Erin!!!

Another great chapter! There really are a lot of layers to Bella's angst, huh? There's a lot of emotions that SM never tackled... I had never thought of all the ways Bella was ultimately betrayed by the Cullens... emotionally, physically, and now with Edward we have sexual betrayal as well. HEART WRENCHING!!

Again, I am SO excited to see Edward wallow in some of this himself. I hope he comes to realize the depth of Bella's dispair and the recourse for his notsowell thought out actions. I know you've got some great stuff up your sleeve.... I'm excited the chapters are updating faster so we don't have to wait in such agony!

Couple of questions/thoughts:

Does the river hold any significance? Like is Bella actually able to somehow cast thoughts or transfer emotion into a body of nature ... or was it just a symbolic casting away of thoughts? I guess I'm just hoping Edward can somehow stumble accross the river and just immediately know and feel Bella.... FEEL what he's done to her... Jumping the shark? Yeah maybe that's why I'm not a FF author ;) LOL

I was SO not excited to see Jake turn up but am super glad you made his role minimal... I hope if we do see him again, it continues to be a minimal presence. I am VERY curious to know who he imprinted on... cause by him imprinting it's suggested there's more than one "soulmate" of sorts for a werewolf... seeing as there's no existence of Renessmee, there was someone else out there for him?

So I mentioned that I'm a bit frustrated. Here's why: WHERE THE HELL IS BELLA GOING AND WHAT DOES SHE THINK SHE'S GONNA DO WHEN SHE GETS THERE? Is she going to Italy? Is she going to hand herself over to the Volturi? I think Bella is smarter than that. I think she wouldn't align herself with them... Please don't make me wait forever to know where the hell she is. Give us some hints?

Also WTF is the deal w/ Edward/Tanya. I know you said you'll be slowly revealing that to us, but I'm not sure at this point it's justifiable no matter what his intenions were. He should've never EVER brought Bella home without first explaining, let alone get her half naked and all worked up just to be like "oh sorry baby, let me explain..." Again.... don't make me wait forever to find this out... you're killing me... KILLING ME!

K... as always, love you love you love you. I think you're ridiculously talented and need to finish ACE stat and get your butt in gear working on your own stuff ;) After rereading Twi it's only making it more apparent how well written ACE is...

Now that I've written the first chapter to my own novel...

LOVE UR FACE!!!!!!!!!!

Meg

 

Author's Response:

GOOD LORD WOMAN WHERE DO I START.....

 

MSN....

 

;)

Poor Bella, I can't imagine what can b going through Jacob's mind as well. And, is Edward going to find them together or something? I want pay back! and beautiful Edy to SUFFER!!! muahahahaha (yeah I'm a bitch, but he soooooooooo deserves it).

I love this story, everytime there's an update I feel like Christmas is early this year!!! wooohooo!!!!

this was a really good chapter. I had wondered what happened with Jack and how she had said by to her dad. you answered those questions in this chapter. hopefully the next one will hold some good news!

Amazing chapter!  I wonder who Jake imprinted on?  Will Charlie ever find out she was there I wonder.  Will the Cullens carry on searching?

So much going on!!  Can't wait for more :)

Please tell me Bella and Edward end up together!! lol. This is a great story! Cannot wait for more!

awww how sad, can't wait for more, I hope you update again soon!

UU OO Tanya?

Still loving this story.  Now quite how I imagined there reunion to be, it's not quite as warm and fazzy.. lol but I like it.

Hope youdon't mind me sayign this, but watch out for drug and dragged.  He dragged me...  not he drug me.

K I'm reading on...

Very nicely done.  I'm glad Bella has some friends to be with.  No-one shoudl ever be alone.  I'm also happy to note that she hasn't moved past her feelings for Edward.

Can't wait until they meet.

Edward knew she was going to Forks, why didn't he just fly there? Good chapter though.  But I have to wonder is she not thinking with the rashness of a teenager.  She may have been a vampire for 45 years, but she had been leading a nomadic life which one does not set down roots and grow.

This story is starting to depress me, please tell me that something good is going to happen soon.

Author's Response:

Sorry, nothing "good" is about to happen.  Bu EVENTUALLY amazingly glorious things will happen.... they just have to get through the thick of it first. 

Hope you ride it out ;)

xox

Loved it!! Best chapter since #2 I swear...I felt all the raw and visceral pain that is Bella and what an entrance from Jacob!! You never cease to amaze me!! Cannot wait for an update and I will Email you tommorow as I am incoherant with exhaustion, BUT I had to read the update!! All the goodness is here!!!! Can't wait to pass the hardcopy around work tommorow and give you all of our reactions!! My "girls" (about 14  of us at work) are all reading it together and I always take in a hard copy when you update so they do not have to wait to read it (as we can't get on any web sites at work) and then we all discuss it by the end of the day......We are having such fun, you are the STAR of our first "Fanfic/book" club!!!!

Love ya bunches,

Marilee in NC 

Author's Response:

OMGOMGOMGOMG MARILEE!!!
I dont even know what to say.... thats just insanity.  Like, I think I freaking worship you for that!  Thats... gah! Speechless, truly! TYTYTY!!!

Air

xox