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Aww please.  MORE.  Why would you not want to give me more?  I so love the way you fill my need for EPOV.  More, I demand it!

I always thought Bella was very ungracious in this scene, whether SM's or your version. The whole "aversion thing to gifts" concept is unreasonable and annoying. I did enjoy E's POV as you wrote it however, especially since I just saw Eclipse for the 5th time last night!

Just realized that in commenting on my opinion on the use of the word can vs can't for covet, that I forgot to tell you how much I enjoyed this one-shot...  I love hearing the books from EPOV...there is so much more depth to Edward (just because his body is 17 doesn't mean his mind hasn't matured) that we don't get to see in the books...  This is well written and fit my own Edward 'thought process' musings to the T!  Thanks.

Wow - amazing insight into Edward's mind. You really showed his love and adoration for Bella.

Hahaa, it really was good!! Very interesting...

Excellent story!!! I always love E's POV, and this story needed that treatment. YOu did a wonderful job! This one is going into Favs!

I've read this fic many, many times and, to my horror, never reviewed. Spank me hard and call me a ToyGirl! Sorry.

I love your Edward as he's the rare Edward that is both In Character with SM's Edward and my own internal Edward. And by latter I mean, of course, the Edward that I think. All the time. All the places. Ahem.

I read somewhere that you won't be writing Eclipse in Edward's POV (and I wept) but it seems that you've written almost all the good parts already. Naturally I can think at least one part that is missing... if you would (someday?) continue this fic, Seduction, I would be ecstatic. I would love to read The Next Day after the Proposal (the encounter with Alice), laying the false tracks, Edward's thoughts when Jacob is carrying Bella [and he's erecting the tent - no pun intended (hah, yes it so was!)], The Discussion in the tent when Bella seems to be sleeping, the Angst of Edward (sounds like a movie title, don't you think?) when Jacob and Bella talk and kiss (did he really not listen?) and something from the the battle field when Bella sees Bree. I wouldn't mind reading Edwards thoughts (hah, pun intended, again!) when Bella cries for Jacob, too. Yes, yes, I'm very greedy. Sorry again.

It is difficult to admit, bearing in mind that SM did create Twilight-universe, but that "little" detail aside I truly think that your Dark Side of the Moon is better that she could ever write. Which is, of course, safe to say 'cause she will never write it, hah. Ah, but really. You're very talented writer and your insight in Edward is something remarkable. I don't envy you (yes, I do - a little) but, as you probably already noticed, I'm very greedy. If I said that your writing is a drug to me, would you understand? *angelic smile*

I've read everything you have in this community and I want more! More! Oh, god, maybe I should behave. Would some groveling help? I'd be happy to!

Jokes aside, thank you. Very much. You've brought so much joy to my life that I must not ask anything more. Of course I will, but I'll be shutting up for now.

Thank you, again. And again. You're the best! :D

An excellent EPOV, I saw his POV close to this way.

so romantic!

Great adaptation, thank you for writing this piece, I thoroughly enjoyed your work.

Another thing, Edward's hurt over Bella's hesitance to marry him is so well developed in your story that it was actually much more real to me.  I felt so badly for him and really didn't understand her refusal.  For goodness sake, she was willing to become a vampire for all of eternity but not get married??!  He was her dream come true, her soul mate.  Thanks for putting Edward's pain out front where it could be seen.