Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2014 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 1- Imprisonment
Great start to the story! I can't wait to read on!
Reviewer: DianaLily (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2014 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 1- Imprisonment
I really enjoyed this. However, I wish that Edward had a more defined character at the end. Bella made him give up his gangster life and there wasn't all that much left.
Reviewer: curl_ninii21 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2014 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 20- Of Forever Afters
Noooooo!! that can NOT be the end come on you can't leave it like that!!.. lol Why don't you keep it going or make a sequel about it how liz falls for a guy that's a whole other deal with the whole Cullen & Francon gang family Oh & Liz is Elizabeth sorry, but come on don't leave it like this lol you can use Jacob as the other guy but make a twist how he was in Bella's life when she had gone away or something?? it can be really good
Anyways I love This story & I hope there's still more to come on this & others as well lol ❤❤ loved to hear from you soon :)
Reviewer: curl_ninii21 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2014 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 20- Of Forever Afters
Noooooo!! that can NOT be the end come on you can't leave it like that!!.. lol Why don't you keep it going or make a sequel about it how liz falls for a guy that's a whole other deal with the whole Cullen & Francon gang family Oh & Liz is Elizabeth sorry, but come on don't leave it like this lol you can use Jacob as the other guy but make a twist how he was in Bella's life when she had gone away or something?? it can be really good
Anyways I love This story & I hope there's still more to come on this & others as well lol ❤❤ loved to hear from you soon :)
Reviewer: wolffia (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2014 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 20- Of Forever Afters
Such a good story! I hope it isn't too late to wish for future outtakes? Heheh! Thanks for sharing! :)
Reviewer: Sparkly1 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2014 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 20- Of Forever Afters
Holy Cow! Great Story! I want more! Will I find a sequel in your profile? I better go check it out!
Thank you so much!
S.
Reviewer: gabella2423 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2014 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 20- Of Forever Afters
I loved this story great idea thanks for writing
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2014 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 20- Of Forever Afters
I just wanted to say this was an amazing story, it kept me up most of the night reading, just couldn't walk away! Truly endearing seeing Edward come through all he did!
Reviewer: ufmary (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2014 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 20- Of Forever Afters
Great story
Reviewer: foxytomato (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2014 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 20- Of Forever Afters
Wonderful, beautiful, fantastic!
Reviewer: fprm (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2013 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 18- War
awesome
Reviewer: fprm (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2013 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 17- Fare well
awesome
Reviewer: fprm (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2013 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 16- Catastrophe
awesome
Reviewer: fprm (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2013 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 15- Reunion
awesome
Reviewer: fprm (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2013 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 14- Family
awesome
Reviewer: fprm (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2013 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 13- Escape
awesome
Reviewer: fprm (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2013 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 12- Trust
awesome
Reviewer: fprm (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2013 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 11- Precedent
awesome
Reviewer: fprm (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2013 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 10- Regret
awesome
Reviewer: fprm (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2013 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 9- Surrender
awesome
Reviewer: fprm (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2013 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 8- Jealousy
awesome
Reviewer: fprm (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2013 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 7- Rhapsody
it's getting better and better...
Reviewer: fprm (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2013 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 6- Rapture
loving it
Reviewer: fprm (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2013 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 5- Desire
interesting
Reviewer: fprm (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2013 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 4- Trapped
interesting
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