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Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 10
Emmett gives the best advice.
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 7
Bella gets the guy and the story!!!
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 6
Great way to get Bella and Edward together without them revealing thier relationship to other.
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 5
SwimWard is pretty cool. Bella had no idea what she is getting herself into.
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 4
I like the fact that more than one author is writing this story. I can see a diffence in the writing styles. It keeps things fresh. Still reading.
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 3
You could not get me to walk out of the house in a Bikini during a blind date. I am trying to suspend my disbelief...It is really hard. I just love this story.
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 2
Great use of characters Tyler and Jacob. I don't think Jacob is a spanish name...I can always be wrong. I dig this story.
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 1
I just started getting to my reading list. I am enjoying this human story.
Reviewer: lulu123 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 21
aaaaaaaah!! i don't think i've read a story that i've loved so much! actually i was starting to get a little bored with au cause i'd not read any stories that really caught my intrest, but this was just wow!!
i loved every single chapter and the epilouge was so well done, it told you everything you wanted to know, but it was just an annoying list of what had happened!
loved it, and i'm off to read more stories from the both of you!! =D
Reviewer: sjs2672 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 3
As an out and proud Star Wars nerd, I have to say - I loved your scene. :)
Reviewer: fr33bird (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 1
fabulous story - I've just read it all in 24 hours - couldn't stop :)
great story, great writing!
Reviewer: WriteMeALullaby (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 11
Still going strong, love your story! :D
Reviewer: WriteMeALullaby (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 1
I like your plot, and you're a really good writer. Keep going, I'd love to see more!
Reviewer: Sindia (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 21
I really really loved the story !
have you thaught about writing a sequal?
Because it seems this story is like twilight and new moon, but then we totally miss eclipse and you jump to the ending of breaking dawn ( i know thats what epilogues do ^^ jump ahead to the end ^^ ).
I know it sounds sort of weird but i would love to read more that has to do with story. Sort of where chapter 20 left of.
Well anyway LOVED IT !!
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 21
I've always said of myself that I'm a waterbaby, frozen or liquid, I just need water. It made me smile so big to see that you guys did the same thing for EC's legacy! So perfect! I've had the best time reading your story. I thank-you both from the bottom of my heart for perservering to share it with us!!! It couldn't have been better written for me! What could possibly be better than our sexy Edward as Michael Phelps!!! Absolutely NOTHING!!! LOL :D
I hope the pregnancy ended well, and that you're feeling back to your normal self!!!
Reviewer: cristynd (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 21
So sweet, so good. I'll miss this story. Good epi.
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 7
I'm still getting the biggest hoot out of your choice to make Rob P. the manager!!! Could only have been better if you'd made Michael P. the manager instead! Ha! (Your choice is certainly better on the eyes, even internal ones!!!) :D
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 4
lmao rotf!!!! Jessica Rabbit!!! *whipes tears from eyes*
I was so intruiged to see what who you'd have the sexy reporter be (name wise) and would never have guessed in a million years you'd go for Rabbit as a surname to Jessica! Ha! Cartoon curves and all!! lol Couldn't have been more perfect. I'm still giggling thinking of it! Loving how the rest of the day went too!!! *wiggles eyebrows* teehee
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 1
Can I just say, fabulous premise!!!! Having started swimteam at age four and then half my life as a lifeguard/instructor, you found my sweet spot baby!!! :D
Even if the subject matter hadn't sucked me in, this first chapter would have more than done the job. I haven't been this excited to read a ff in quite some time!
Thanks for writing!
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 21
Really great story; I even cried!
Reviewer: Theresa Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 21
THIS WAS AN AMAZING STORY i laughed cried squeaked giggled and awed and oohed and i even oggled, lol. you did an amazing job!! THANKYOU!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Reviewer: laleangel (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 21
I absolutley loved this story, you both should be very pleased with yourselves. Brilliantly written and I'm very glad that Edward went for the 6th medal. When he was still making up his mind I was screaming at my computer that he had to win. :)
Again great work and I hope everything is Ok with the baby.
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 21
AWW!!!
I'm incredibly happy for Bella to get her happy ending.
Reviewer: gaspingforair (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 21
Amazing as always.
I will be praying for me and her babys health.
Reviewer: kitkatkatie (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 21
That was soooo great it was so touching!!!!
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