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Reviewer: dangerous_dreamer (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 7- Rhapsody
awww they are falling for each other! Great chapter. i can't help but think of Edward as a super sexy bad boy and Bella an innocent little girl being struck by love (though she is not innocent and has seen bad stuff).
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: dangerous_dreamer (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 6- Rapture
Woah! Edward must need her as much as she needs him! good job. so totally did not expect this!
Reviewer: dangerous_dreamer (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 5- Desire
so now she likes him.....and by the sounds of it hes taking care of her. interesting plot! also interesting development...i didnt see that coming!
Reviewer: dangerous_dreamer (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 4- Trapped
I also take the matter of rape very seriously. it is vile and wrong but i see what your getting at when your talking about power and control. even though it is a very confronting chapter it is good. maybe i should or shouldnt have read it but whats done is done.
good job
Reviewer: twilight7711 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 9- Surrender
WOW, i have never read something like this before and it takes a really good story to get me into it and i am well and truely into yours. when i was told in your author notes that edward would rape bella i was scared it would wreck the story but this story is amazing. its wonderful and i am dying to see what happens next!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you gave it a chance. Thank you! :)
Reviewer: dangerous_dreamer (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 3- Recovery
AWESOME! yes, i know i say awesome alot but thats my way of saying "great chapter and i'm hooked" or something like that... great detail and once again AWESOME!
Reviewer: tawxil (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 9- Surrender
Ahhh this is definitely my first time reviewing a fanfic!
I just want to let you know that this is amazing! I find that so many people are too scared to push boundaries and try something new. Don't get me wrong, fanfics sticking to the original story line are great, but this is completely refreshing. Very good cliff....almost TOO good haha:)
Anyways, this is great and keep up the good work. You are actually inspiring me to write one for the first time! Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, your note means a lot to me, a lot! I'm glad so many people are giving the story a chance, you among them. Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: fundip (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 9- Surrender
wooo! I am so excited about your story! That was a great twist and i can't wait for the next installment. Your writing is awesome and this plot is crazy!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 9- Surrender
wait..what....gah! Of course the happiness lasted all of two seconds. Great chapter!! Really really really hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Chapie is almost done, just a few tweaks here and there, promise. Hope you like. It answers some questions, comes up with many new ones :P
Thanks, IL! :)
Reviewer: BellaChick (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 9- Surrender
bella's dad found them! OH NO!!!
Author's Response: Ha ha ha! We'll see what happened there. I hope you are liking it BC! :)
Reviewer: dangerous_dreamer (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 2- Awakenings
ooooooooo me like! need to read more!
Reviewer: dangerous_dreamer (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 1- Imprisonment
AMAZING! i'm so hooked! i feel like i'm actually in the story! once again AMAZING!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you are liking it :)
Reviewer: BethBSB5 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 9- Surrender
I just found this story and I am really, really enjoying it (despite Doucheward, of course)!
I'm guessing that it was Charlie's men that took both of them away. Even though the situation is extremely screwed up, these 2 belong together. And I'm guessing that Edward is one of the three brothers of the widow.
Please update soon!
Author's Response: I know, they do, screwed up as they may be! Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: kikalee (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 9- Surrender
Ok...I have a sort-of theory.
In Chap 8, Bella asks Joseph “Does Edward always leave his studio locked whenever he leaves?” After awhile Joseph replies
“Not tomorrow.”
So does that mean that Bella was able to get in their and send out a message for help?
Author's Response: We'll see... we'll see. Thanks for reading! :) Next chapter is almost done!
Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 9- Surrender
Very good. So, is this Charlie's doing or has one of Edward's men betrayed him. For a well secured haven, it seemed pretty easy for the men to get on his property, never mine his bedroom. And why was his door or hall leading to the door unattended by his guard
Author's Response: It wasn't as easy as it may seem right now. Bella just doesn't really know what went down. She will though, she played a big part in it. As for your last question, I will answer it! I promise, I know it seems too easy right now. Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: KBfan (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 9- Surrender
“Do you really understand? You are mine and mine alone.” This was my fav. part... I loved that both B. and E. gave into their feelings for eachother... you have left me at the edge of my seat and I can't wait to find out who dragged E. away (maybe Charlie was able to find E and B?? Not sure ) ... please update soon =)
Author's Response: Hey KBfan, well, he is, isn't he? It's about time he was put in his place! Next chapter is almost done, almost, almost! Thanks as always for reading and letting me know what you think! :)
Reviewer: MsKim (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 9- Surrender
Please update! Don't leave me here.
Author's Response: Almost done! Almost! :)
Reviewer: mrscullen2009 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 9- Surrender
Love it! Will you do an EPOV of this story?????
Author's Response: Maybe as an epilogue, but I make no promises! Thanks :)
Reviewer: JordanTaylorCullen (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 9- Surrender
i cant wait for the next chapter. update soon, please!
Author's Response: I'm almost done with the next chapter! :) Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: edward08 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 9- Surrender
plz i love the story it has to come all good in the end
Author's Response: It will ;)
Thanks!
Reviewer: edward08 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 9- Surrender
plz i love the story it has to come all good in the end
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: Izzy Grace (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 9- Surrender
What the FUCK!!!!! That was so big I couldn't even uses the abbreviations for it. Oh, no. Please don't kill him off. Please!!!!!! I know it has to be her father and hopefully she can talk him into not hurting him. I loved the four kids and June wedding. That was hilarious. At least he now acknowledged he loves her.
i can't wait for more. PLLLLEEEEEAAAAASSSSSEEEEEEEE update soon. i am dying here.
Author's Response: Thanks Izzy! Next chapter is almost done, very very soon now! :)
Reviewer: kshaudae (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 9- Surrender
Did her dad send his goons (yes i said goons!) over to rescue Bella and capture Edward? Please say it aint so! They were just getting in good!
Author's Response: I love the word goons! Love it! LOL!
I know, just when things were getting good....
Reviewer: BethyBoo (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 9- Surrender
Out of the 69 stories currently in my favorites list, this is somewhere in my top 5 (possibly top 3) personal favorites. I totally love where this story is headed. I also think you're a very good author, although the last paragraph of this chapter could have been polished a bit more (it felt a bit abrupt).
Thanks for writing this and for updating so frequently; I appreciate it! :)
Author's Response: I know it was abrupt, it was a little on purpose. I didn't want to give too many details at that point. And Bella is all sleepy and disoriented. That paragraph takes about a minute to happen, so yeah, it was dizzy and fast. But I'll explain in the next one, promise. I'm so flattered you like me story and that it is in ypou top 5! Wow, thank you! I hope you like it till the end!
Next chapter is almost done! Thanks for all the support, keeps me happily going! :)
Reviewer: Izzy Grace (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 8- Jealousy
WTF!!!! What did she expect? I guess maybe I would have done the same exact thing though? hehe. I thought it was funny that mary said he wouldn't be bringing her back. Too funny.
I think it is sweet that they all like Bella so much. Can't wait for more.
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