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Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:08 AM · On: Awake
The storyis great! I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you! Should update soon!
Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Awake
GREAT JOB! EXCELLENT!!!!! can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! More is on the way!
Reviewer: sareliz (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Awake
Oh, it was beautiful and it was hot. What more can we really ask for?
I really enjoyed the line about the hungry baby worshippers. So true, so true...
Author's Response: LOL, I thought it was appropriate!
Thank you!
Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 05:30 AM · On: Awake
THANK YOU for the daddy-daughter time. I felt robbed of this in BD, and this moment you gave us between them was just too sweet and exactly how I can imagine Edward being as a father.
I'm loving getting to read about Bella's transformation and her awakening in Edward's POV. No worries on the lack of a 'full' lemon, I know it won't be long now until these two are together again...
Great update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so happy you liked it! I fully agree about the lack of it in BD.
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 05:13 AM · On: Awake
AWSOME - CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Already submitted Chapter 11 last night! Hopefully it will get posted soon!
Reviewer: aurora6 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 03:57 AM · On: Awake
Nice Job!
I love your Edward
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
I love him, too!
Reviewer: alyssalove (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 03:35 AM · On: Awake
Steamy Edward is always best!
Author's Response: I wholeheartedly agree!!!
Reviewer: mechanicalamber (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 01:41 AM · On: Awake
I don't mind that Renesme was in there. I know a lot of people don't like her and he whole pregnancy plot at all, but considering how your story is going so far and filling in the missing bits of BD, she had to be in this chapter. It was definitely time for a lemon, or I guess this was technically a lime. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I completely agree about the baby.
And lime... lemon.... whatever you wanna call it as long as there is some hot citrus action! ;)
Reviewer: msutton1977 (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Awake
oh yeah, this is great
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you are enjoying it!
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 12:31 AM · On: Awake
a nice slice of lemony fun in the woods! looking forwrd to the whole lemon (in the cottage?) ohhhhhhh yes please.....
Author's Response: yes, yes!!!
The cottage is coming up next! Stay tuned!!!!
Reviewer: islandgirl (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 11:54 PM · On: Awake
Loved it!!
Author's Response: Yay!!! Thank you!
Reviewer: tigeress (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 11:08 PM · On: Awake
that was so good it was just the right amount of lemon for the first hunt i loved it cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you thought so!
I was so tempted, just like Edward, lol, to have them do more, but trying to stick close to the book, they were very clear about the actual first time together again being in the cottage. Which is next!
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Awake
Great sexy chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it!
Reviewer: lostluggage (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Awake
very nice mini lemon!
can't wait for more! ah the cottage next?!
can't wait!
Author's Response: Yes ma'am!!
I just posted it last night, it should hopefully update here before too long!
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Awake
A lot of it was a retelling of BD, which is fine, but you added your own spicy bits. I really enjoyed it. Nice little bit of a lemon too. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm actually trying to stay as close to BD as I can, yet still give it what I've always thought it needed... smut and EPOV!
Reviewer: lostluggage (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Divided
ahhh.very angsty but just as i would think edward to be.
never fear you are only the smut queen- you do angst very well!
on to the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you! I was so worried writing that chapter!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Awake
yay!! I like the new little bit that Bella could smell his arousal!!!!! Nice daddy daughter time!!! I Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I thought those were both fun little extras it would be nice to see.
Reviewer: usagicullen (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Awake
Rawr! This is totally what was missing in BD.....Love sweet Daddyward and crazy Lustward so much :)
Nice balance of Edward staying with Bella as she changes AND loving his daughter and spending time with Renesmee. His moment with Alice was sweet as well.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Those were things that I think were sorely lacking in the book. They were hinted at, but never really addressed.
Reviewer: kim1974a (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Awake
Great Chapter, and congrats on coming out of the fic closet! I'm barely out of the fic reading closet.
Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much! It took months to get the courage up!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Awake
Half a lemon is better than no lemon...lol
Really liked this chapter- hearing Edward's thoughts on Jacob inprinting on Renesmee was priceles...
Author's Response: Yeah, he's just really not his biggest fan right now.
I'm so happy you liked it!
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Awake
Wow. That scene in the woods is how I wish it would've gone in the book! Haha. Seriously, though, this chapter was truly wonderful. You did a great job portraying all the emotions. And the lovely citrusy treat was so yummy. ;)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Just wait until NEXT chapter! mwahahahaha!!!
Reviewer: baileygirl (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Awake
Oooh, how MUCH more? ;p
It was fun! I like this--it's like BD from EPOV...and dirty. heh heh heh
Author's Response: Thank you! That's what I'm at least trying to do, lol. BD Dirty EPOV!
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Awake
i really loved it .. i liked wat you added with alice yelling at rose and jacob .. cant wait till see how bella flips on jacob that gonna be funny cuz she calls him a mutt or something .. oh and the part at then end i like at well a lil lemon never hurt anyone cant wait for next chapter asap
Author's Response: Thank you! I loved having Alice snap at them!
Next chapter should be up soon!
Reviewer: violet2009 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Awake
Awesome chapter, bb!!
Have I mentioned how MUCH I LOVE reading from EPOV??? It makes me all giddy inside!! My fav line from this chapter:
She was Sin personified, and I wanted to be a very sinful boy.
It had me ROTFL!!! LOVE this Edward!
Keep up the good work!! ;)
Author's Response: Awwwww!!!! Thank you!
I'm rather partial to him, myself! ;)
Happy to see a familiar face, bb!
Reviewer: TwilightAddict_NYC (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Awake
Happy Happy Happy! Those are my thoughts! Great chapter! Update soon, can't wait to read about the family reunion! Excellent job!
Author's Response: Thank you soooooo much!!! I'm happy you're happy!
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