Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 45

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 45

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 46

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 46

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 47

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 47

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 48

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 48

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 49

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 45

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 45

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 46

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 46

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 47

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 47

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 48

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 48

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 49

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 45

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 45

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 46

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 46

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 47

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 47

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 48

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 48

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 49
Twilighted :: All-Inclusive, High-Quality Twilight Fan Fiction






Your donations help keep this site running,
thank you very much for the support!
Reviews For Blood and Lust
Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:53 AM · On: Divided

Yeah, I always felt like SM did a huge disservice to Edward in BD.  I hatd having to get his reaction to Bella's pregnancy through Jacob's eyes.  If anything, I'd prefer that she drop Midnight Sun and start BD from EPOV.  I think.

Anyway, I did enjoy your take on Edward's mindset during this very troubling time for he and Bella.  I can totally understand where he's coming from, but I think he also is starting to understand Bella's POV as well, as much as it pains him to do so.  It has to be so hard for him--he just got everything he's ever wanted, and he feels like it's all his fault because he decided to fully show his love for his wife.  I can understand him wanting to be so selfish as to remove the threat to her life, but that's also removing her choice in the matter.  What a mess! 

Great update!  Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Exactly!! That is exactly the torn anguish I was trying to convey here. I hope at least some of that came through. I'm glad you liked it!

 

Reviewer: lea2009 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Divided

I loved hearing his thoughts!  And his side of things.  And how sweet was that kiss and that she grabbed his peen...sigh.... You soooo made my day by updating.  And it was a perfect update at that!!!

 

Please continue soon!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I loved that kiss, too. It made me want to keep writing more naught times!

Reviewer: princesspeach (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Divided

Well done!  If only SM had written Bella's pregnancy -- in fact the entire last half of the damn book -- from Edward's POV, I might have actually enjoyed it.  Of course, SM would never have filled in Edward's lustful, primitive MAN-thoughts or lemony goodness as you have, and I thank you from the bottom of my Twilight-obsessed heart.

Bravo!



Author's Response:

Awww, thank you! He just can't keep that Pervward at bay!

Reviewer: usagicullen (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 06:46 AM · On: Divided

Excellent chapter. Nice to see Edward angry instead of just wallowing. I never got my SM did not have them be angry at each other and discuss what they were doing to each other. I thank you for skipping over the "puppies" conversation. It was so not necessary in BD.

The way you portray Rosalie is much more the way I thought she'd be - crazy obsessed. SM seemed to allude to this but never made it clear whether or not Rosalie was helping Bella for Bella or her.

Most stories that are lemony just do the honeymoon or just do after Renesmee or skip Renesmee altogether. It's nice to have one deal with everything and shows that life is not always unicorns and sunshine :) This will also help make their lovin' that much more meaningful once Bella gets through the change.

Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. That really meant a lot. That is exactly why I'm trying to not shy away from things that others rather ignore or edit out. I liked the book overall, I just think it needed... more. I actually liked that they had a child. I thought her character was interesting. But I didn't like so much focus on Jacob and NONE on Edward. I understood, plotwise, why she had us see Bella thru JPOV. For a bit. But for a whole section? No. Not without EPOV. It felt wrong. I have reread a lot of these scenes getting ready for writing this chapter, and I keep feeling such sadness for Edward.

As for Rosalie, I go back and forth with her. I think that she has her moments, there are times when she truly is caring for Bella. But simply because of what Bella is trying to do. I don't think she wishes her harm or anything, but priority number one is that baby. However, she is very important here, no matter how mad Edward is with her, because she does keep the baby safe. She was the one person Bella could turn to because she knew that Rosalie would fight to the death for it.

Thank you for such a thoughtful review.

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 06:45 AM · On: Divided

I liked it.  Edward feels whole with Bella.  In fact they both are not whole without the other.  Now they have each other's strength to lean on for support.  Poor Edward hasn't figured out why Bella is fighting so hard for the baby.  The baby was created out of their love.  It is a part of both of them.  He'll come around.  Rose can go to the devil.  She just wants the baby for herself. Looking forward to his emotions when he first hears the baby's thoughts.  Update when you can.  It is enjoyable to hear the story through Edward's POV.  Keep it up.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! The next chapter does in fact go over that scene, I hope you like it! Should be up before too long.

Reviewer: Rainwatter (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Divided

ok, so first off I need to admit that I missed the smut... this was not exactly the chapter i anticipated when I got the update notice (which had me shivering with anticipation, I've missed you!)... but it was definitly necessary and I agree, Edward needs to get through this.  Even if it takes a few more chapters to work out the angsty crap before the steamy vamp on vamp lov'n, I will be along for the ride.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. That is exactly what I was hoping to hear. I miss the smut, too! But even poor Pervward can't keep from getting excited at the wrong times. The next chapter pretty well wraps this drama up, and at the end I even got a little teary writing it. But... through all the angsty sadness, I couldn't keep a tiny little smut bubble from sneaking in. ;) It should be up much sooner than this chapter was.

Reviewer: caperves1979 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Divided

Good job.  I liked it.



Author's Response:

Thanks! That means a lot!

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 05:17 AM · On: Divided

I HAVE BEEN FOLLOWING YOUR STORY FOR WEEKS NOW ENJOY YOU PLOT 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I'm so happy you like it!

Reviewer: esce (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 05:17 AM · On: Divided

looking forward to next chapter

enjoying characterizations and story line

Author's Response:

Thank you! The next chapter should be soon!

Reviewer: asrial (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 05:10 AM · On: Divided

loved getting into e's mind with this chapter.  really good and i think you have him totally pegged.  and yeah, rosalie is a bitch ;)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! LOL, I don't even hate Rosalie that much in general, but I certainly think that Edward does right now.

Reviewer: MichelleVee (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 04:26 AM · On: Divided

Yay an update! I've missed your words. Everyone is loving this story, so much,  all over the fandom.

I really enjoyed seeing Edward's POV for this particular moment. And lusty Edward made an appearance at the end, which I was extremely happy about :D

I thought the most interesting thing about this chapter was when Edward gave himself over to the 'lie' and let himself enjoy it in that moment with Bella. He is so complex and I think that this bit really brought that forward. Like he is channeling his desires into something negative because he has no control over the future.

Looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

What a lovely review! Thank you so much! The next chapter is finished, I was just waiting for this one to update before submitting it. That one gets even more angsty towards the end... even made me a little teary writing it, but then it will be on to bigger and vampier things!

Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 04:02 AM · On: Divided

Poor angsty-Edward.  It's not smut-tastic, but it was beautifully written.  I really think you captured his feelings through this difficult time in their lives.  Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, lack of smut or not, lol.

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 02:07 AM · On: Divided

This is a beautiful chapter.  Edward is angry, yes, but he's not ferocious. He's restrained in his expressions.  He's learned a lot. ;) 

 

If you have Twilight on your computer, you just have to move the little cursor back and forth over that kissing scene...  It's very handy! ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you very much.

As for the kissing scene... oh yes, I've done that. Over and over again. One particular point really looks naughty! ;)

Reviewer: original audience (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 12:38 AM · On: Divided

I loved reading Edward's point of view.  I've always wondered how Edward got from the point he was at when he got off the plane to the "burning man" he was when Jacob found him on the couch beside Bella and I love how you've written it.

Thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I really worried about writing this one. I'm so glad you liked it.

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 12:01 AM · On: Divided

I do love that they are getting turned on and horny for one another, even though she is pregnant.........I love that Edward recognized that Bella now smells like him, too.  



Author's Response:

Thank you! I couldn't take away ALL the tension!

Reviewer: Antonia Cullen (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Divided

GREAT chapter. Please update soon. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! Another chap soon!

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Divided

I am still totally in love with this story! This chapter was fabulous and seems extremely possible :D!

I'm going to be missing the lemons, but you're just as skilled at everything else, so expect me to stick around and await updates!



Author's Response:

Oh, you won't have too long to wait. I can't keep away from my tasty lemonade for long. There is some major skimming in the next chapter, lol.

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 10:54 PM · On: Divided

Great chapter!

I felt so bad for Edward during this chapter. :(

I also wanted to smack Rosalie. >_<

Please update soon?

The thread sounds like fun! Staying up all night and watching Twilight?? I'm SO in. XD



Author's Response:

Thank you! Another update should be coming soon.

Yes, definitely stop by the thread! It's a lonely place right now!

Reviewer: melstermomof3 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Divided

I think you did a great job with this chapter!  I have read BD three times and always have such a hard time getting through the pregnancy.  I can't imagine how difficult it would be to write EPOV. 

I think it's great that you are giving Edward a voice because there was obviously so much going on with him during this difficult time.  For me, that is one of the many things missing from BD.  Funny, isn't it, that BD was the longest book and yet left us so unsatisfied as readers?!?!

I am loving this story and can't wait to get the next chapter.  Don't be too hard on yourself - honestly your writing  is awesome!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm so happy you liked it.

Reviewer: puska (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Divided

that was very angsty, but i LOVED it. I always wanted to know what Edward was thinking in those moments. It makes me so mad that they kept him away from her. grrr.

Oh well. Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Yay! Thank you! Next chapter is finished and on its way soon.

Reviewer: Nthetwilightzone (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:03 PM · On: The Other Boot

This is an awesome story. I love it! I hardly ever make a habit of reading incomplete stories, but I just could not help myself with this one. I hope that you continue with the chapters!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Another chapter is on its way soon!

Reviewer: Karsha (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 02:44 AM · On: The Other Boot


Reviewer: Abbabble (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Wedding Bell Blues

Awesome. Frenzied Edward wins. Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!

Reviewer: Jessica1971 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 08:13 PM · On: The Other Boot

Wow..... now that was "Sex on the Beach".... very primal and very hot.  And I finally got to the part I've been waiting for.... the oral :) 

I love that Bella's dream mirrored what happened on the beach.  That was perfect :)

Eagerly awaiting the next update!

 

 



Author's Response:

YAY!!! I'm glad you liked it!!!

The next chapter should update any day now. Psymom has been jetsetting for ComiCon & such, so I don't think she's had a chance to get many validations done yet. But hopefully soon!

Reviewer: Jessica1971 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:26 PM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?

So there was an oral "preview" in this chapter...... very nice :) I am wondering if you're going to follow BD and Bella is going to get pregnant.... which pretty much ends their sex life until Bella is changed...



Author's Response:

The very next chapter will answer many questions! I'm so glad you like it so far!

You must login (register) to review.




Share/Save/Bookmark


© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.