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Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 08:48 AM · On: Naked

What a sweet chapter.  Sounds like Bella had a lovely birthday.  I am curious as to what Rose and Emmett got her for her birthday, though...she never showed anyone.

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Naked

So looking forward to the next update, will Rose show up?

Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 08:10 AM · On: Naked

I love this story, but I have to admit, I'm getting anxious for the shit to hit the fan. When is the public going to find out??

Reviewer: BookAddict (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 07:55 AM · On: Naked

OK, so the public must be about to find out soon, right?  And of course, Rosalie is coming to meet Emmett and get some London love of her own ;-)

Reviewer: Brown-eyed-girl (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 07:36 PM · On: In the Blink of an Eye

While not one for mushiness I have to say that was very well written!

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 03:02 PM · On: In the Blink of an Eye

Loved it!!!  That was sooooo sweet!

Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 01:53 PM · On: In the Blink of an Eye

OH. MY. GOD.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was frickin awesome!! I am one of the ones who wanted the I love you scene to happen but i am so happy you made us wait!!! That was the best confession scene i've ever read. it was so romantic and just....EEEEEK!!!! Way to go!!!! God that was aesome....

 

Although my mind was in the gutter cu of early on in the chapter i actually that you were going to have edward seduce and 'punish' bella right there in the pod....but god that was so sweet OMG :D hehehehehehehe

Reviewer: MsTwiSwe (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 12:55 PM · On: Playing by the Rules

Haha!! It was perfect!! J"as"ica the slutty bitch can go the hell - no one should cry (Hell NO!!), but can't you please let my laugh my evil witch chuckle - mohahahaa!! I promise I won't even disturb Bella's and Edward's heavy lemon sessions(which I BTW am completly obsessed with!!).

Keep writing and maybe - just maybe *wink-wink* - I will leave you another sweet review. But you must be good!! Be good and maybe you get the chance to taste Edward tonight... *in a hush-hush whisper* -I got my connections!!

             xoxo - MsTwiSwe aka Stina aka The cheif of "Hate Jessica until you vomit" fanclub!!

Reviewer: LuckyStar113 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 10:10 AM · On: In the Blink of an Eye

yay!!! i'm so glad they finally said they loved each other. sigh. so perfect for them.. i'm happy that London is turning out so wonderfully for them!

Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 08:22 AM · On: Acting the Part

I love Alice's enthusiasm and how nice Carlisle is.

Reviewer: Gabi-b (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 07:50 AM · On: In the Blink of an Eye

OMFG I really need a Edawrd like this, soooooooooooooo fucking cute.

 

Update ASAP, pleaseeeeeeeeeee

Xo, G.

Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 04:43 AM · On: In the Blink of an Eye

THAT WAS FUCKING AMAZING !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! holy crap ... Im crying ~ that was absolutely the most beautiful thing i have ever read! that was amazing  ... great job

Reviewer: NicoleLight (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 03:36 AM · On: In the Blink of an Eye

So wonderful and romantic in the end - he was so sweet and vulnerable giving her his "heart".  I loved it. Such a pretty setting, too.

I was a little worried from your A/N that something bad was going to happen!  But it was all good.  Awesome, hot, unexpected lemon - who knew Edward was into the handcuffs!  I approve!

Thanks for a wonderful chapter. I expect some angst coming - maybe Tanya exposing them?

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 02:05 AM · On: In the Blink of an Eye

It was totally worth the wait and absolutely 100% perfect!!!!!!

Reviewer: DQuin (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 01:32 AM · On: In the Blink of an Eye

That was the most romantic thing i've ever read! Bloody made me cry like a little girl you did!!

Epic chapter!

D xo

Reviewer: Emz80m (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 12:00 AM · On: In the Blink of an Eye

awesome

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 08:34 PM · On: In the Blink of an Eye

Holy tissues indeed!  That was very sweet!  Bella would be embarrased with a party or something... this was perfect!  And yay yay yay... they said their ILY's!!! 

As much as I hope it doesn't, is something going to bad happen while they are in London... like the media getting wind of the relationship between Edwward and Bella and making life for them when they get back that much more difficult...  Tanya definitely is not done.... that crazy whorebagger... LOL

Great chapter... can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 08:21 PM · On: In the Blink of an Eye

What can I say, Edward Cullen is the most gorgeous, romantic, charming, sweet, sensual, playful, delicious, generous, and tender.  Who wouldn't fall in love with him?  I know I did from the beginning.  Just don't tell my husband, okay.  He made all those wonderful plans.  Told Jane about their relationship.  Had Alice in on the plan for dinner after his appearance at the London premier. Arranged to have a private dinner in a pod with Simon from the hotel serving them. Played tour guide to the city sites.  When the clock bonged midnight.  Edward gave Bella the most precious gift a man can give -- His Heart.  He wants to be a better man for her.  Powerful statement and shows his vulnerability.  His openness to share his life with her.  That he loves her.  Bella finally told him how much she loves him.  Kissing in the air overlooking the river and city of London.  What a wonderful way to start a birthday.

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 08:02 PM · On: In the Blink of an Eye

ohh wow! They finally declared - and that's one really nice pendant!!!

Hmm those handcuffs are going to be seeing some hard use I think too hehe :)

SOOO looking forward to the night/day after now!

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 07:51 PM · On: In the Blink of an Eye

Get out from behind that boy's tights--that's just weird.  The chapter, however, was abso-frikkin-lutely amazing!

Reviewer: angelwings (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 07:05 PM · On: In the Blink of an Eye

OH MY GOD! am definitely in need of tissues right now.

That was hands down THE BEST!

Oh, I want me one of those Edward's. -sigh-

 

Reviewer: Schlager G (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 06:21 PM · On: In the Blink of an Eye

Such a romantically fabulous chapter!

Reviewer: veggiegirl0601 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 05:57 PM · On: In the Blink of an Eye

Great chapter, I loved it!  The scene in the London Eye was perfect.  I'm so glad they finally told each other and I love the way Edward did it.  As usual, loved the hotness this chapter!  Glad Jane knows about them, now it's just time to tell the parents!  Can't wait for the next chapter.  Xoxo

Reviewer: Bella Lynne (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 05:54 PM · On: In the Blink of an Eye

I want an Edward like that!!!  And I miss London!  Great chapter! 

Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 05:54 PM · On: In the Blink of an Eye

so beautiful......

 

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