle's comment about going to need them. Brilliant woman.
I really enjoyed it!
xx
hal
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, I really appreciate every review I get. They help me to become a better writer, so thank you! :D
love, bitten
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 1 - One Shot
Wow! That was fantastic...I am in awe of your writing abilities..Keep at it. I hope you got an A!!
Author's Response: Thank you thank you thank you thank you. I will deffinatly keep writing :D I write for different fandoms and hope to start writing original fics soon :D
I did get an A*, it's the highest grade so I was so happy!
Reviewer: tigerwriter (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 1 - One Shot
Omg, omg, omg. This is so totally amazing! I love, love, love it! You write so well, and the story's so good and I like that you've changed it into a Twilight fanfiction, it's done very well! Nice work! You're awesome.
Love,
~tiger
(p.s. I'll review this properly when I've actually read the story...)
Reviewer: XxBlue-Eyed-BellaxX (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 1 - One Shot
I loved it.
This is the second or third time I've read this and it just keeps on getting better.
The way you descripe things has me begging for more!
I don't what else to say other than, you're very talented and I'm very proud of you.
Ruthanna
Author's Response: Did you know that you just made me cry?
Thank you very much, I can't wait for T&T to get validated so I can read that and leave a so-cute-it-makes-ruthanna-want-to-cry review :D
Reviewer: stareyed_in_LA (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 1 - One Shot
This is really good. I like how you described the horrors that Masen faced, both in the real world and in his dream state.
Please write a follow up to this, I beg of you.
Author's Response: Thanks :D Ideas have been running through my mind for weeks! I think that I kinda have to continue it to be honest. It won't leave me alone until I do!
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