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Reviewer: fabandfriendly (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 02:40 PM · On: First Aid

please i need more i think this edward is bloody hot. Wait a minute that could be the fever. No it definately isnt he is just hot in general. Love this story please update soonxx

Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 02:15 PM · On: First Aid

Loved it!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 02:05 PM · On: First Aid

He should have grab her in his dream that would have been cool. Again jacob UGH!!!!!

Reviewer: AmberGlow (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 01:33 PM · On: The Interview

aah such a great interview only to literally crash & burn at the last! rug burn that is...

Reviewer: ikss (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 01:13 PM · On: First Aid

Ah...how cute is sickly Edward? :)

Clever twist with him being the one to talk in his sleep for once. :) Nice...I am waiting with bated breath for this Fox Party!

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: g8r_gal (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 12:44 PM · On: First Aid

This is fabulous so far.  I like how their relationship is progressing.  I also like that Edward is the sleep-talker.  He's going to get insanely jealous of Jacob isn't he?  *bounces in seat*  I can't wait!

Reviewer: mellovesyou (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 11:59 AM · On: First Aid

ohhhh.. so edward finally admits his inner turmoil about bella.. me likey.

Reviewer: elsye (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 11:15 AM · On: First Aid

A very interesting story =) I love it so far! Keep the updates coming!!!

Reviewer: HPsharpie123 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Acting the Part

It's amazing!! I love it :)

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 10:05 AM · On: First Aid

Poor Edward...food poisoning sucks.  I hope he feels better soon!  I loved how he talked in his sleep instead of Bella though!  And I'm very excited to find out how the Fox dinner comes together with Jacob and all....

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Reality Check!

Loving it.......Making him vulnerable and a bit dependent on Bella is a good thing.......

Ummmm.....LOVE her dream!!!!

Reviewer: subwife (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:16 AM · On: First Aid

Aw, poor sick Edward-with-an-attitude :D Cute chapter! I'm really enjoying your story!

Reviewer: AliciaZA (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 07:41 AM · On: First Aid

Great chapter. Love the role reversal with Edward talking in his sleep now (lol). Loathed Jacob in the Twilight Saga but your Jake sounds sweet and nice. Think I like him (Huh, never thought I'd hear myself say that - lol).

Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 07:32 AM · On: First Aid

I like it.  Edward is such a dick!  And Bella seems so normal-with all the normal reactions and lack of confidence.

Jill

Reviewer: HelplesslyHoping (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 07:07 AM · On: Reality Check!

IDK if I've reviewed any of ur chaps yet- if not, SORRY!!!! :o(

I really like this story & the way ur building it up. I look forward to each update!

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 05:54 AM · On: First Aid

awww i like sick edward because he tells the truth about his feelings... but i don't know how i feel about bella going to the fox dinner with jake... i'd rather have edward and bella get together and stuff!!! update soon =]

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 05:49 AM · On: First Aid

hehehe nice variation there having Edward talk in his delirious sleep and dream about Bella with her being able to hear it and realise it :)

Looking forward to the Fox night although I'm too much a Team-B&E fan to want to see too much of Jacob and Bella.

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 05:42 AM · On: First Aid

Emmett knows more than he's letting on.  Alice will find her an amazing dress.  She'll be spectacular.  Edward will be really angry and jealous once he's feeling better.  He was definitely dreaming of Bella.  Edward will look hot in a tux.  Reading about Saturday's Fox dinner.  Jacob will look fabulous in a tux as well.  Fireworks.  Dancing maybe?  Huh.  Talk about green eyed jealous dragon come to play. Can't wait.  Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: i love edward cullen (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 05:14 AM · On: First Aid

u did rlly rlly good with the illness crap though i wud rlly like to hav more to read!

Reviewer: Lightgirl (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 03:21 AM · On: First Aid

Love this one! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: aciepey (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 02:59 AM · On: First Aid

ooooh, jacob!  a sure way to get under edward's skin.  it'sso hot when he gets all possessive caveman! 

i'm a nurse.  the med stuff was just fine.

He's gonna flip when he sees Bella all dressed up and noton his arm!  Squeee!

Great job!

Reviewer: eternal_rose45 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 02:53 AM · On: First Aid

This is fabulous! I can't wait to read more. You've got me hooked! :)

Reviewer: RobsYorkshireGirl (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 02:42 AM · On: First Aid

Brilliant!

 

Can't wait for the next installment!

 

x

Reviewer: never fading scars (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 02:40 AM · On: First Aid

hehehe he sleep talks sexy very sexy ;) love it 

Reviewer: kcmbrown2445 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 02:28 AM · On: First Aid

I bet edward is going to die when he finds out Bella is going to the dinner with Jake. Can't what to see updates. Thanks, K

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