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Reviews For Blood and Lust
Reviewer: lea2009 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 11:27 AM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?

I love this fucking story!  you are truely an amazing writer!  i loved it!



Author's Response:

Awwww, thank you!!

Reviewer: andreaschloe (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 11:16 AM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?

SOOO hot! Looking forward to reading more-esp after bella turns!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: Tori_76 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Wedding Bell Blues

Okay...Okay. I am unwillingly tearing myself away from non-stop reading, since starting chapter 1, to write a review. WOW!  I'm gonna need a cold shower after this.  This one is definitely going on my TOP FAVS list.  I love that you wrote about Edwards glittering member. ha ha I wondered when someone would finally write about that.  We have ALL wondered about that!  KEEP EM CUMIN! (the chapters I mean) MUAH!



Author's Response:

Well.. I guess if you HAD to stop reading, at least it was to leave a review!

Thank you!

Reviewer: kap319 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 10:06 AM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?

Fantastic! 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 08:22 AM · On: 1. Everything's Biological

great start so far!  I have seen this story a few times and I am just now getting around to reading it!  It has hooked me......on to read the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review! I'm always worried that the first chapter is too slow, so I'm always thrilled when I get reviews for it.

Reviewer: de24601 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 08:04 AM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?

AAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!  So good, can't wait for the next one.  Closet fic writer!  Tee hee



Author's Response:

My secret shame! teehee

Reviewer: de24601 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Wedding Bell Blues

Fucking Awesomeness!!!!! Excellent filling in the gaps.  Keep writing, I think its a perfect balance of story and smut and I love it all!!  You rock!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm always worried there's a bit more smut than story... but is that really a bad thing??

Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 07:01 AM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?

love it!



Author's Response:

Love you for the review!

Reviewer: kellyjs (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 03:45 AM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?

so i have read all six chapters now and i can't wait for the next one, you bring out a side of edward that i always wanted to see. great job and please don't stop writing.... i love it!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm rather fond of my little Pervward, too!

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 12:20 AM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?

“Harder... Edward... fuck me harder, please!”

*sigh*  I could stare at that line for hours, it's so pretty.  What  beautiful image and request.

I am so proud of Edward.  Getting all growns up and just enjoyin' the lovin' and not thinkin' about the bitin'.  I am so proud of him.  Since he did such a good job there, he needs a little reward. *sigh* Yeah, Bella's got that covered.

I loved the improvisation that he did so that he could taste her.  Clever, and steamy. 

*sigh*  I am delirious now from the beautiful lovin of these two.  Thank  you.  I look forward to more. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much... again!

I was proud of him here, too!

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 11:52 PM · On: Wedding Bell Blues

I LOVED the conversation between the Cullen brothers.  That was a cool glimpse into that family dynamic.  Plus, I loved their answers to each other. 

Also really liked that you didn't have them having sex in the water.  Edward would know better than to do that.  It is rare to NOT have that in fanfic.  Thank you for knowing better. :)

I think that the detail about Edward coming instantaneously when he tasted the mixture of blood and desire from her hymen.  That was pretty fucking cool.

 



Author's Response:

Yeah, water sex is too squeaky for a first time!

And I enjoyed writing his shower scene. I wanted to show just how powerful his need was.

Thank you for another thoughtful review!

Reviewer: kaudrab (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Explorations

Rather appropriate,  I thought: Shakespeare's Sonnet 128 - poetry.eserver.org/sonnets/128.html



Author's Response:

I love that! Beautiful. Thank you.

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 10:38 PM · On: Explorations

I liked how you explained their use of "dirty talk" in this chapter.  I think it is entirely plausible.  The idea that using the explicit language when they are most initmate is really cool.   She doesn't have any control over it.  Awesome!

This line really stuck out to me at the beginning of the chapter, "I could not believe how fulfilling it was to bring pleasure to another person."  That is kinda the whole point of their intimacy -- the giving of pleasure to the other.  I love that you included that.

NGL, I love how you have them experimenting with dirty words.  I had a thought for a fic on that. 

While I wish we could have had more details for their attempts immediately following their first encounter in the car, I am excited that the next chapter is the honeymoon, so we get MORE!  Woo-hoo! :D

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the thoughtful review! I just love when favorite parts are mentioned.

I definitely think that dirty talk is VERY important! ;)

Reviewer: amcas (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 07:47 PM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?

Pervward is the shizz!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!! I completely agree!

Reviewer: CyberKeiko (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 07:24 PM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?

Your story is so HOT~!!! And this chapter was truly SCORCHING!!!! I can't believe it! And I love it even more because I consider it one of the most accurate portrayals of Isle Esme that I've read. It meshes so well with the book and it just friggin ROCKED!!! *fans herself repeatedly*



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! That means so much to me, I've really made a conscious effort to try and stay as canon as possible, while still throwing in my smutty extra scenes. I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: Embree (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 05:47 PM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?

Smuttasticly Awesome! Hands down and up one of the best chapters.  I give it 5 stars for lemony goodness.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!! I try my best to bring the smut! ;)

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 05:44 PM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?

Mmmm, someone is trying to keep dirty little secrets from his wife.  I think he needs to be punished!  I think he should beg to be punished-you know he gets off on all that self loathing! 



Author's Response:

Ooooh.... very good point! Naughty little Pervward!

Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 04:57 PM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?

Well done scene.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! That's high praise coming from you!

Reviewer: aylah50 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 04:20 PM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?

As always, I love the warring points of view in Edward's mind. I like how you kept this chapter in cannon with BD, but made it like 70 million times hotter!

I really liked the line: She is cunning and ruthless. She will make an unbelievable predator. I think that's the first time I've seen Edward put it that way - very sexy! And you use really great language - words like surrender, and slaughtered. This story has a fantastic edge to it!

And I freaking LOVE the "mine" talk! There's something about Possessive Edward that is such a turn on!!

I think we all need to get together and pitch in to get your hubby to a long double header baseball game or something to keep him busy and out of your smut zone. Keep writing please!!!!!



Author's Response:

Wow! Thank you so much!!

I just love it when readers point out their favorite quotes or scenes. This was wonderful!!!

And I totally agree about Possessive Edward. He is a major turn on. That's why he keeps coming out that way in the story, lol.

Reviewer: original audience (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 03:57 PM · On: 1. Everything's Biological

Wow.  I really love this story.  When I started it, I was sure that you were going to have to be going into AU.  I completely didn't think that you were going to be able to bring it around to fit the honeymoon scenes in Breaking Dawn.  I like it better this way (Shhhhh! Don't tell SM.)  I really like that Edward climbed out the bathroom window and ran around like an animal; it makes sense that way.  I also like how this story shows how "hard" waiting was for Edward...

Thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you like it!

Reviewer: DebussysClairdeLune (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 03:45 PM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?

Wow you are certainly one of the queens of wickedness my dear, I enjoyed every last bit. You smuttified Edward with grace and good grammer YAY! Hope it isn't too long before you update. x



Author's Response:

Oooh, "Queen of Wickedness"???

I LOVE that! ;)

Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: LittleEngine (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 02:50 PM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?

You do an amazing job of presenting Edward's  inner monologues...so hot. This is a great story!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! That is one of my favorite things to write. I'm so happy you enjoy reading it!

Reviewer: feathers_mmmm (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 02:09 PM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?

good night nurse

alice

xoxo



Author's Response:

Hehehe.... that makes me think of the Animaniacs. Helllooooooo Nurse!

Thanks again for checkin out my little smutfest. Pervward is so happy when you stop by!

Reviewer: imlikecandy08 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 01:39 PM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?

OMG!!!  I have to say that that is the hottest thing I have ever read in my life...... You are the bomb!!  I have been divorced for a year and have had no need for a man until now....WOW  if only I could find me an edward..  I love it you are awesome keep up the amazing job you are doing!!!



Author's Response:

Wow! I've driven you to depravity? AWESOME!!! That's high praise, indeed! ;)

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Edwardia Maven (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 01:09 PM · On: 2. Purgatory

wow that was hot !



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!

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