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Reviewer: sah11679 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 14
Wow! That is a very hot chapter there! I loooooved it!
Reviewer: cherromate23 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 14
Nooooo you cant leave off here morreeee..lol
Reviewer: ams (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 14
Whooo! That was a hot chapter! You have crafted such a beautiful relationship for them, innocent and sweet, but steamy too.
Reviewer: ekimmuh (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 14
Edward was just too cute in this chapter. I loved how he was all nervous about asking Bella to spend the night with him. The kissing was...hot. Nice job. I loved how he had the tats sort of hidden in various areas of his body. And I thought it was VERY bold of Bella to do what she did there at the end, but very sexy as well.
Reviewer: espeinaz (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 14
Tattoo licking=AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Elizabeth (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 14
aw that was hot and sweet all rolled into one. update soon please
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 14
Oh.WOW! Great chapter, and that ending was incredibly HOT, even though nothing really happened in that way. Lovin' it! :)
~Cat~
Reviewer: Chiefco34 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 14
The tattoo thing was absolutely brilliant! What a great way for her to "sort of" seduce him. And a great way to see parts of him that most people don't get to see. *wink* Loved it! Thanks for posting. :)
Reviewer: WinniePony (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 14
Lol! Edward has a cat tattoo... That's hilarious. Oh and equestrienne isn't a word, it's equestrian. But kudos for a good chapter. =D Write more soon.
Reviewer: gordonfan74 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 14
Ooh baby! That was way hot and they didn't even really see any action, per se. Now I am generally not a fan of tatoos, but I have a new respect for the fine art of painted skin. Especially Edward Cullen's hips and thigh. Good Lord! The chapter was awesome, obviously. Edward's nervousness over asking Bella to go to his room was so endearing. He is kind of like a 15 year old boy in the girl department. I guess he doesn't have much experience with anything other than swimming. I find it very sweet that he respects her virtue as well. That inner frat boy is a horn dog you know, so maintaining some semblance of control is rather difficult. It makes me a little nervous that he is still somewhat jumpy over her chosen profession. I have a sneaking suspicion that there may lie ahead some angst involving her article and their budding relationship. Also, what happens when the Olympics come to a close? I can not wait to find out. You continue to do an amazing job with this piece. The plot is very unique and you have maintained the integrity of the story and the characters throughout. I appreciate all of your hard work and can not wait for another update. Take care of yourself.
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 14
Gah! Cockblock! Lol. I'm so happy you updated--Going for the Gold is one of my faves. :)
Reviewer: helena_handbasket (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 14
*whimper* Nnnnggggghhhhh. Oh heavens. Edward Cullen with ink. Fuck me. I had to give my Edward some, too. Had to Grohl him up a bit. ;)
Reviewer: EVEntide (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 14
That was really awesome! I'm glad they are still pushing forward. YAY!!! :] It would be cool if they could go back to the swimming lessons, or if Edward turned on his gentleman charms.
Reviewer: Vullen (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 14
hot.
Reviewer: emm (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 14
Swoon.
Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 14
That was amazingly hot for being so...well not exactly innocent...but still..whoa. This is a fanstastic chapter, I can't wait to read more! Keep up the fantastic writing. *eyes Edward* I might steal him if he isn't too careful....lol Jace
Reviewer: Lady Saffir (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 14
*snicker* I bet Edward thinks about Bella's statement every time he sees the ring tattoo now. Can't wait for more. :)
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 14
Steamy! I'm fanning myself. Bella can really flirt! I don't blame her for licking that tatoo--yum! Anyway, nice job.
Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 14
HOT HOT HOT!!!!!
Reviewer: yourbrandofheroin (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 14
I loved it! It was amazing!!
Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 14
So excited about the update...already ready for the next one! I really liked this chapter. I'm excited to see what happens next!
Reviewer: natlee (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 14
Thank you so much for updating! I've been waiting for this one for a while. I really like the direction the story is going. Hope to see more ExB action :P
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 14
Wow, they both seem to have pretty good self control.
Reviewer: sedrax (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 14
wow. Hott, cute and sweet all at the same time! he's so adorable when he gets all insecure! loved it!
Reviewer: jdsk (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 14
Oh. My. Edward. No she didn't! That was incredibly hot! Bravo! Bravo!
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