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Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Trembling

Okay so not sure what to say other than...IT WAS AWESOME!!! Can't wait for the next chapter. LOVED IT!!!!

Reviewer: angelgirl (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 11:17 PM · On: Trembling

Great Job!!!!!!!!!  Loved it.   Very proud of you.  It appears I'm not the only one loving it.

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Trembling

hmm what now? well I'm assuming Bella gets to tell Edward that Laurent paid a visit to the house... and now here she is... wonder how that'll go over? lol

Reviewer: geek_chic (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Trembling

oh my, that chapter just made my heart race like nothing else!

please update soon

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Trembling

What now?

Reviewer: LLE2006 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Trembling

I was not expecting his reaction. I like it. I would have liked it better if she knocked him to the ground instead of just slapped him. She so didn't deserve that comment.

Reviewer: breecreely (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 09:34 PM · On: Alone

very well written. like it i do

Reviewer: sanariaelm (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 09:31 PM · On: Trembling

I love how you portrayed Edward. Despite the rage, he still has very human insecurities and I loved how they played out in his mind after seeing Bella. The thought, "can she tell I still love her," struck me so deeply. Please update again soon!! 



Author's Response:

*wipes eyes* sniff sniff...

"Struck me deeply..."  Seriously?  Sigh... thats what its all about.  This is why i love you!

Air

xox

Reviewer: cornel (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Trembling

This is a beautiful story so far and I also like your writing style. I’m glad I came across it.


 


Edward’s reaction was something I most definitely did not expect. But I guess it would be logical for him to react like that. He had left in the first place to avoid anything bad happening to Bella, including her being turned to a vampire. He’s been missing her for so long and he never stopped loving her. Adding the confusion and the memory of Bella asking all the time become a vampire as well as having her right in front of him all of a sudden, I’d say it was a reasonable reaction. And of course Bella’s counter reaction was great, slapping him!


 


Any chance having the next chapter soon?

Reviewer: oceanluvr3 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Trembling

He is such a self-centered bastard. I kind of hope she ignores his questions and treats him with indifference... He is not why she is there any way. I hope she finds out about the little girl and tells him to go to hell. She owes him nothing... He does not deserve to know anything about her.  

Edward is still reacting and behaving like a child... well a teenage boy.

What a complete jackass... I can't believe he would say something so hurtful... yes, I can he already tore her heart to pieces.

Sorry, I am just so angry at him... it is always all about Edward. And he is so self deceived that he really believes he does things for her good.  

Great chapter,



Author's Response:

YES! HAHAHAHA  I love it!  Another rant review... I feel your angst believe me!  And I live for these ranters... totally validates me and makes me feel all warm and tingly that my nonesense can affect you so much.  Because my mind is warped and sick and wrong so I revel in it!

lol :)

Air

xox

Reviewer: Rainwatter (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Trembling

LOVED IT!!!! I can't wait to read more, and I hope the next chapter is as up and down as this one!

Reviewer: Veritas Found (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Trembling

Just stumbled on this tonight, and I'm decidedly hooked.  Love the rollercoaster this chapter was, and I love the idea behind the story.  Definitely gonna be keeping tabs on this one from now on.  C=

(Gotta note: she slapped him!  Thank you for that!  =D  I'm twisted, I know, but I love fics that have Bella slapping Edward - especially when they're in situations like this.  She doesn't do that nearly as often as she should.  <3)

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Trembling

HOLY. HELL. I haven't been riveted like that in a damn long time! I swear I don't think I blinked even once....nope, eyes are stinging now. No blinking at all!

I find completely fascinating that Edward's instinctive reaction is accusatory and hostile, rather than loving and embracing. But then again, passion is passion, no matter the form. This can only get better.

If you love us at all you will post more asap! 



Author's Response:

I love you dearly, you know this ;)

I am hammering on the laptop as we speak... er... whatever.... finalizing the deets for chapter 5.  TZ is the bestest ever so she'll be good to you and give it a speedy turn around.  Assuming all my sensless yammering at least makes some semblence of grammerical sense lol!

Air

xox

Reviewer: crazygreenfrog (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Trembling

Holy crap! I started reading your story and couldn't stop. And then you had to go and leave it on a cliff hanger! ugh. lol. Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: Vampgurl20 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Trembling

i love this story, update soon!!!

Reviewer: 5rockstars (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Trembling

awesome! more please!

Reviewer: JeannieRoss (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Trembling

So far I love it! I cant wait to see how the rest of this reunion plays out.  I love the conflicted emotions from both Bella and Edward!  Cant wait for an update!

Reviewer: twilightlover90 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Trembling

sooo i was on my laptop and 12 at night and decided to go on twilighted and i saw this story and let me tell u this is great! i love how bella is already a vampire and that she isnt fragile like in a lot of other fics i really hope u update soon even though u already did but i really want to know how bella is reacting to edward seeing her please keep up the goodness!!!!!



Author's Response:

Bella has her "fragile" moments, but dont we all - other than that there is not a lot of weak and puny Bella in this fanfict (what makes it unique???).

Not ooc Bella either, just... real, normal, pissed - but willing to be reasonable... human?

Air

xox

Reviewer: CSmith (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Trembling

This chapter was so freaking fantastic!!! I loved it, so not the typical "reunion" scene like in other fanfics, this was great! Can't wait for more! PLEASE please please update soon!

Reviewer: mopstyle (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Trembling

what now! oh no! too much hostility. its a great great story. i love it. and i realize the anger is necessary. but edward shouldn't be the one flinging the hate. i'm sure bpov will be equally acidic, but edward needs to realize that this is what he's wanted all along. that he needs to get over himself already and let it be what it is. he should get on his knees and beg her to forgive him. beg and grovel and plead. and she should, eventually. certainly not right away. now i'm rambling, or taking out some frustration or something, sorry. but you asked for it. :) nothin' but love. 



Author's Response:

*love love love love*

Just giving it back... I love the rant reviews, theyre totally my fave.  It strokes the ego in a very carnal way... Like "yeah thats right, youre totally flustered... I did that to you!"

HAHAHA, you see where this is leading ;)

Keep the love coming!

Air

xox

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Trembling

I love it. so much different than the others, so intense, so...perfect. I love it. Updat soon, please

Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Trembling

love it.. i love how completely thrown off they are... how they can't seem to control themselves at all... and have no clue how to handle it... should be interesting ot see how they work through the next few minutes...

Reviewer: windchime (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Trembling

Really enjoying this very much.  It's interesting to see a "reunion" scene that isn't hearts and flowers.  I look forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: m244robp (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Trembling

That was cool.  A little long on the emotions, but very good. 

Well... What now?

Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Trembling

Woo hoo! Good going Bella. Kick his ass!

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