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Reviewer: ivebeentwilighted (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Alone
cant wait to read about the inevitable meeting of Bella and Edward. more, please! :)
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Unforgiven
"I, on the other hand, have never been able to move on fully, which we all knew would be one of the consequences of our departure. Vampires mate for life; it’s what we do and we're good at it. And God help anyone that gets in the way of this mating. I got in my own way. I've yet to forgive myself."
beautifully heartbreaking!! I think this is the first time someone has put into words exactly why edward could not move on!! Well done :)
Author's Response: wow, thanks, thats just... wow... thanks. huge smile, thanks so much!
Reviewer: tazzded (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Alone
What an awesome first 2 chapters. I am really enjoying this so far. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: JayJayHale (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Alone
Ooooo I'm intrigued! Keep going it is very good!
Reviewer: pillowbiter (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Alone
oh i wish there was more to read than just the two chapters! I like where the story is going and am very curious to read more!
Reviewer: edward08 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Alone
good update soon
Reviewer: lizzy_koh (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Alone
More Please, liking it so far. Lizzy
Reviewer: adipocere (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Alone
Interesting thus far. I like it.
Reviewer: stb551 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Alone
Waiting impatiently to see what's on the other side!
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Alone
i love it. just wish for more action, but still. update soon please
Reviewer: kARLOTITA09 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Alone
good start can't wait to see where u take this one.
Reviewer: SuperFrog101 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Alone
yay cant wait for a meeting
Reviewer: Rinna (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Alone
Great story, can't wait to see where thist goes. I'm excited to read about Bella and Edward's first encounter as vampires.....
Reviewer: artsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Alone
I am so excited for this story! Your writing is fantastic and you've really set up the story well. But waiting for more?...Agony!
Reviewer: ryan ninea (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Alone
I am very intrigued by your story so far. I can't wait to see what is on the other side of the sound!
Author's Response: oh you know what's on the other side of the sound ;)
Reviewer: cornel (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Alone
this story is very good! I like the EPOV but we all know how guilty Edward feels for everything, for merely existing! But Bella's POV was very good, I couldn't imagine her being any different than how you've described her, given this particular circumstance.
Can't wait to read the rest and Edward's reaction to the news of Bella's current status.
Reviewer: MarrryMeFirst (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Alone
I really like it. I think it will get very interesting when they see each other again. I was a bit worried when you said before the chapter that she wasn't alone as I was thinking a romantic interest, but this seems much more suitable.
Reviewer: MarrryMeFirst (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Alone
I really like it. I think it will get very interesting when they see each other again. I was a bit worried when you said before the chapter that she wasn't alone as I was thinking a romantic interest, but this seems much more suitable.
Reviewer: smiles (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Alone
Good story so far I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Nessy (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Alone
Please continueto right this book!! And quickly...
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 11:02 AM · On: Alone
You certainly have a way with your words. Eager for next chapter...
Reviewer: Queen of Six (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Unforgiven
I tend to prefer all human fic, but I really like where this is going!
Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Alone
Beautifully written. I like that she acknowledges Edward's distaste for the creature she is, or at least that is her thought. As hard as Bella was on herself as human, I can't imagine the struggle she would have now. Loving her perfect vampire, her vampire loathing himself, believing there was no soul to save, and now she is his equal - she is what she feels he hates, a monster.
Your Edward POV was well done, but your Bella POV was spot-on. Can't wait for more. Thank you.
Author's Response: Oh my gosh THANK YOU!!! About thinking my BPOV was "spot on" because I struggled and reworked it a million times! I find it so much easier to be in self-loathing little Eddies head than in B's. Yeah, I'm glad in the end it came out alright. Made my day, thanks!
Just posted ch3 so it will b up soon, make sure to check it out and lemme know what you think.
Reviewer: chellik (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Alone
i like i like
please update sooonish!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Alone
I so love it. Update sooN!
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