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Reviewer: mauge (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Stay
Update faster!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 05:17 PM · On: Stay
Yay! They made a little progress. Good chapter!
Reviewer: xxsiriahcullenxx (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 03:29 PM · On: Stay
are we ever going to find out wat happened with tanya and assward ?????????????????
Author's Response: Yes. Very soon. Updates resuming this week. The whole fic should finish up fairly quickly :)
Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 10:18 AM · On: Stay
Hooray! *claps hands* You updated! That made my day :) Beautiful imagery as usual, you definitely have a way with words.
My heart hurts for Bella, and Eddie, and freaking Vik (he's one of those villains you love you hate. I think). Baby steps, but we're getting there...slowly... ;p
Ha! I'll definitely be sticking around for more - no worries there! You have me hooked. I love your story, thanks for sticking with it!
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 02:38 AM · On: Stay
so bella has "woken" up to the world around her!!
Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 04:49 PM · On: Stay
Finally! My Goodness!!! :) Come on Bella you're almost there!!!! :) Great chapter!!!! :D
Reviewer: TwilightAddict_NYC (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 04:40 PM · On: Stay
Dude, I want to stay but its been over a year.... is the end even near?
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 04:27 PM · On: Stay
where else would i go?
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 02:40 PM · On: Stay
This was beautiful!!! My heart breaks for both them. THey have both endured so much pain and separation. I am still angry at him, but, I want them back together. I LOVE this story!
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 12:14 PM · On: Stay
Will she finally really give their love another chance? Please Bella!!!
Reviewer: AlexandraK (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 09:56 AM · On: Stay
Can't wait to read more! Hoping for a BellaEdward-reunion or someting in the next chapter, or the one after. As always, please update soon
Reviewer: jmlwelborn (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 09:46 AM · On: Unforgiven
Thank goodness...
J
Reviewer: duchess_amy (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 07:45 AM · On: Stay
I almost wish I could say poor Edward but Bella is right, he really did bring this all on himself. But then again, she never gave him a chance to explain himself when she ran from him.
It would be nice if Bella would choose a different venue to sort this all out with Edward... far away from creepy Viktor and his creepy club.
When she first ran from Edward, she had been, I guess almost stunned by someone's powers. Is she still feeling the effects of that or had she really retreated inside herself?
Reviewer: MKiefer (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 05:52 AM · On: Stay
Damnit Bella! Stop being so stubborn! I get her pain but what more can Edward do??? He's trying! I can't wait for the next chapter (sooner than later?Eh?) where HOPEFULLY Bella breaks down a little more and let's Edward in.
As always u know I lurve this story! Muah!
Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 12:06 AM · On: Stay
I still think he should suffer more. He went on without her and got with Tanya - if their positions were reversed, she wouldn't have moved on to someone else so soon, if at all. That was true betrayal, and why she was so broken. Yup, he needs more payback...
Reviewer: coloradowoman (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 11:42 PM · On: Stay
Unbelievable chapter! so glad you updated! love this story!
Reviewer: SiobhanDeRoiste (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 10:53 PM · On: Stay
woohoo were getting somewhere! ive missed this story it's one of my favourites, please update soon :D
Reviewer: Meikela (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 09:48 PM · On: Stay
Ay dios mio. Your Bella makes me tired. But I'm glad to see this story come back...
Reviewer: Nicoconsd (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 08:57 PM · On: Stay
Yay! I always get so excited when I see you have updated! And woo hoo Bella is finally giving Edward a chance :) I can't wait to see how their talks go down and hopefully they can ease some of their pain but I am looking forward to the journey there :)
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 08:02 PM · On: Stay
I gotta admit, I'm a little irritated with Edward and his summation on the situation. What did Bella do wrong in his opinion that made the situation what it is? I can't recall anything. All I remember is Edward breaking Bella over and over again, not the other way around. What, she didn't go looking for him after she became a vampire? He told her he didn't want her! So she should have come looking for him without an ounce of pride or self respect to beg him to love her? I don't think so.
So glad you updated! Thanks so much!
Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 07:42 PM · On: Stay
interesting chapter! I liked it! Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: twi-hard4ever (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 07:39 PM · On: Stay
i think the next chap should be in alice POV telling about things going on back home then after that i REALLY want bella to take edward back!!!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 07:36 PM · On: Stay
What you can possibly say, Edward?
Oh, Edward....what will you say?
How do you even begin to explain how you never once looked in on Bella? Not once in 44 years did your frozen heart surrender to a greater need of checking on her. You selfish, selfish man.
What you cared most about in those very long 44 years where you knew nothing of her life was the need to remain unknowing of her fate, for the very knowledge of her possible happiness would devastate your vacant soul. But did your selfish needs ever once succumb to the possibility of Bella's misery or downfall? Did you ever once bother to wonder if she was even alive? She could've been dead many of those 44 years while you lived on, moved on, walked the earth without her. She could have laid still, breathless, loveless in a rain soaked grave while you watched sunrise after sunset.
You abandoned her and never even looked back. That breaks the heart.
She can forgive so much, Edward. She can understand the endless complexity that is you. She always has.
But to have gone on for so many years and left her with an unknown life ahead of her, how do you explain that Edward? You were with Tanya. Whatever you may say or however you may defend it, you touched someone who wasn't HER. You were CAPABLE of touching someone else. That alone is enough of a betrayal to warrant the most agonizing of disbelief.
But if I know Bella, she'll find a way of explaining that to some desperate need of yours to feel something other than nothing, that very nothing you left your precious Bella with on a cold, damp forest floor.
But the abandonment that spanned the course of 44 years? You better make this good, Edward. This better be spectacular. Because damnit, the want and need to forgive you is more crippling than we can bare. But your greatest problem right now is Bella's ability to forgive you anything at all.
You just might have killed her soul, as you once had always feared. May God help you in reviving it long enough to listen to you beg for love.
Oh Edward, there's just so damn much to forgive AGAIN.
Godspeed.
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 07:32 PM · On: Stay
well that was interesting to say the least at least we are MAKING procress FINALLY!!!!! lol well until next time
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 07:22 PM · On: Stay
will she go back to edward? will vik get the hint and step off?
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