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Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Touch Me

err... Edward ended up pairing with Tanya sometime during the 40yrs? uh oh.. this is about to get REALLY interesting! And sadly painful for Bella :(

Reviewer: passionmama (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 08:17 AM · On: Touch Me

So far I have loved it.  Ohhhh but the suspense is killing me.  Really Victoria??? If Edward resisted for 80 plus years, what is another 45???? HA  Just killing me.  Great job, I look forward to the next chaper.

Reviewer: swingate (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Touch Me

WHAT??????  Are you kidding...Tanya?  Wow, what a mood killer!  LOL!  I was SO EXCITED to see an update, please don't make us wait so long for the next one!  PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSE!

Reviewer: erhea (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Touch Me

NO!!!

Fucking no!!!

Tanya???

Bloody hell. What are you doing to me woman? How can she be there? And how can Edward be so stupid? I am so dissapointed by him. He is a complete ass... And Bella gives in way to easy! How can she? How dare he?

Please don't make me hate your Edward... Tell me that he didn't accept the icky strabery blonde bitch as his companion/wife/mate or whatever... I couldn't bear it if he did.

Truely the best cliff I ever encountered until now.

Hope you update soon.

Reviewer: KristyDi (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Touch Me

Please tell me Tanya (I'm guessing it's Tanya) is delusional and Edward wasn't involved with her. Eww!

 

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Leanne (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 05:41 AM · On: Touch Me

Just thinking about it - we always knew Tanya was put out that Edward didn't want her, so maybe she's still being the skank we love to hate and has spent the past 40 odd years trying to persuade him to have a bit. (I hope to god that he's had more sense than to take her up on it though). Maybe that's why Rosalie wasn't around, she'd taken Tanya out to distract her from Bella being there, and obviously didn't realise they'd come back to them getting it on?

I'm reaching, but I'm so hoping he never had a relationship with Tanya! And, I'm all for Bella laying claim to him and kicking some Denali ass!

Reviewer: Leanne (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Touch Me

In the words of Edward himself; “Oh, for bloody fucking hell!  C'mon!"   - please don't tell me he had decided to pass the years with Tanya! I can't bare Bella to have any more heart ache - they NEED to be together!

 

Love the story though, really interesting idea, and you tell it so well. Please don't be slow on the updates, I hate to be left hanging. I normally wait till stories are more or less complete before reading them so I can get totally sucked in but yours has caught me from the begining and now I have to wait around like everyone else!

 

Update! Please?

Reviewer: Lenore (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 05:14 AM · On: Touch Me

Oh no! He's not with Tanya is he??!! WHAT THE EFF!??! Bella needs to tear her to shreds!!!

Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 04:41 AM · On: Touch Me

Oh god. Not Tanya. Since when is Edward a big fat cheater with no conscience. Wouldn't someone mention her if they saw Edward's hand possessively on her back?

Oh crap, I hate waiting.

Reviewer: forever-his (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 04:36 AM · On: Touch Me

WHAT????!!!!  I am a little shocked, stunned, and wowed.  I love this story, but am at war with what is about to happen.  Please let it be something good and not bad :-(  Ok, I am going to stick it out and hope for the better.  I like happy Bella and Edward endings :-)



Author's Response:

I like those endings too... nothing too OOC is coming, I promise... just... you know, I mean, the boy has NEEDS right?  Forever is a REALLY long time to supress some stuff.  RAWR! Wish I was around to help ;)

xox

Reviewer: nautical (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 03:36 AM · On: Touch Me

Oh my goodness, who is she?!?!  i knew that a B/E would need more angst, but I didn't expect such a horrible evil cliffie.

Reviewer: greytmari (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:05 AM · On: Unforgiven

I told you so!!!!! I hope you are feeling REALLY loved right now!!!!!

Marilee in NC

greytmari@yahoo.com

Reviewer: Rainwatter (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 12:51 AM · On: Touch Me

AHHHHHH!!!! I can't handle the cliff...... please post ASAP!!! I have become addicted to your story and CANNOT wait for the next chapter! You have an absolute winner here!

Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 12:46 AM · On: Touch Me

OMFG I need more!!!  So, he's not single then?  Is he with Tanya?  Oh god, what's gonna happen?  Arghhhhhhhhhhh, please, please, please get typing some more :)

Reviewer: escapebe (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Touch Me

seriously, the best effing fanfic i've read in ages.

no lie.

utterly "stunning"!

never abandon this, please!

sooooo hot.

ugh, as much as i hate it, i effing love the twist!

very speechless, i must admit.

Reviewer: jessica_1_22 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Touch Me

OMGOMGOMG!!!! You are killing me here. I need more now!! Please write as fast as humanly possible.

Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:58 PM · On: Touch Me

No no no no! He hooked up with Tanya??!! Please update soon, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: jewelsie (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Touch Me

More! More!

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Touch Me

Tanya? Are you effing kidding me? Wow! I was so getting into the two of them getting it on. I also knew that the angst was far from over. Your writing is superb. I loved savoring every word. Bella is going to lose it for sure. Man...please update as soon as you can. I love this story!



Author's Response:

Thanks, in additions to hearing people like the plot... to comment on my writing style or quality is just... well... THAT is actualyl what it is all about.  Well, ok... that AND manybe a lil bit about getting B & E laid, lol!

Thank you so much!

air

coc

Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Touch Me

WHAT????  Please tell me no!  Did he end up with Tanya??

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Touch Me

Tanya? Are you effing kidding me? Wow! I was so getting into the two of them getting it on. I also knew that the angst was far from over. Your writing is superb. I loved savoring every word. Bella is going to lose it for sure. Man...please update as soon as you can. I love this story!

Reviewer: Simii (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Touch Me

OMG! are you kidding me??? Nooooo! lol

 

 

I love the story BTW :)

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Touch Me

TANYA? TANYA? TANYA? She better be messing with Edward, 'cause I swear I'm gonna flip out right now. But this is good....Bella is giving in WAY TOO EASILY here to Edward. Gotta make the vampire squirm even just a little Girl! 

And hey, I am so sick and tired of Edward using the 'how could you believe me when I said I didn't want/love you after all the times I did'. WTF? Bella believed you because WHY WOULDN'T SHE? From the very first moment, Bella had done nothing but trust Edward in every single possible way. She trusted his restraint, she trusted his love, she trusted him with her very life and soul, offering it to him forever. And so of course with that trust would come absolute faith in that every word he ever uttered to her was true. So in telling her he didn't want her, Edward succeeded in having Bella once again trust him completely. 

And yet he still has the nerve to question her AUDACITY in believing him? Seriously, someone needs to set this argument straight. I hope Bella does so soon, for her sake especially.

But again, TANYA? WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twi-addict (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Touch Me

What the hell?   Is that Tanya?  And if so, what is she doing there?   Ugh, you can't leave us hanging like this, I am totally dying right now!    Brilliant!  But really mean.  When is the next chapter coming?   Urgh, I love it!

Reviewer: Kaitlin17 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Touch Me

What happens next? I'm dying to know!

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