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Reviewer: evildoer (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Restraint

I'm really enjoying this story. Loved how Edward reacted with anger after he saw Bella! Love the tension.

Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Restraint

ack!!! soo good.... want to know what edward is thinking... want to see what happens... sooo good.... can't wait for the next chapter...

Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Restraint

Ah, this is so good!  I love it!

Reviewer: Elle1310 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Restraint

Story is awesome. I like that Bella isn't bitter and twisted like other stories where she is reunited with Edward. I think it is more true to character. Keep going with the story... again I love it.

Reviewer: edwardsmine (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Restraint

Ugh.  Thank you.  I love this story.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Restraint

Great chapter. Update soon.

Reviewer: skymykel (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Restraint

WOW!!  What a tearful reunion!  I am so excited to see what comes next, so hurry and write more...lol  GREAT JOB and HAPPY WRITING!!!!

Reviewer: berdb (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Restraint

Jeez.....she caved kind of quick.

Reviewer: megdspilman (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 04:25 PM · On: Restraint

Oh.. such a tease! You really are a temptress :)

They need to have more time together... alone before she reconnects with the Cullens. Just my opinion though :)

And a couple of quick questions, how is Bella's shield working to allow her to use other people's powers? I don't remember that from BD, so is that your own personal spin on what you think her shield can do? I know she can lift her shield to let people in, but how exactly is she able to hear Edward? Did I miss this somewhere else in your story?

Feel free to tweet me some answers :) I changed my screen name to @meganspilman.

Thanks girl! Great chapter! Hurry with the next one! :)



Author's Response:

Hey, so.... quoted from BPOV Chapter 3...

 

I made quick work of getting a good hold on my shield.  It was a tangible part of me now, every bit as much a part of me as my arms and legs.  I could feel it and manipulate it.  Push it and pull it.  I could use it to protect others and myself from mental offences or displace it entirely to leave me raw and vulnerable.  Or, as I was doing with the human, I could reverse its polarity, turning it inside out like a thin, sticky jellyfish vacuum to draw into it anything that was near enough, allowing me to turn another vampire's gift around onto its possessor.  Very convenient at times, this little toy of mine. 

 

I dunno if I explained it clearly enough there, but basically Iadded something that she can do with her shield that wasnt in BD, she can flip it inside out reversing its polarity and drawing in any surronding "gifts" and use them only on the vampire who possess them - ie: read Edwards mind.  I just think that after having the shield for so long shes learning more capabilities with it, not like totally making it something SM didn't, just that the more she toys with it the more she discovers about it, sorta thing ;)

 

Enjoy what comes next... you dirty birdies I know you will ;)

Air

xox

Reviewer: Meikela (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Restraint

Ooooh, this was a really, really good chapter. I so didn't want it to end!

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 04:16 PM · On: Restraint

aw, this was such an emotional chapter, will we get some happy times soon? i am really loving the story, it keeps getting better and better :)

Reviewer: breecreely (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Restraint

omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg!!!

Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Restraint

That was a brilliant look into Bella's mind. I think you captured it perfectly. I can't wait for the next chapter! I'll probably bawl my eyes out lol.

Reviewer: Flipper (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Unforgiven

I LOVE THIS FIC! the way you described how both bella & edward felt was so beautiful.  i really felt for both of them.  you're doing such a great job.  please update soon!!!!

Reviewer: blueeyeddemon (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Restraint

Nice, more please. I cant wait for Bella to meet the family again.

Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Restraint

I'd like them to eventually like HEA, but I don't think we are there yet.

Reviewer: veggiegirl0601 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Restraint

Just found this and I love it!  SO MUCH!  I can't wait for the next chapter and I wonder if we'll see some interaction between Collin, Jennifer, and the rest of the Cullens?  Xoxo

Reviewer: livin_it (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Restraint

Omg I LOVE this story and I can't wait for bella to be reunited with the rest of the family! This story is great so far!

Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Restraint

I'm glad Edward knows that she still wants him.  That's definitely good.  If they are going to work things out, he needs to understand how she feels, so he can fight for her.  Now he just needs to tell her the truth...and hoepfully bring her back to his family.

Reviewer: MyBloodSmellsBetter (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Restraint

Great chapter!!! I love the twist you gave Bella's gift :) Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: swingate (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 02:26 PM · On: Restraint

I just found this story!  I really am enjoying it!  I have no idea where it is going to lead, but I truly enjoy the fact that they ar still "Bella and Edward" even after so many years, and they still love each other madly, but don't know how exactly to get it out!  I am really hopin gyou keep this a light, sweet, and lemony story!

I am excited to read the next chapter!

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Restraint

Gah! Don't leave us there! Oh please update soon. I am loving this story so far.

Reviewer: vighnigh (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Restraint

i'm not sure i took a single breath while reading this last chapter. please write the next one quickly

Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Restraint

Aw, Bella! Don't wimp out now! He needs a lesson!

Reviewer: nautical (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Restraint

I love that she can hear his thoughts when she lifts her shield.  Man, I was really hoping for a kiss at the end of this chapter.  We better get one in the next installment.  : )

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