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Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Rising to It

I agree that there needs to be a little angst at least.  Relationships, even with Edward Cullen, aren't all roses.  Sweet chapter!  I'm looking forward to seeing what Jane wanted, and to see if Bella's going to London.

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: blkeyes_redlips (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Rising to It

EdwardCullenLand LMFAO I want the keys too. <333

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 10:26 AM · On: Rising to It

Bella, poor girl's going to give herself ulcers.  Great job though.  Can't wait to see what Jane and Jessica spoke about.

Reviewer: pdxamy (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 09:43 AM · On: Rising to It

She totally forgot to tell him to call Jane. Is next chapter going to suck?

Reviewer: BookAddict (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 09:43 AM · On: Rising to It

Sure hope Jessica got her ass figuratively kicked by Jane.  Pretty please?  And as much as we all want the L word, the wait is always worth it if it's right. 

Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 09:43 AM · On: Rising to It

edward was definitely right about them getting to know each other. Also you're right, the angst was necessary. can't wait for the next chapter and the L word!

Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Rising to It

Glad you brought some of the other kind of passion into their relationship (the misunderstanding/anger part). Otherwise seems kind of fanciful that they would fall into undying love in 3 short weeks ...

Great story!

Reviewer: forksfan86 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Rising to It

!!!!!

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 11:59 PM · On: In the Know

This chapter was the best!!! *squeal*

loved having them all together to tell stories!!

Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 10:15 PM · On: In the Know

seth is awesome!

Reviewer: Amie Roberts (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 10:03 PM · On: In the Know

WOW!!! Why don't I have stairs in my house:( I think I am gonna have a smoke now----wait, I don't smoke. Damn. That was sooo funny with seth, I loved it.....

Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 09:48 PM · On: In the Know

i'm telling you, your chapters just keep getting better. i thought i was hungover today, but reading you made me feel totally better. <3

Reviewer: Anadabyel (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Making it Real

Very nice loved all the lemmons!

Reviewer: Brown-eyed-girl (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Making it Real

love the balance very good!!!!

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 05:10 PM · On: In the Know

So perfect!  Seth was a little star struck, that was funny.  I'm glad everyone was so excited for them to be together.  I can't wait to see what Angela has to tell Bella.  Wonder what Jessica is going to say about London?  She'll probably want to go instead.

Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 02:23 PM · On: In the Know

You gotta love Seth!

The Whitlock Wednesday embarrassment was brilliant and I loved Jasper's final comment to Bella.

Well written.

Reviewer: sexysadie13 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 02:22 PM · On: In the Know

ok....I'm definitely hooked.  Please gimme more sex-hair Cullen! I'm literally aching for it over here!

Reviewer: fangrl (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 01:20 PM · On: In the Know

Have Whitlock Wednesdays with Jasper in the house would certainly take things to a whole other level wouldn't it?

Reviewer: camri (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 01:16 PM · On: In the Know

Holy mother of pearl, that was way funny and way hot and just great to read. Loved it. LOVED it! I wouldn't mind a little Whitlock Wednesday myself ... or maybe some Cullen Christmas ...

Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 10:51 AM · On: In the Know

WOW, first of all the lemons in this whole story have been great! I hope we can get an EPOV in the next chapter. I'd really like to hear his thoughts on this chapter! Great job!

Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 10:44 AM · On: In the Know

holy shit!  That last scene was amazing!

Reviewer: danceegirl92 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 08:48 AM · On: In the Know

Are they going to tell Carlisle and Esme? I can't wait to see how they deal with Jessica!

Reviewer: TigerGirl (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 08:35 AM · On: In the Know

Hotness on the stairway! I love it :)  This is such a great story!!!

Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 07:05 AM · On: In the Know

OK, well that was HOT! Please tell me there was some carpet on those stairs, or else, well -- did you see A History of Violence? Ouch!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 06:55 AM · On: In the Know

Just loved Seth's reaction to Edward.  Laughed long and hard when Seth spilled the beans about Whitlock Wednesdays.  Even harder when he exposed Bella's rewinding of the love scene in Kudos of Edward.  Not only did he embarrass Bella but Angela as well.  Bella got him back with Mr Sex-Hair making him embarrassed as well.  Emmett laughter over that nicknamed was precious.  Glad everyone was relaxed and enjoyed the lovely afternoon and each other.  Of course, knew Angela would approve knowing Bella's feelings and Angela telling Bella Edward feels the same way.  Jasper was hilarious telling Bella whenever she needed a Whitlock night just give him a call.  Rosalie won the bet between herself and Alice of when they would be together.  At Alice's party they were pretty obvious there were feelings and emotions between them.  Looking forward to the London premier and celebrating Bella's birthday.

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