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Reviewer: B bliss (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2015 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 20- Of Forever Afters
Good ending!!
Reviewer: twilightmeplz3 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2014 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 20- Of Forever Afters
"Were it not for Bella, I'm sure we both would have been reaching for the fireplace pokers and having an impromptu sword fight" LOL this line seriously made me crack up out loud!!!! i loved this story. it was so well written and detailed, the character development was excellent and i just overall enjoyed the storyline. my only gripe is that it was not longer but then again, with all good books, i always want them to go on forever and ever! :) great job. thank you.
Reviewer: twilightmeplz3 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2014 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 13- Escape
yep. im officially hooked on this story. can't wait to see how it all unfolds!
Reviewer: kneon (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2014 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 20- Of Forever Afters
Great ending. Started reading this a long time ago then stopped for some reason was glad I came back to re-read and finish.
Reviewer: movieandbookgirl (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2014 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 20- Of Forever Afters
I really enjoyed reading this fic. great job and thanks for sharing it with us!
Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2014 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 18- War
My only thought is Noooooooooooooooo...
Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2014 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 10- Regret
Not only a very enjoyable story but superbly written. Looking forward to the rest.
Reviewer: ladybird2 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2014 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 15- Reunion
So I am confused... Can he read mind or not??
Marie
Twicrazreader
Reviewer: ladybird2 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2014 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 14- Family
I came over here cause you seem to like this site better.
I love your Alice!
So how did Edward just appear???
Marie
Twicrazreader
Reviewer: team rob (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2014 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 20- Of Forever Afters
:)
Reviewer: team rob (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2014 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 16- Catastrophe
poor alice.... she loves her brother but this is not something she can let just go
Reviewer: team rob (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2014 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 10- Regret
:)
Reviewer: team rob (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2014 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 9- Surrender
seems that maybe edward was keeping her for someone else. someone who isn't happy that he and bella "like" each other
Reviewer: team rob (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2014 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 8- Jealousy
reading at ff.net you said you would prefer we read and review here
lack of sex in this chapter is important
always want to murder edward
not quite sure i want to know what the punishment will be for her outburst
Reviewer: cullensbabe (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2014 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 20- Of Forever Afters
The story was very mean to read first, but as you continue it is a beautiful characters
Reviewer: just a fan (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2014 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 10- Regret
this is a strange story with its twist and turns and the mystery of Edward, with one always wondering what his next step will be.Bella has to play it cool around her father with the question of Edwards comments of a wedding and 4 kids, whether or not he meant them(i suspect one could already on the way?) I love a mystery, so I guess we'll have to wait and see.
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2014 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 20- Of Forever Afters
Yay! We got our HEA - it was a little dicey there for a second! Lol
abdolutely loved this fic! A very refreshing take on their relationship!
Thank you for sharing it!
chyla
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2014 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 19- Atonement
Could it even be possible.....???
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2014 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 17- Fare well
Oh God! Edward is going to meet his death! What about the baby? She's gotta stop him!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2014 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 15- Reunion
Huh! So our wonder twins have retained their powers! Didn't see that coming, at all! Glad they are back together!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2014 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 12- Trust
I don't know how it could possibly be, but I am rooting for the HEA for these two!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2014 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 9- Surrender
I bet it's her dad!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2014 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 7- Rhapsody
My emotions are so torn -I feel like I'm the one with Stockholm Syndrome! I fear what will happen that has Joeseph so upset!
really enjoying by the way...
:-)
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2014 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 6- Rapture
Just...damn...
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2014 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 4- Trapped
So.. Wanna know what I think? I am glad that you posted your story as YOU intended it to be! I hate that ou felt the need to apologize and warn so much at the beginning -'I was a little scard to continue for fear of what was in store! I think you could've done way worse than this -in fact, I've read much worse in other stories.. At least he did ensure it wasn't a completely horrible experience - I mean, given the context of hostages and power and mob boss - you were very kind here! Can't wait to see where this goes and I hope you didn't have to run from too many pitchforks!
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