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Reviewer: helenareject (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2011 01:44 PM · On: Before the Change
Sexy!!!!!!
Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 10:43 PM · On: Before the Change
Very nice :P I had two non-happy thoughts running through my mind before the smexy lemonisciousness though :(
The first was: She was just injured, wouldn't the venom heal her hymen...? I mean I understand after like a week the hymen heals naturally and changed then it stays that way, but right after this it would probably just return to the way it was... and even if not, it can take a few.. 'couplings' to completely get rid of it
the second was: how was edward so accepting of this? heh. little writer's creativity there (not complaining about that! mm lemons
Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 05:47 PM · On: Before the Change
ssshhiitttt.*peeks towards couch to confirm hubby sound asleep*...fist pump!
umm..yeah..need to sneak off for "alone" time. several times.
Reviewer: effie21 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Before the Change
Wow. that was good, wish ther was more.
Reviewer: chris44 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 12:59 AM · On: Before the Change
Very HOT!!
Reviewer: citronpresse52 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 02:58 PM · On: Before the Change
Added to my favorites list. Seeing that is it is exactly the third entry, I have to say that this piece was very well done. My husband will thank you, later tonight.
Reviewer: citronpresse52 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 02:56 PM · On: Before the Change
Added to my favorites list. Seeing that is it is exactly the third entry, I have to say that this piece was very well done. My husband will thank you, later tonight.
Reviewer: soapladyjen (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 12:25 PM · On: Before the Change
Wow! That was great! Who needs Isle Esme??
Reviewer: Loves to read (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 06:32 AM · On: Before the Change
Wow! This was completely yummy! Fantastic! Got more like it?
Reviewer: koolchick262003 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 05:29 PM · On: Before the Change
:))
Reviewer: Blissfulstarlet (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Before the Change
yep...that was awesomeness! ;-)
Reviewer: angel 057 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Before the Change
Very interesting. Never thought of it from that point of view before. I was glad to see that it was well thought out and explored. That was totally hot!!
angel 057
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Reviewer: Sattinson (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 11:34 PM · On: Before the Change
One of the best lemony one-shots ever!!!!!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Before the Change
HOT!
Reviewer: vamp1975 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Before the Change
Very enjoyable
Reviewer: nautical (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Before the Change
I know you said it was a one-shot, but I am dying to find out how the change went with Carlisle being the one in the driver's seat.
Reviewer: fabulous face (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Before the Change
you want some constructive criticism? Do chapter 2!
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Before the Change
IT WAS SOOO HOT.. I'M SPEECHLESS
Author's Response: Thanks!!
Reviewer: QTCurls (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Before the Change
This was definitly HOT!! I loved this, soooo keep it coming! *haha*
I loved "Just One Day" Please write more! I like that you keep them vampires, and the multiple pairings but still keeping Edward and Bella together!
Oh and i'm an Outlander Fan also!
:)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! New chapter of JOD is up now. I'm happy you like the all-vamp thing. I do too -- couldn't ever get into the AH stories. Are you excited for the new Outlander book coming out next month? Woo hoo!! An Echo in the Bone.
Reviewer: colasmom (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Before the Change
Oh My Goodness! That was so good! I think it might be time to go wake the hubby!!
hehehehe
Author's Response: Tell him I said "you're welcome".
;)
Reviewer: fabulous face (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Before the Change
Excellent!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Reviewer: fabulous face (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Before the Change
Excellent!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 10:01 AM · On: Before the Change
The whole virgin for eternity thing was original, I never even thought of that. I love how tormented Edward was about it, it makes it hotter.
Author's Response: Thanks!! :)
Reviewer: cbj (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Before the Change
I was sure it was the single sexiest thing I had ever, or would ever experience, just about sums it up.....
Author's Response:
*blush*
Thanks! :)
Reviewer: twinklyspecialkag (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Before the Change
That was great...you are very good at writing smut!! Make sure you let us know when youve writtens somthing with your own characters!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I will.
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