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Reviewer: Starnani21 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 06:20 PM · On: Ready

Well, I appreciate the twist- Bella hasn't gone to the Volturi,  and it will be a guard that helps to locate her. Thanks for the update, this is deffinitely an in-between chapter but I like it. I look forward to the action/drama of the official chase when they're close to Bella's path.

I'm not too sure where to go from here. Maybe I've just been too heavily influenced by some anti-Bella fanfics, but I am slightly perturbed by the impact of Bella's running away from Edward on the Cullen family. They are helping Edward chase her around the world at this point... even though I am a fan of romantic-meant-to-be-LOVE, I can't help but think they should let it go. She came back once.

I know, I know, I'm horrible. Okay, pessimism aside, I think that in the end all of this will be proof enough to Bella of Edward's true devotion to her as well as their love and attraction.

Now, where is Bella??? She ran to Forks on instinct... she said her goodbyes to Charlie and Jake... where to next??? She wants to rid herself of all the feelings she has for, not only Edward but, the Cullens. Hummmmm

Maybe I'm just slow, but I haven't got a clue. Looking out for the next chapter.

Reviewer: zilly (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 05:42 PM · On: Touch Me

A love that knew the pain of loss. What a line - great stuff....

Reviewer: angelgirl (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 04:50 PM · On: Ready

Good Job.  Get the next chapter out before you leave for CO.  I'll do your fans a favor and I won't let you get on the plane till we have #13 in our hot sweaty little hands..........

Reviewer: saene (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 01:42 PM · On: Ready

wonderful story.

cant wait what going to hppen next.

 

see you next chap.

Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 11:36 AM · On: Ready

Demetri is the coolest I like it that he wants to help with out being so high and mighty like the rest of the gard.

Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 10:16 AM · On: Ready

okee dokee loving the writing, it's very SM like, however much like new moon I find myself wanting ot flip to the back of the book to make sure Bella and Edward hook back up and I have no book to flip to the end of....

Reviewer: St0pSmackinMe07 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 07:49 AM · On: Ready

Great chapter. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 07:40 AM · On: Ready

So I stayed up way too late last night reading this. Wow My heart was pounding and the tears were flowing. This is a great story and I hope you update soon I think I might go crazy.

Reviewer: nautical (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 06:55 AM · On: Ready

What is this oddly fashionable Bella up to?  I do hope Demitri spills at some point.  I wonder what time he is from.  My guess would be that he learned to hunt people during the Spanish Inquisition. 

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Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 05:44 AM · On: Ready

STOP MAKING IT HARD FOR ME TO BE MAD AT EDWARD!!!! lol

Seriously, I feel so sorry for him, knowing all his regrets and how much he really loves Bella and wants forgiveness, but I want to stay mad at him. He has hurt her so much *tear*. I know we don't know the whole story yet, but what he gave Tanya should have been Bella's, she has every right to stay angry and make him work A LOT for it. PLEASE PLEASE updated again soon! I am so addicted to this story :) Great writing!

Reviewer: duchess_amy (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 03:09 AM · On: Ready

I'm a little nervous about the Volturi 'helping' find Bella.  It is obvious that Demetri can control his thoughts around Edward and that Alice's vision didn't giuve much insight.  Is Demetri really trustworthy or is he going to exploit Edward's desperation to find Bella to the Volturi's advantage.  Friend or foe?  Also, is Bella even trackable?  I mean she's a powerful sheild and all.  Just as she blocks the Cullen's abilities, wouldn't it hold true that she could block Demetri's.  He tracks a person by the essence of their mind right?  The Volturi has eyes and ears everywhere, over the decades that Bella has been a vampire, doesn't it stand to reason that at some point the she would have crossed their radar and that they would have been after her for her abilities.  So if they could have successfully found her before they would have already had her a longtime ago. 

As far as Bella herself,  I have no theories.  When she first ran, I thought Forks and then the Volturi.  Now, I'm just confused.  Bella was never one to let grief consume her, so I think she has a definite course planned.  Hell, maybe she's in Denali, the last place Edward would think to look for her. Maybe she decided to seek solitude in Antartica and she's alone existing off of the penquins.

Reviewer: LitanyG (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 01:23 AM · On: Ready

Thanks for this new chapter ^^

Reviewer: Scully (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 10:42 PM · On: Ready

This is killing me. He just got her back! Please, for the love of all the is holy, update soon.

Reviewer: jessica_1_22 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 09:40 PM · On: Ready

It happened again!! ACE and MotU updated on the same day. You girls are going to kill me.

I love Alice's pov. She is one of my favorite characters, and I love getting into her mind. Fishnet bunny ears, leopard print and lime green, she is just too cute for words. She and Jasper are such a cute couple, I just love them.

Poor Edward, he can read everyone's mind and he still has no idea what's going on. I'm so curios where his relationshop with Demitri is going to go. I'm still on the fence with wether he's going to be a good guy. I certainly hope he will be.

I can't wait to see Bella. I miss her, and I want to know what's she's been up to.

As always, you are fabulous. I simply adore you and this story. Thank you for sharing it with us all.

Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 09:36 PM · On: Ready

Interesting point to end on...I'm uncertain of Demetri, but just the fact that he asked Edward to meet him seems promising...unless it's a trap! 

I wonder where Alice spotted Bella...

Still loving your story!

Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Ready

Soooo.....Douchebag is awfully confident that when he finds her that he'll be forgiven for fucking that ho-bitch Tanya.  

Isn't that a bit....arrogant at this stage?  Is it just me?  Anyone?  Bueller?

Don't get me wrong, I totally want these two together at the end and want the next chapter now so he and DaddyC can find poor Bella.  I just hope she makes it rough on him.  Like rougher than my non-writer-y brain can fathom right now.

Take care of that for us, ok?  Make Douchebag Edward suffer some more before the HEA.  Give his defiled penis to Jane for a bit.  It could probably use a good scrubbing.



Author's Response: Omg you just killed me with this!!! So fucking hilarious, thank you. I can't promise Jane, but I can promise a lot of repentance ;) and some suffering of his own ;) thx air xox

Reviewer: danse_avec_moi (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Restraint

okay, more to come with my review, but I just read the reuniting chapter and I need to get this off my chest:

 

YEEEEEEESSSSSSS! ANGST!!!!! I FUCKING LOVE IT SOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!! IT WAS THE PERFECT AMOUNT OF ANGST AND HEARTBREAK AND DESPERATION!!!! OH MY GOD IT WAS SO BEAUTIFULLY PAINFUL!!!!!!!

 

as you can see, I'm a big fan of angst, and this story. I'm just going to go read the rest of it now...

Reviewer: Bart (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 07:54 PM · On: Restraint

I just found your story and raced through the first 5 chapters.  The mates are reunited!  What fun!  I can't wait to see where you go with the plot.  You do realize that I am going to be up way past my bedtime since I have 7 more chapters to go!

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 07:28 PM · On: Ready

I'm intrigued by the new relationship between Demetri and Edward.  An unlikely alliance, perhaps?

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: dropheart (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Alone

Ha, I like how Collin called Bella Izzy. Cute nickname.

Reviewer: slwortham (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 07:21 PM · On: Ready

Can't wait to hear Demetri's story!  As for Bella...hmmmmmmm.....

Maybe she is ultimately testing Edward to see how far he would go for her.  Her location?  No clue, but must be genius!

Reviewer: dropheart (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 07:13 PM · On: Unforgiven

Great first chapter! I'm hooked! 

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 06:29 PM · On: Ready

i want a chapter with bella's point of view please i want to know what is going on with her

it was a good chapter not much happened though so kind of boring

well until next time

Reviewer: jennmo (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2010 06:25 PM · On: Love Me

i cant read anymore. i hate tanya and edward stories

Reviewer: gr8fulmom (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 06:06 PM · On: Ready

Poor Edward :*(

I still don't feel totally right about Demetri. I am a bit worried that his involvement could be all for Aro...but maybe not?

Please..more!!

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