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Reviewer: leslieljs713 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 15- Reunion
What a chapter! Great to have Edward back. Can't wait to see his reaction to her pregnancy, but then again, since he knows her so well, he probably already knows. lol
Reviewer: Autumnltd (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 15- Reunion
Once again - If I did not have a Blackberry to read the updates on this story, I would have to staple my laptop to my head... Cannot wait for the next "Gangward" fix...
Reviewer: dracorium (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 14- Family
Who could resist a naked gangward? I mean really now.....
Reviewer: stephk0525 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 14- Family
Lee - I clicked on your story and was completely wowed! Love the plot! You have thrown so many curve balls at us, but the story is awesome. Very suspenseful!
Thanks for the warning of the rape scene. I thought it was extremely well written given the subject content.
I am so looking forward to what you have in store Edward & Bella!
I'll see ya over on the thread now that I am up to speed w/your wonderful story!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 14- Family
Eeeeeek! Edward? Really?! Aww. Is it real? Is Bella really pregnant? All of these questions and no little 'next' button to answer them...Great chapter hon! I love Alice
Reviewer: colourguardqueen (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 14- Family
i wonder if she will tell him that she is pregnant. but at least they are together again. please update soon i love this story.
Reviewer: jenidig (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 14- Family
Oh my freak. That was great. This story is great. Freaking amazing.
I love the characters. Their feelings are so raw. I almost picture- in the future- Bella saying she will kill herself if they try to kill Edward. Don;t judge me. I'm probably way off.
Edward is so damn confusing. And that one chapter- right after she was the one dominating him- I was so confused. But then I realized we hadn't known what she was thinking the whole time.
Was Miss Sarah kidding when she was talking about being a mind reader? Lol.
Hmmm. I wonder...what happened with Rosalie?
This story is great and I hope it never ends :D
[childish, i know ;D]
Reviewer: MathGoddess (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 14- Family
FINALLY I'M ABLE TO REVIEW! Yay.
The story has been absa-fucking-lutely BRILLIANT over the past few chapters, if you'll pardon my French. :P
I really loved Alice in this. And I enjoyed reading this chapter a lot.
So. :D
Love,
Kat.
PS- Yes, I want naked Gangward. What sort of question is THAT? ;D
Reviewer: GreenPuma (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 14- Family
Um, definitely want naked Gangward! What a great chapter. Bella is preggers! I didn't see it coming...great chappie!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 14- Family
yay!!! im so excited that edward is back!! update soon please!!!
Reviewer: Kairi J (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 14- Family
I was really hesitant to read this one. It helps me to think that the twilight bella and edward and the gangsta bella and edward are two sets of completely different fictional beings. The only similarity being that I love them both. A story is only ever a story (in my opinion) if you remember it. In this one, I recall it throughout the day, and I can't wait to hear more.
I know you have a life, but I don't, so if you could please post sooner rather than later, it would be much obliged. :)
Reviewer: lmjohn (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 14- Family
I have become addicted to your story. A very different twist on Edward that what I'm used to and I think it's great! I can't wait for more
Reviewer: BethyBoo (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 14- Family
Very nice ending on this chapter! Very good job!
Reviewer: sierra (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 14- Family
omg that was awezom post more soon
Reviewer: KTCullen (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 14- Family
WHAT??? You can't leave it there, you evil, evil person!!
I just started this story this morning, and I LOVE it! Although every time some questions are answered, I'm left with several more. The sign of a good thriller!
Now hurry up with this next chapter...I can't wait for the reunion lemon......there will be reunion lovin', right???? I love me some tender Thugward!
Reviewer: SnowWhiteQueen (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 14- Family
naked gangward!!! woooo!!
Reviewer: spanglemaker (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 14- Family
Christ, is she really pregnant? That's going to be complicated. Although I can't say it's surprising since they made no attempt not to be. Hmmm, this will be ahrd enough for just the two of them and now they'll have a baby?
Can't wait for the next chapter and the reunion. Her dream was hot, btw.
Reviewer: JessHansen (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 14- Family
You are an evil evil woman, you know that? STILL don't know what he said! Are we going to find out soon or are you going to keep this tasty snippet of information locked away until the bitter end?? I swear you're just doing it to drive me nuts! I should move to the States just to kick your ass for this, hehe!
Seriously though, good characterisation of Alice. I like that she's not too OTT like you find in some stories. Oh, and how can I forogt, YAY EDWARDS BACK. I missed the bastard. Certainly playing the pregnant card will continue to make this interesting.
One more thing, is it still called Stockholm Syndrome (which incidentally, is one of my favourite songs... not that that's relevant) if the captor falls for the captive? Or does it have another name? Is there a name at all?
Ok I know I'm going on a bit now but I have been wanting to recommend this song for AGES. Like since I first discovered Twilight and all the wonderful things that came along with it. And I feel some the lyrics kind of fit with parts of this story. And its pretty. And yeah. It's called 'No Ordinary Thing' by Opshop. You can find it on youtube pretty easy. So I know you get heaps of reviews and prob a few recommendations all over the place but PLEASE listen to this one! You won't regret it!
Ciao for now :)
Reviewer: Corinab (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 14- Family
Oh my that was amazing. It's so different. I love it. Please update soon.
Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 14- Family
YAY for another great chapter! As always this is great, the story is great. I'm so happy Edward is there. I think you wrote Alice perfectly.
I can't wait for their upcoming conversation. Do we get to find out what Edward said? Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!
Reviewer: Kris Butter (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 14- Family
oh good Lord in heaven, how you did the dream was absolutely perfect. bravo(:
Reviewer: cgrbuddon (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 14- Family
Love it, please continue!!
Reviewer: llg5437 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 14- Family
Thanks for updating. I really, really like this story!
Reviewer: laylieb (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 14- Family
OMG!!! So glad that Edward showed up!!!! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!
Reviewer: caylab12 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 14- Family
Since when did she find out she was pregnant? Am I missing something? Oh and I most definantly want some naked Gangward!
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