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Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 04:36 PM · On: No

Please don't torture Edward much longer.  He can't take it and I can't either.

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 04:35 PM · On: No

You know that I literally jump when I get the e-mail update for this story.  I am completely on board with Bella having moved on.  She needed to be on equal footing with Edward.  Now it is time for Edward to prove his feelings to her.  She needs to know that he hasn't stopped searching for her.  I'd like to see him on his knees.... ;o)

God, I am such an addict to this story!!!!

Reviewer: jackie84 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 04:32 PM · On: No

Dang it I thought he was going to find her! Lol beautiful chapter :) it's been a long ride but I trust that in the end we will see a hea and some sexward! Lol

Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 04:22 PM · On: No

I'll be honest. I'm getting a little frustrated. Kinda hard for Edward to beg for forgiveness if they aren't in the same place.

Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 11:38 PM · On: Set

wow.... seriously.... update please!!

Reviewer: tolly (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 06:58 PM · On: Set

aarrg, I can't believe I've run out of chapters.  It's 4.57am an I have to get up for work in two hours but I had to read this story start to finish.  I love your writing style, and the story is full of twists and turns.

Pleeeese post more chapters!

T x



Author's Response:

WOW! That is insane! I do that ALL THE TIME with fics... I am beyond floored and honoured to be THAT fic for you.  You have no idea how giddy that makes me.  Thank you!

Air

xox

Reviewer: blueeyeddemon (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 12:18 PM · On: Set

Loved the witch doctor chick. Demetris hot, at least your version is, and I'm a fan of slash, but I just never got the point of Twilight slash. Hmm, I liked your idea much better. Anyway next chapter soon please.

Reviewer: mauge (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 01:37 PM · On: Set

YUM is right!! I love this Demetri, so sexy ;)

I hope that Bella is being a good girl, let's just not tell Edward, let him think she's a naughty, naughty girl, hahaha.

Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 05:04 PM · On: Set

I love Edward getting riled up.

Reviewer: yogavixen (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 03:24 PM · On: Set

I liked Lethia, an interesting character to add to the story.  The whole thing with Demetri is still a bit of a mystery. Why is he helping Edward?  Can't wait to see where this goes!

Reviewer: BellaCarolina (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 07:21 PM · On: Set

I like how you tied in the story of the river of forgetting and Bella's attempt to wash it all away, as any woman with a broken heart and a story to tell knows- things are just not that simple when it comes to the man you would walk through fire for. Very intelligent and well written.

Reviewer: BellaCarolina (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 07:03 PM · On: Ready

Maybe she's just running and swimming and running, maybe she just plans on never stopping for all of eternity.

Reviewer: BellaCarolina (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 06:35 PM · On: Hope

Demetri is a friend and foe and then a friend, it's in his nature, I always have found Demetri to be the least brain washed of all of them, I have a theory (about fantastical creatures, great.) that becasue of his tracking ability he knows there is a world beyond The Gaurd. I think he stands for himself, it's where he wants Bella to end up that will change the outcome of the future. So what does Demetri have invested in all this? hmmm.

Where in the world's Bella? I think she's in Paris women always seek refuge in the city of lights, it gives you hope.

Reviewer: BellaCarolina (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Find Me

Nooooooo, don't do it! Dammit Bella! Are we all such idiots in love?

Reviewer: BellaCarolina (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 11:24 AM · On: Leave Me

you are being very consistant, although I thought there would be more to the Jumper girl, was she suppose to draw a parrallel to Bella?



Author's Response: Yeh that was the entire purpose of her. She drew a hint of a parallel to Bella if NM would have happened SM's way. An alternate life I guess, so Bella felt compelled to help her for inexplicable (to her) reasons. Then Jumper led Bella back to the hospital and Edward. That was really her sole purpose. Though that doesn't mean she is long gone forever ;) Thanks for the revievs they all mean so much Air xox

Reviewer: BellaCarolina (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 09:52 AM · On: Help Me

I heard west and was shocked Edward didn't think Forks and the mansion, love blinds people I suppose.

Reviewer: smitchell (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 08:21 AM · On: Set

it getting better. but i  hope he finds her soon!

Reviewer: wesjess (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 08:57 PM · On: Love Me

Tanya is really horrible! I know she tried to show that she is sorry for it but I don't care I still hate her! lol...

Reviewer: BellaCarolina (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 08:17 PM · On: Love Me

At least he has to fight to get her back! She deserves that at least!

Reviewer: BellaCarolina (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 08:02 PM · On: Touch Me

Talk with me, trust me, believe in me, stay in my arms, keep your fingers twisted in my hair, tell me how much you love me and that it's only ever been me, let me touch you, let me make love to you, let me worship you, stay with me now, always...

AND I died. I love your Edward...



Author's Response: Awwww thanks! I freak the he'll out when ppl quote me in reviews like that. Awesome!!! Love it. Keep reading hope you continue to enjoy. Air xox

Reviewer: BellaCarolina (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 07:04 PM · On: Restraint

I love the emotions, I love knowing that they are going to catch each other when they're done falling.

Reviewer: BellaCarolina (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 06:08 PM · On: Trembling

Jumper will be their daughter?

Reviewer: Suz (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 11:13 PM · On: Set

this is getting So good!!

Reviewer: twilightelle99 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 10:40 PM · On: Set

Wonderful story & EXCELLENT writing! Please don't take this as a negative comment, because it is sincerely not meant that way...I think the reason reviews may be tapering off is because the story seems to be heading somewhere totally different than it began or than what the reader is led to believe in the summary. It's not that it has turned into a boring storyline, quite the contrary. However, to be perfectly honest, it seems as though the entire fic is going to be based on the search for Bella and not B&E reclaiming their love, which is what I thought the primary plot was going to be. I sincerely hope Bella is found very soon and B&E can reclaim their love. That being said, this is YOUR fic, obviously, and it needs to go wherever your creative heart leads you. I look forward to seeing where you'll take the story. Please don't take offense to my comments as they are genuinely not meant to be harsh. BTW~ You truly are an exceptional author!

Author's Response: Thanks! And no worries. I take very little offense to anything... pretty much ever ;). I promise- THIS IS A LOVE STORY. spread the word ;)) one more chappy (just enough to get Demetri's story out). Then it's happy times... Ok that's a lie. Then it's "reunion" time. But Ed has a lot of work cut out for him. Here's hopin' that everyone sticks with me :) And super thanks for the honest review. It really helps and means more than I can say! Xoxo

Reviewer: Starnani21 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 06:20 PM · On: Set

Why have Edward lose control? To show just how much he is affected by mere thoughts of Bella? Rather, to strengthen that idea after the whole jungle experience?

Well, I prefer my Edward be cool, calm and collected or at the very least straining to be so. It was hard for me to see him act the way you wrote him. I mean I felt for him, and I do think that he needed the release that he got from the fight with Demetri.

And, I just don't like slash. The ExD idea just... bothers me. I'm not homophobic, I just like my characters as they were meant to be... mostly, anyway. Okay, okay, if the gayness come out of left field it tends to throw me and I just need to have something to say no to- I'm not really opposed to it, but choosing not to read slash gives me a few less stories to keep me awake at night and my favorites list from getting longer than I'm comfortable with.

Where is Bella? I'm sure she's had sex with other guys/vamps before. I mean, in the beginning you kind of eluded to it with the friend urging her to get her needs met. It had to have happened at least once.

Do you plan to drag this search out for much longer? I mean, the threats to get reviews can't be real, right? Just one more chapter? Let Edward have some peace. He was doing just fine until she walked into his hospital.

Looking forward to next time. Thanks for the Eddie high-jinks. And, what does the family have to say about his search? Has Alice had any mentionable visions?

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