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Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 2
the way you wrote this story made it feel kinda real......poor Bella......how does someone deal with that kind of pain and experience??........I hope Edward comes back for Bella but i hope she makes him pay for how he left......this version seems more realistic (except for the vampires....lol)......Great story!!!!
Author's Response: Aww, yeah, that's what I was going for. Thanks very much.
Reviewer: krjemb (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 6 (V)
Lauren was way over the top. Telling Bella to kill herself or saying she would do it.
Author's Response: Yeah, well, I wanted her to be a huge bitch. Like UBER-huge.
There's a reason for everything.....
Reviewer: sis_is_me (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 13 (V)
Yeah a new chapter!!!! Excellent, Please keep going
Author's Response: Thank you! And I will keep going, I won't abandon ship I promise :)
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 13 (V)
love it.
Author's Response: That's really good to hear. Thank you.
Reviewer: bethc_88 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 12 (V)
Hey there - I was just rereading and was wondering if we will see other chapters of this sometime?
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 12 (V)
I cant wait for the rest, and good luck with it
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 10 (V)
NICE this is a story i have been itching to write where Bella blows up at him, he so deserves it. Good work
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 9 (V)
I am so loving your music choices.. specially Move Alonge it fit the chapter so well. Its my personal anthem for my recent changes in life and it just fits too. Congrats
Reviewer: sis_is_me (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 12 (V)
This is a good story. Update soon.
Reviewer: sis_is_me (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 12 (V)
This is really goo. Please continue
Reviewer: 1greekgirl (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 12 (V)
once again you rock I'm loving this story so much is all I can say is keep up the good work and please keep it coming and please oh please let bells forgive ed at some point but your right he does need to suffer lol :)
Reviewer: veronicamodd (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 12 (V)
ok i am ready for her and Edward to make up now...:)
wow Rose ( and by that I mean you ) is deep!
Reviewer: Whispering_Willow (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 12 (V)
AnnaSophia Robb - Keep Your Mind Wide Open. I think would almost fit this chapter. I couldn't think of anything else but her song here are some of the lyrics
Think of all the days you've wasted
Worrying, wondering
Hopelessly hoping
Think of all the time ahead
Don't hesitate, contemplate
No it's not too late
Have you ever wanted more?
Wanted more?
Don't you know there's so much more
You've got to keep your mind wide open
All the possibilities
You've got to live with your eyes open
Believe in what you see
Tomorrows horizons full of surprises
Don't let them take your dreams away
This is the song that came to my mind when I read this chapter.
I absolutely love this story it's so wonderful and interesting. I can hardly wait for an update =D
Reviewer: mrsalreyami (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 8 (V)
I loved the POVs in this chapter. You nailed Rosalie - so worried about everyone else, but yet it's still all about her. LOL Carlisle's was so sweet as well.
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 12 (V)
love it.
Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 12 (V)
okay, why is your nickname fifi? really, why? and this was a great chapter.
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 12 (V)
another great chapter - i have never like rose - but she is sweet in story - i hope bella forgives edward soon before he has a vampiric breakdown
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 12 (V)
ahh Edward, Edward, Edward... you really need to actually pay attention to all those people you mindread - you'd manage to learn the questions and answers and chit chat that you need to deal with Bella, I think hehe
Looking forward to how things unfold next :)
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 12 (V)
;looking forward to more
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 12 (V)
it was okay
kind of boring
well until next time
Author's Response: Yeah, well, sorry. But oh well, I told you it would be in the notes.
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 12 (V)
it was okay
kind of boring
well until next time
Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 12 (V)
Good story. Sort of a slow chapter but they're always necessary. I hope Bella kicks Edwards butt and then forgives him. I hate when she folds for him. Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 12 (V)
nice
Reviewer: Roonie (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 11 (V)
Loved the Alice/Bella moments in this one.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 12 (V)
Awwwwww Edward/Carlisle and Bella/Rose time was so heart touching...have tears in my eyes
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