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Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 02:03 AM · On: Bella
Guhhh... Need to move on to the next chappie...
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 01:56 AM · On: Options
I'm glad Alice and Jasper are with Edward now.
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 01:38 AM · On: No
Demetri's story was very beatutifully sad.
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 12:38 AM · On: Set
the parts when he remembered their memories were perfect.
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 05:52 PM · On: Ready
Painful... Alway so painful.
P.S. you realize that I read chapters and am back here to take a second look and review them. I am not that fast reader. :)
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 05:47 PM · On: Hope
It's hard to watch Edward's misery.
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 05:38 PM · On: Find Me
Shit. You pull out a new moon to us. :D
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 05:28 PM · On: Leave Me
Oh. This was so very sad.
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 05:13 PM · On: Help Me
Lets face with it. I'm angry with Edward. But lets face with another thing. I cannot stay angry with him for so long. So... Lets see what comes next.
P.S. I want him to suffer a little bit more.
Reviewer: iloveedwardandrob (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 04:57 PM · On: Departed
Oh. My. God. Okay, I'm trying. Okay, yes. I trust you. But man, you're making it tough! I was actually wondering how she was feeding throughout this whole time with Viktor, whether she was denying herself or maybe he was feeding her, since she didn't bother herself. I do believe Edward can get past this though. After all, the two terrible things he thinks she's done, being with someone else and feeding from human blood, he's done, too.
The hard part now begins for me. I've caught up with you and now I have to wait with everyone else. I'm not sure how I'm going to do that, but I guess I'll have to! I had to stop reading earlier to go out to dinner and all I could think about was getting back and reading more! You have definitely created a monster here. An addicted, crazed monster who must have MORE! SOON!! (Pretty please?) I love this story. Plain and simple. And I cannot WAIT to read more.
Debbie
Author's Response: I think I may be in love with you. Seriously. ;)
Reviewer: iloveedwardandrob (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 01:37 PM · On: Shattered
My God. What a chapter. I understand why you say it killed you to write it. It killed me to read it. To think of Edward finally finding her, only to see that. I'm afraid of what will happen next. Thank God I have faith that they eventually work their way back to each other, cuz this is agonizing!
Debbie
Reviewer: iloveedwardandrob (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 12:47 PM · On: Bella
Finally! I can't even write more than this. I HAVE to go read more!
Debbie
Reviewer: iloveedwardandrob (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 11:37 AM · On: Options
Wow, talk about leaving us hangin'! Now I'm really, REALLY glad I'm reading this when you have already written so much, cuz the suspense would surely kill me! Off to read more.
Debbie
Reviewer: iloveedwardandrob (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 06:53 AM · On: No
Please, PLEASE don't stop being long-winded on our accounts! It's what makes your story so addicting--the more you write, the more I want!
This chapter was definitely heart-wrenching, and made us finally understand why Demetri was willing to help Edward in his search. It makes me wonder about the stories of all of the other Vulturri guards, though, of course, those are stories for other days. Right now, I want to know what's going to happen next. Can't WAIT to hear what happens next!
Oh to the next chapter. This story had me up half the night and I could hardly wait to read more today. Hate the thought of it ending.
Debbie
Reviewer: iloveedwardandrob (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 05:23 AM · On: Set
Okay, I've been reading this story nonstop, and have to admit I haven't even taking a moment to review, despite your requests, so for that I apologize, but it's all your fault! I've found it impossible to stop long enough to review, but I'm forcing myself now, after staying up way too late last night reading to this point!
This story is fantastic! I'm so thoroughly enjoying it, and hope you understand my lack of reviewing in no way reflects my love for your writing! You're a master, and I can only hope this story goes on and on. I'm afraid to see how close I am to finishing it, so I'm not looking!
Yes, I'm loving Demetri--how fun to get a chance to know him better. And I'm looking forward to seeing his "relationship", whatever it is or becomes, develop further. Very interesting.
As much as I'm looking forward to Bella eventually reuniting with Edward, I am enjoying time with Edward, though his pain is tough to witness. It's the same way I felt when I read New Moon and experienced Bella's devastation after he left her. It's as if I'm experiencing it along with him, which is a testament to your skillful writing. As when I read the book, the only way I am making it through is knowing that they'll eventually find one another again. He doesn't have that assurance, however, huh?
I'm very much looking forward to finding out what, exactly, happened and didn't happen with Tanya. That is definitely going to be interesting. And then, of course, how he explains it to Bella. Can't wait to read it all! I'm having an extremely difficult time tearing myself away from this story, much to my family's annoyance, but I can't stop till I find out what happens. I'm definitely addicted...
Debbie
Author's Response: Yay!!!!! I see you have written many more reviews so I will read them next. I just wanted to say that I totally understand about the lack of reviews. I just read 30 chapters of Just Wait back-to-back only to think, "shir I haven't even reviewed, and I'm a bloody review-craving-author!" *slaps hand* Its easy to get lost in the stories. I L O V E that I can be that story for you. Yay! Enjoy! *runs to read your other reviews*
Reviewer: coloradowoman (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 08:54 AM · On: Departed
so how much do I love this story? My daughter called me while I was reading the most current chapter after having a bad interview and all I could think about was how I could talk her down quickly and get off the damn phone so I could get back to reading! hee, hee, hee.
I love the EPOV - looking into his mind is indeed a wondrous, frustating, experience. I don't know whether to comfort him or beat the sh*t out of him. (This is my first comment and I'm not sure what the language rules are here so I don't mean to be offensive). I only hope he learns some lessons after all this futile and unnecessary Bella - and yes, Edward - suffering.
hoping there is at least an ETA for the next chapter. This story has just drawn me in. Thanks for sharing it!!
Author's Response: A) I don't vet offended. Have I not "shitfuckdamn" 'd at all in my A/N's? Hmm... That doesn't sound like me...must rectify. Lmao. Secondly. I legit lol'd at the story about your daughter calling. I know all too well what that is like. I have slugged off many a friend and family member because Tattward, Stutterward, or SECRETward are beckoning me. Like a true addict.
ETA on next chappy is within a week. It's been sent off to beta number one. The ball is rolling. I'm so glad you are enjoying so much, I can't tell you what it means to me. THANK YOU!!! Hearts, Air xox
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 05:34 AM · On: Departed
i trust you & would very much like to read the next chapter. like now please
Author's Response: Haha.... Okay! I just sent it in. You will have it soon ;) Thanks buddy! Xox
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 04:58 AM · On: Shattered
oh no!
Reviewer: shiningblueangel (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 03:56 PM · On: Departed
I trust you...to hopefully get the next chapter out soon!!!
Reviewer: samieve2408 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 10:25 AM · On: Departed
i trust you...i love the intensity and detail of this chapter...i do hope however that you lead the story line towards a more positive, albeit a hardship for Edward and Bella, direction...i can't wait to see how Edward attempts to fix his major bone-headed screw-up...please post soon can't wait for long!!
Author's Response: That's precisely where it is headed. Hard won but from here out it is the path of recovery. Thanks for all the support and patience, this damn story is just so hard to write.... But it's coming soon. xox
Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 06:01 PM · On: Find Me
Not the Voltari. I hate the whole Voltari thing.
Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 05:37 PM · On: Love Me
They should just light a match to Tanya and get it over with.
Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Touch Me
Oh for God's sake Edward has himself a wife or something. You have to be kidding.
Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 02:39 PM · On: Immortal
I just found your story and it is really pulling me in. Can't wait for the big meeting.
Author's Response: Yay!!! Enjoy. And also...preemptively...I'm sorry. This story should come with a wussperv rating of like 3% or something. But there will be an HEA...eventually. Also, if the angst gets you down I have another light lovestory on FFN called Secret Sex. It's a guaranteed smile! lol. Which you will need after ACE *hides* Thanks for the review. Enjoy! xox
Author's Response: Yay!!! Enjoy. And also...preemptively...I'm sorry. This story should come with a wussperv rating of like 3% or something. But there will be an HEA...eventually. Also, if the angst gets you down I have another light lovestory on FFN called Secret Sex. It's a guaranteed smile! lol. Which you will need after ACE *hides* Thanks for the review. Enjoy! xox
Reviewer: arusso17 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 10:49 AM · On: Departed
When is happy Bella going to come back? This is so sad. They belong together.
Author's Response: Very very soon. And yes. Yes they do. Ps: if youre looking for an Ngstvantidote. Check out my other story Secret Sex on FFN. I literally wrote it to combat my own turmoil in writing this. It is all fun, fluff, and lemons. Hearts! Air xox
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