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Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 04:31 PM · On: Go

These two lines stood out to me:  

"Regrets Bella…I’m consumed by them."...Although I am still so furious with Edward, his pain, like Bella's, is palpable.

"It slowly sank in that the hope was what I wanted."...This is progress 

 

 



Author's Response:

Buddy.  I know you didn't say much, but im all sobbing weepy at thsi review.  Stupid hormones!  Thank you , yet again!

xox

Reviewer: newmommyak (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 04:08 PM · On: Go

Finally! :)

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 03:51 PM · On: Go

will bella destroy viktor? cause i think he needs a good butt whoppin! will they get back together?

Reviewer: alycaly (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 06:04 AM · On: Stay

I'm really liking this story. The timeline does confuse me a bit sometimes, though. I am looking forward to the next update!

Reviewer: alycaly (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 05:22 PM · On: Leave Me

This chapter is really heartbreaking!! You wrote the emotions into it very well. 

Reviewer: pink ink (Anonymous) · Date: February 08, 2011 07:17 AM · On: Stay

I miss this story so much!! I've been checking for the update every day for months. ...so just a note of encouragement here....this is the best unfinished story out there, and we all truly appreciate you. Thank you.

Author's Response: Awwwwww thank you!!!! Updates will resume beginning this week nthank younSO MUCH for the continued support, it means so much to me! Hugs! Air xox

Reviewer: xdaizyx (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 10:29 AM · On: Stay

Okay, I've stayed... but are you ever going to relieve the tension?  Please post again!



Author's Response: Updates are resuming beginning in a few days. My apologies. Thank you so much!!

Reviewer: Mrs_Rug (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 07:30 AM · On: Immortal

This is good. I can't wait to read Edward's reaction when he sees her.

Reviewer: Dreamerbyday (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 06:24 PM · On: Stay

I am loving your story, and anxiously awaiting a new chapter!



Author's Response: Thank you for your patience, I know it isn't easy. Your continued support means so much to me. Updates are resuming beginning this week :) hugs! Air xox

Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 04:42 PM · On: Haunting

its been so long since ive had time to read anything. it looks like youve been busy & havent put up many chapters. im actually grateful for that, haha

Reviewer: Dreamerbyday (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2010 01:36 PM · On: Stay

I am completey enamored with your story and your writing. I anxiously await the next chapter!

Reviewer: Snuffy10 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 04:55 AM · On: Stay

Will you post a new chapter for the new year? I miss this story, I am dying to find out what Bella decides to do and how Edward will deal. Enjoy your holiday and take care of yourself and your coming bundle of joy!!

Reviewer: zgp3 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2010 03:48 PM · On: Stay

I just read the whole story in a few days. I noticed it hasn't been updated in a while. Please update soon. It's one of the better E and B fanfics.

Author's Response: Thanks buddy. Updates are resuming this week and the whole story should finish quickly. Hugs! Air xox

Reviewer: zgp3 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 02:37 PM · On: Find Me

Wonderful job building the suspense. There are too many new moon stories where they get back together right away and then there is nowhere for the story to go after that.

Reviewer: zgp3 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 09:49 AM · On: Alone

I've just started your story but am enjoying it very much.

Reviewer: Nyddi (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2010 12:36 PM · On: Haunting

You're killing me! Killing me! And you KNOW It. You know what you're capable of. God, you're brilliant. Please give me more. I am definitely inspired. I'll make sure to mention this fic on my next ff.net fic update. And I'll also blame you for all the delicious torture I put Edward through :::cheeky smile:::

 

What can I say? You've officially become my inspiration. Now give me more before I run dry, oh brilliant one, hehe.

Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 05:25 AM · On: Stay

more please???

Reviewer: aechorp (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 09:01 AM · On: Stay

Hay wait a minute it is over??? I got lost in all the last chaper stuff. Thanks for the fun read but I would like some more closure;)

Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 12:19 PM · On: Stay

Exciting stuff! I was starting to get worried there... that Edward had no chance whatsoever! But at least she's talking to him. It's fasinating that her human memories of him are trying to break through.

Reviewer: Gogsnkay (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 10:36 PM · On: Touch Me

Nooooo!!! You denied me lemony goodness for TANYA!!!! I am presuming it is Tanya and she will be the massive spanner in Edward and Bella's way and it was all going so well too. Mind you I did wonder if they get it on now what's the story? Where's the angst? ;0) Love your writing.

Reviewer: marukawa (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 01:54 AM · On: Stay

ooo can't wait!

Reviewer: LWren (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 07:56 AM · On: Stay

ERIN BATT…if I did not like you so much I would be angry with you right now!  What an excellently written ACE chapter which had me on such an emotional roller-coaster that I had to read it twice just to make sure I absorbed it all.  A few times there I thought I was going to stop breathing before getting to the next line!!  Talk about captivating an audience to see what the next move would be between these two.  I wanted to shake Bella silly and slap some sense into her for a second there.  And, I was so afraid that Edward was going to walk away and leave, but I thought “NO WAY SILLY BOY – YOU’VE COME TO FAR” only to walk away from her again.  But, Edward is Edward and does make some stupid moves at times.  Thank god he was just composing his thoughts…LOL - (wipes sweat beads away from forehead).  Sometimes I just can’t take the angst; you really scared me with that one scene - not funny!  I can truly understand Bella’s hesitation a wee-little-bit, but she has to know deep down inside they are truly meant to be together mind, body and soul.


 


So, MISSY just how much more angst do we have to take before light is at the end of the tunnel…(profusely tapping foot here with hands on hips).  Don’t make me take a Xanax…LOL!


 


Good job Erin…very good job!!  Okay off to read it once again to make sure no stone was left unturned.


 


Hugs and xoxo…Cheryl



Author's Response: Thanks as always buddy. Updates are resuming again beginning this week, possibly today. Hugs! Air xox

Reviewer: Snuffy10 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 02:55 PM · On: Stay

OMG Air, this was so freeking awesome!!!! please you have to not keep me hanging.....I want no I CRAVE more!!!! She has got to be with EDWARD!!! and they eventually have to have some hot make up lustful SEX!!!!!!!

Keep up the awesome work!!! I will stressfully await your next chapter.

 

Reviewer: Alliez (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 11:48 AM · On: Stay

I don't really care how long it takes you to update, I always love it when you do. It's so, so good. I can feel everything. It makes my chest tight while I am waiting to see if she breaks down or if she makes him go. This is so bad, but now I can't remember, did he really sleep with Tanya? I have to go back and reread.

Reviewer: LucyLu (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 05:45 PM · On: Stay

This is such a beautiful mess, the plot, not your writing! Your portrayal of Bella's struggle to remain numb is so compelling. Thanks for the update!

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