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Reviewer: DaisyAllday (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 03:05 AM · On: No

Great story.  He better damn follow the leads :)  Thanks for updating.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 03:01 AM · On: Set

Damn Demetri is driving me crazy...though I must admit he does soumd really yummy. ;) I am just dying to know what Bella is up to!

Reviewer: LZTZ (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 02:48 AM · On: No

This entire chapter broke my heart, geesh! It is always sad to hear that the love of one's is gone, but to see such humanity and life slip away before your eyes is an entirely different story. Understanding love is rare and finding true love is even more so. It's not often that we are handed the opportunity to be with the one that was made for us, so when presented with such a gift it must be cherished. This is something that both Edward and Demetri both understand, but also were both unable to accomplish.

For Demetri, Mischa was willing to sacrific everything to be with the one she loved more than anything because she had that much faith in them together. Despite his protests of what he thought was best for her, she was unwilling to live a life without him in it. So, because of this, he was able to give into everything they both wanted because he needed her just as much. And while it didn't end in a happily ever after for them, he at least had the courage to be with the love of his existance for a short time then never at all.

This is where he and Edward differ. Edward knew that leaving her would ultimately destroy both of their souls and because of this, he waled away from his one and only forever. Was this an easy decision for him? Not at all, but it was also incredibly selfish. Bella was ready to give up everything just to be with him because SHE had that much faith in him and them. Unfortunately, Edward didn't have this for whatever reason which is what got him into this mess to begin with. Instead of accepting that he and Bella were written in the stars for each other, he eventually found comfort in the arms of another. And while I can see how this can happen, it simply isn't what their relationship deserved. Bella deserved to be cherish and loved by the one she wanted more than anything, but Edward decided to act like the 17 year old he is and run away from everything that was real. For this, he simply has to suffer the consequences of his actions and I, for one, am glad. Glad that he understands how it is his turn to make the "big gesture" and do all he can to win her heart, mind, and soul back. Forgiveness is never freely given, but rather earned, and this is what Edward must do. Is Bella really over him? Hell no, which is why she keeps running but because of this he needs to find her even more than before. There is only one person who can really take her pain away and it's Edward. They are miserable without the other, but he made this mess so it is his responsiblity to clean it up and right all of his wrongs. *remember Tanya?*

Finding true love is never easy and should never be taken lightly. Once you find it, it must be held onto tightly or something will take it aways from you. Second chances? Well, they are even more rare. If Edward wants his forever with Bella he needs to find her and make her realize that she is everything he has ever needed. The heart can forgive but never forget, so this is what he needs to do. Help her learn to forgive him because, in the end, they are destiny.

As always, beautiful chapter! Can't wait for the next!


Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 02:38 AM · On: No


Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 02:38 AM · On: No

Demetri's story was an extraordinarily sad one.  I love the detail you put into it.  I do hope that Edward finds his way soon enough, though I am glad you're not letting him off the hook easily.

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: jackwhite (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 02:33 AM · On: No

Sweet baby Jesus I'm dead!That chapter was so painful and beautifully written (as usual...and yes,I feel like shit for not reviewing before now).I've been sitting on my hands waiting for an update,this story is killing me.I SO agree with you though...that Edward has some serious 'splainin to do and by no means deserves Bella's fast forgiveness.It was bad enough that he left her in the first place but add on banging Tanya the Tramp...heinous...totes pisses me off.

I adore your Demetri.His story is heartbreaking.Thanks so much for the wicked update!



Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 02:30 AM · On: No

While I sit here with a lump in my throat, a quite sob in my chest, and a tear stained cheek, I marvel at the agony that was this chapter.

You did wonderfully well with conveying true horror, true agony, and true despair in the telling of Demetri's fatal love story. I was quite surprised at how emotional it made me. I liked being surprised.

But one question: "“I think that she has… moved on"....does Demetri mean to imply that Bella has ‘died’ or that she has erased her memories of Edward? Or perhaps that she has forsaken Edward entirely, her love now impossible to reatttain?

Please post more asap.


Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 02:30 AM · On: No

Hmmm....wonder what exactly Demetri and Alistair talked about....still can't wait for the reunion.  Great chapter!

Reviewer: goddessofbirth (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 02:08 AM · On: No

I'm still trying to figure out how there could be any 'misunderstanding.'  He either slept with Tanya, or he didn't.  He said he did, so what else is there?  It kind of hurts my heart, and Yep, Bella should be pissed, and he totally should have told her Tanya was there, but did she really want him to be alone for the rest of eternity when he had no clue she was vamp?  It just seems kind of an overreaction.

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 01:51 AM · On: No

AMYDEE!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR RANT!!! Seriously, it hasn't even be a year (freakin' nothing in vamp time)! If he gives up, he is completely unworthy!

You're right about Tanya....Just Ewwww....Even if there is no physical disease, who wants to go where hundreds of thousands, maybe millions, have been before... Rotty crotch, indeed!

There is one thing we don't know for sure yet, and that is exactly how far Edward and Tanya actually got..might have just been oral (although who wants their mouth there?) I guess we'll find out eventually...Like you, I would like to see Tanya burn...the world will be a better place without that HO!



Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 01:46 AM · On: No

Good stuff... Loved the thought you put into demeteri's story... Update soon plz

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 01:42 AM · On: No

oh my goodness! AMazing update, I have a whole new respect for Demetri, his story broke my heart. I am so happy for you A/N in the beginning, I definitely need a HEA but I want Edward to pay for hurting Bella. I can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 01:41 AM · On: No

Demetri's story was beautiful and terribly said.... *sniff*  I think you did a great job elequently telling it.  It did need done...

And as far as kinda words for Edward, not going to happen!  I think my words wouldn't be that kind at all..  He needs to get the knee pads you left out for him, and get his ass in gear and find Bella!  Fwaaa!

Thanks for updating, you are such a pleasure to read! :)

Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 01:27 AM · On: No

ONLY 200 and some odd days?  That lazy ass mother fucker better NOT give up on her, even if she becomes the vampire-ho equivalent of Bia Ling. 

I mean, what the ever loving fuck?  He's been alive for eleventy thousand years and after 200 some odd days he is even considering giving it up?  Damnit, I have had mascara that lasted longer than that!

Can vampires get STDs?  Did that scummy skank Tayna give him the 'PyreSyph?  That crazy whore must have and it must be rotting his brain or something.  I mean, that happens with Syphlis in humans, at least in the teritary stage.  Perhaps he needs to speak with Carlise about some anti-biotics, stat.  He can do a protology exam as well and PULL EDWARD'S HEAD OUT OF HIS OWN ANUS. 

This might be the main issue in finding Bella, to be honest. It would be remarkably difficult to find Our Girl when your cramium is wedged up your own ass.

And as for knee pads...uh-uh.  He can beg without those bastards.  Beg and beg and beg.  And set fire to Tanya right in front of Bella so she doesn't spread anymore of that 'PyreSyph. 

Oh, beautiful story for Demetri, BTW.  Touching and evocative.   Thanks for updating and I cannot wait for more....and to start cheering for Edward.

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 01:25 AM · On: No

“I think that she has… moved on,”.....OMG!!!!! Has she taken a lover? I really don't want her to, but maybe it is the only way for Edward to realize tha absolute pain and desolation that she experienced when she fouind out about Edward and Tanya.....I can't imagine her ever feeling the love she had for Edward, though...Sex without love is awfully empty....I'm crying here, Babe!! Hope you can start to fix things soon....You DO believe in HEA's, right? 

Demetri's story is so horribly sad...He lost not only his wife, but his unborn child...Just awful...


Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 01:19 AM · On: No

awesome Demetri back story! So well writen and gutt wrenching.'s time for him to find her....

Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 01:08 AM · On: Alone

nice chapter..different kind of story..

Reviewer: Rgwmnks (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:58 AM · On: No

Poor Demitre.  I feel worse for him than I do Edward & that's saying a LOT.  However, unlike Edward, Demitre did nothing to cause his pain.

As Always, looking forward to the next chapter. :o)

Reviewer: fanficreader83 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:53 AM · On: No

I look forward to his decision-making process and to what the future holds for these two, especially because you promise a HEA!

Reviewer: lostluggage (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:49 AM · On: No

that was an amazing story of Demetri! 

so much pain and loss, and yet strength out of it! 

oh eddie... you gonna have some hard times yet, and you better listen and get those knee pads!

loved it my dear!

once again... i leapt to come over and read... and was not disapointed!

can't wait till the next one!



Reviewer: BellaCarolina (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:37 AM · On: No

I loved Demetri's story!

I thought she went to Lethia, her moving on isn't really an option, unless she's denying herself.

theories- went to lethia, joined the Volturi, Denying self thus dating someone else, Demetri's info is wack.


Reviewer: Rachel000 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:36 AM · On: No


An update!  More, more, more!  I'm a fan of HEA too, but Edward must first beg from his knees!  *evil grin*

Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:36 AM · On: No

You haven't found her yet?  You are useless Eddie!

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:36 AM · On: No

Please don't torture Edward much longer.  He can't take it and I can't either.

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:35 AM · On: No

You know that I literally jump when I get the e-mail update for this story.  I am completely on board with Bella having moved on.  She needed to be on equal footing with Edward.  Now it is time for Edward to prove his feelings to her.  She needs to know that he hasn't stopped searching for her.  I'd like to see him on his knees.... ;o)

God, I am such an addict to this story!!!!

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