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Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 9 (V)
Excellent chapter ... I really want to hear Carlisle and Edward's silent conversation ... oh, and what Emmett and Esme have to say ... pleeeeease.
Good luck with school!
Reviewer: Team Edward Girl (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 9 (V)
Love it Do More!!!!!!
Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 9 (V)
“Finally, Assward.” ok that one kinda caught me off guard, not feeling it was coming from Alice's character, alittle too hokey
but I am completely enthralled with the story! And loving every minute of it! More please :)
*PS: I hope Bella is not too hard on Edward, he really was leaving for her, as I know you know
Author's Response: Well, Alice was in a pissy mood. The truck thing had her pretty angry.
And Edward won't get treated horribly, but he won't be a happy camper either.
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 9 (V)
I think Carlisle is more disappointed in Assward now than when he went off his vegitarian diet and killed all those people the last time he left. Of course he wouldn't be Carlisle if he didn't forgive him. You really got Alice and Emmett. I can't wait for Bella to wake up. Don't let her to TOO easy on Edward.
Author's Response: Ahahahaaha trust me. He won't know what hit him.
Reviewer: bethc_88 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 9 (V)
You know, writing more of your wonderful chapters could be a great study break for you... Im just saying... and I work in a University in a building with over 400 students... I know a thing or 2 about needing study breaks! LOL! Keep up the great work - I'm glad *cough*Assward*cough*... um, I mean EDward... is home and I'm hoping that Bella will make him work for it in terms of getting her back... I'll be watching for more!
Author's Response: Ahahhahhaha glad ya like it!! :) I'm very impressed with how fast this chapter was up-- less than 2 hours!! So I'll try to squeeze in a few more over the next couple days.
Reviewer: veronicamodd (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 8 (V)
please update soon !!!
Author's Response: Woooooaaaah, I'm guessing you want me to update soon! Lol thanks. Yeah, chapter 9's gonna be up very soon.
Reviewer: veronicamodd (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 8 (V)
please update soon !!!
Reviewer: veronicamodd (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 8 (V)
please update soon !!!
Reviewer: veronicamodd (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 8 (V)
please update soon !!!
Reviewer: veronicamodd (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 8 (V)
please update soon !!!
Reviewer: sis_is_me (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 8 (V)
This is very good. Please write more soon.
Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 8 (V)
i loved all the POVS
but I HATED that you left it off like that....I wish you would say whether Carlisle bites her or not! PLEASEEE!!!
Reviewer: Fantastico (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 8 (V)
Honestly? This is THE best twilight story EVER. Theres only 8 chapters so far and I love it! I have laughed, 'awwed', gasped and had my eyes open so wide, my sister thought I was being hypnotised or summat. Please update soon!
But btw, in twilight stoies, when Edward re-unites with Bella, its always the same ' yay hes here we're in love again' or 'omg how dare he come back i hate him i love him oh no im dying i love him'. So pleaseee try and do something different when it comes to that bit! However, I think I will love it anyway as you rule at writing this!
Author's Response: Wow. Really? That's a crazy compliment! Thank you SOOOOO much, that really makes my day :) And don't worry about Edward. I have plans for him. Mwahhahahahaa.
Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 8 (V)
i loved all the POV's... that was an evil cliffie!
Reviewer: darkangel1 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 8 (V)
please write more it's really good!
Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 8 (V)
you're not terribly good with cliffies. hes going to change her. edward is going to freak, of course, but carlisle will change her.
Author's Response: Uh duh. Like I said, it's not THAT kind of cliffie. Read the chapter notes.
Also, comments on the story itself are appreciated. Thank you.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 8 (V)
oh my oh my oh my!!!!!
that was so suddent! and now Bella changes, for the better??
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 8 (V)
Poor Rose, she's almost sweet. Okay girlie, work your magic and post soon. Pretty please with Rob Pattinson on top??
Author's Response: Ooh, with Rob on top? Yummmmmm. LOL Yeah, I"ll post asap don't worry.
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 7 (V)
I loved this chapter and since I'm just starting this story, I don't mind the evil cliffie, because in just a few seconds...I get to click 'back to story' Hee Hee!
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 6 (V)
Bella punched Lauren!! It's about damn time, someone needed to do it!
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 5
Emmett is the best! I love that vampire.
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 4
You're right, that's exactly what Esme .... or any mother would have done.
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 3
Love it and I think you're right. The Cullens wouldn't have left Bella in favor of Edward's rant.
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 8 (V)
i like it
Reviewer: miss-moon123 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 8 (V)
please update soon..:)
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