So it took me about 3 days to read all 31 chapters, but I have finally succeeded in finishing them. And I just have to say that I love this story. Everything from the conflicts to their emotions to the hot sex is absolutely amazing! I hope Edward doesn't beat himself up too long for this, though I have a feeling he will. So I am also hoping that Bella snaps him out of it because I was really looking forward to the trip to Italy! lol Looking forward to your next post! (Which I hope is soon!!!)

Heather

Aw, I love drunken Edward.  Makes me wanna wrap him up and hold him. lol

I loved this chapter. I think that it is so Edward with his actions and his feelings. I can see how deep in love his is with Bella and how intense it is for him to be feeling what he is feeling. I can't wait to see what you have in store for Bella and Edward next!! Love ya x

I can totally understand "dark parts surfacing". I totally freaked out yesterday over someone eating my sandwich that was in the fridge. I cussed,cried etc. well it  was all real embarrasing, so... yeh... I get that.  I love that Bella simply told him "I love You"... It was great....

Well it started out awesome!  What was Edward thinking not letting her in.  I'm sure she wasn't scared "of" him, just the situation.  Typical Over-reactward, when will he learn.

YaaY! I'm happy for Bella, and can't wait to hear from tlhis Edward!

What a way to go from a fantastic day to the utter bottom of hell for Edward.  Of course, Bella might have been afraid, but not of Edward.  It was the situation.  Edward having a bar fight over her would definitely hit the news everywhere.  Expose the fact he struck someone because he was dancing and touching Bella.  Which would out them to the public.  Bella loves Edward and understood he was just protecting her honor.  That scum had no right to say those horrible things about Bella.  She didn't want to dance with him.  That scum didn't ask permission to dance he just did it.  The same when Emmett interrupted earlier to save him from dancing with her before.  He and his friend were extremely vulgar in the men's room.  Confused why Rose didn't insist Bella go with her to the ladies' room.  Since we all know woman always go in multiples, hardly ever alone.  Especially in a crowded bar scenario.  Edward needs to realize that if problems arise, running from them will never resolve them.  Bella was ready to assure him everything with them was fine.  She wanted to comfort him and love him.  Let him know she was protecting her and expressing her thanks for saving her.  Yes he got angry and I really don't blame him.  He didn't watch her at the wrap party and James attacked her.   Edward doesn't want that happening again.  Yes Bella is Edward's and Edward is Bella's.  In order to make their relationship work, discussing everything good or bad needs to done.  Alice will kick his buns tomorrow or even later this evening.  Make him realize he has to talk about his feelings including jealous emotions.  Remember how mad he got when Bella didn't tell him about being uncomfortable with the photo shoot for the movie with him and Tanya.  It made her angry and sick to her stomach.  Now Edward is having the same emotions.  He may be the star, but it is just as hard for Bella to hold back her love emotionally and physically in public as it is for him.  Emmett did follow him and did stop the fight or beating.  Will this change Edward's mind about visiting his parents at Lake Como?  Where he was going to tell them about his and Bella's feelings for each other.  We all know Esme and Carlisle will adore the idea.  But will our hero start withdrawing from Bella for her own good again? Just hurting her more than if they would just talk and work it out.  I want to see Bella turn the tables on Edward and lash out at him and compare this incident to the photo shoot withholding.  Because if Edward knows exactly what Bella is thinking and not just from multiple facial expressions, but her actually thoughts and feelings.  He might just be surprised what they really are.  The same with Bella knowing what Edward was thinking and feeling.  Also what the scum was saying disrespectfully about her.  They can work it out and be happy again.  The easier thing would be to just get the information out in public.  All this hiding isn't doing either any good.  In fact I think it is almost cheapening their relationship.  Like Edward is ashamed of Bella.  Announce it make it known.  I agree after Edward and Bella tell their families first, but get it out there.  Right now Bella is living with Edward and goes everywhere with him.  Looking forward to next chapters to where all this pain will take our hero and heroine.

Great Now I'm crying! So not cool! Ugh. I can't wait for the next chapter. I say that Emmett needs to smack some sense into emoward! But it was a great chapter

He's just doing the Neandethal thang which makes him a crass idiot :(

Jealousward is hot!  I know he should probably be all "excuse me fellas, but my friend here isn't really interested" and walk away, but men don't do stuff like that.  Men are Neanderthals--and that's why we love them.

Loved the chapter; love the whole freakin' story!

I'm crying, too! So sweet! 

i dont mind if edward or bella are a little dom bit but with moderation. alos it would be nice if edward had opened the door a little later to find bella sitting outside waiting on him lol

I don't mind a jealous edward but get ahold of your self!