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Reviewer: ldybug1701 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 11:11 AM · On: Haunting

Bella is so stubborn.  I can't believe she actually thinks that Edward left her two times.  She's the one that left this time.  I would be pretty pissed about Tanya too.    Yeah for Edward being so persistant.  Don't give up on Bella.

Reviewer: AlexandraK (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 09:30 AM · On: Haunting

Still love this story! Hoping for a Bella/Edward reunon soon:)
Update soon pleeeaaase! 

Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 07:54 AM · On: Haunting

Bella the emo.

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 07:38 AM · On: Haunting

well, that was just depressing as all hell my dear - i bet the forum is freakin out

Reviewer: saene (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 05:00 AM · On: Haunting

tough chaptr

Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 01:54 AM · On: Haunting

I really loved this story for so long. Now I feel like actions are on slow motion and I'm just not grasping it. I feel like I need to wait 10 chapters to read again....

Reviewer: VampireinBetsey (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 11:21 PM · On: Haunting

So amazing and desperately needed! I was thrilled to see that you updated. Please don't make me wait too long for the next one. Bella was worrying me for awhile there but the chapter ended with a bit hope. She's not going to be able to go numb and forget about Edward anymore. This is a great sign! Slowly but surely. Your writing was beautiful, the way you captured Bellas depression and feelings about Edward was similar to poetry.

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Reviewer: ladyjumana (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 10:46 PM · On: Immortal

Excellent build up to the "first" meeting of Edward and Bella. I am very interested in what happens next.

Reviewer: KnoKnayme (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 08:43 PM · On: Haunting

GREAT chapter!

Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Haunting

Ugh, it's so painful to read, but so well written. 

I can't stand to see B like this and I can only imagine E's side of this chapter.

Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 07:22 PM · On: Haunting

You are evil you know that? How could Bella be this way!!!!!!!Edward HAS to make her come around!!!! He Just HAS To!!!!!

 

Loved the chapter! keep up the great work!

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 07:09 PM · On: Haunting

You read and you ache.

You read and frustration begins to gnaw at your insides. How can you resist him? How can you stand before him, witness his agony, and turn away? Continue to turn away?

You read some more and resentment grabs hold of you. How can you? How can you be so cruel?

But it is then that memories flood your mind, consume your heart, and suffocate your soul. You remember. You are Bella.

“I had wanted it once.  I wanted all of it – all of him.  Once upon a time, I begged and cried with my arms flung around his neck.  I offered him all of myself in exchange for a long and happy life together.  Our forever.  All I wanted was him.  His smile, his laugh, his eyes upon mine, his hands on my skin.  I was willing to leave behind everyone and everything for him. 

I lived for him.  It was not enough.  I begged to die for him.  He left.

 I died anyway and now I was alone.  All of it was his choice.  Never, not once, had I been granted my own choice in my fate.  But no one could deny me that license ever again.”

You read this and choke in despair. How could you not turn away?

Oh Bella. There is so much healing that has yet to begin.

But because we love your love story, we hold on tight to the faith that pain, longing, and loneliness will be conquered, extinguished, eradicated.

We have faith in your resurrection. In his. In your love’s.

We’ll hold on for you.

And we won’t let go.

 

 

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 06:21 PM · On: Haunting

This is SO intense.  I love it.  THey have both suffered so much.  THey need eachother now.  This was a briliant insight into Bella's mind.

Reviewer: Starnani21 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 05:54 PM · On: Haunting

Our patience and love??!! What the hell is up with Edward??!! Say something!!! Do something!!! Edward, work for her!!! Yell, and shout, and grab, and shake, and plead, and beg, and grovel... You have to let her know how you feel!!! 

Okay, I think I am waaaay tooo caught up in this story now. 

I totally looking forward to what Edward has to say about all this. He can't possibly think that Bella would easily put herself back out there to be crushed for a third time! He is the one with something to prove. Dammit Edward!

Reviewer: GGSophie (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 05:38 PM · On: Haunting

I bloody well care! Damn it I want kissy kissy a la chapter 6 ;) As if she wasn't a stubborn enough human now she's stubborn vampire mule gahhhh! rant over just need to vent for a sec...this story right now is just sooo gahh..trusting in HEA

Reviewer: Nicoconsd (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 05:37 PM · On: Haunting

Oh my heart just kept breaking a little more and more for Edward after each event.  Poor guy after all these years of searching Bella is just a mess.  I was sooooo happy that there at the very end it seems like there was a crack in her non-emotional mess :)

Reviewer: 80sChick00 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Haunting

Wow - so emotional & intese.  I don't know where they could possibly go from here.  Thanks for keeping me in suspense & emotionally invested in this story.  I am so glad that the next chapters are already started because I don't know how long I can wait.  You picked the perfect title for this chapter.  I was haunted by it!

Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 05:18 PM · On: Haunting

Well, my friend! That was well worth the wait! - Almost- J/k! It was! But you know we all would LOVE updates more frequently! :) 

I am still loving your wonderful fic, and I cannot wait for more!

As much as I want a HEA, you're right...Bella deserve's more, and frankly Eddie deserves a bit more pain and suffering...it does suck a bit tho!

Thanks for updating! I loved seeing this in my inbox!

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 05:00 PM · On: Haunting

Thanks for the update! I was hoping they might start finding their way back to eachother, but that would be too easy after all the misconceptions Bella has in her head. Anxiously waiting for the next chapter!! =)

Reviewer: GoldenSun (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 04:49 PM · On: Haunting

Why won't Edward just tell Bella that Tanya was a huge skanky bitch, and that he did nothing wrong?!? Gahhh! Why must she be so stubborn! Give him a chance to explain himself! Sorry, it's not your fault, I love your story, really I do, I've just never liked Bella, lol.

Reviewer: coloradowoman (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 03:47 PM · On: Haunting

Holy shit!  She needs some vamp anti-depressants STAT!  I don't think I've ever seen such a depressed Bella; she is the depths of dispair.

and I can't fucking believe she went back to Viktor.  I guess I understand, but but I still can't believe it.  It's not gonna work, Bella. 

This chapter was worth the wait.

 

Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 03:24 PM · On: Haunting

He hurt me.  He left me.  He chose a life without me.  He did this.  Not me.   

Yep. Edward chose this path, he needs to walk it.        

Nothing he could say or do could change the things that had already been done – the countless ways he and his family had deceived me.  The pain of betrayal ran too deep.  It was unreachable and irrevocable.  It would forever be a part of me – a cavernous well of pain that I would have to carry with me for eternity. 

It would be nice if the Cullens ever admitted their guilt; their atrocious actions. They betrayed her and they don't seem to care; it's all "poor Edward. Bella has to come back so he'll feel better." FUCK that.

And Rose must DIE!

Reviewer: Rachel000 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 03:12 PM · On: Haunting

Excellent chapter, can't wait to see how they start hashing it out

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 03:11 PM · On: Haunting

Honestly, I just want Bella to find the freaky jungle witch and get her memories erased so she can start over. I just can't forgive Edward, but I hate the suffering and utter emptiness of her current existence. I may not be a fan of Viktor but as far as I know he hasn't lied to her or made promises he hasn't kept. It seems like he genuinely cares for her. If he lets them go just because Bella said, that says something of his feelings for her. I don't forgive easily so seeing Edward having to watch Bella walk away, reminiscent of his walking away from Bella so long ago, was satisfying. Yeah, it hurts to see the love of your life reject you, don't it? Fucker.

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: avidreader4 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 02:40 PM · On: Haunting

im so glad to get an update. i love this story and can't wait to see where it leads!

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