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Reviewer: missielynn (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 06:22 PM · On: I Know/Down And Out
love the story hate the graphic
Reviewer: rhepona (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Oh No You Didn't
Love Love Love. Oh Thank You, God. I mean, Thank You, 'nobloodnofoul'... I've been waiting for something like this chapter to happen for like, 3 chapters. YES! This was so hot! and perfect. It's so much more believable that he can't say ' I love you' yet . 'I feel strongly' really is enough, for right now, of course ;) The dialog along w/ the inner monologs is SO entertaining.
I hope James gets his ass kicked, at least eventually. And I wouldn't be opposed to more Bella-comforting-Edward time. I'm usually not a big WIP reader, but this story is absolutely fantabulous!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Oh No You Didn't
Sweet Mercy. My body is STILL quivering. You write PASSION with extraordinary depth and intensity. It's never vulgar or crass. It's rather beautiful. And I'm honored to read it. Please post more asap. I've come to love this. Truly, I do.
Reviewer: In Awe Of Fire (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Oh No You Didn't
Awww. Poor Bella. She might understand, but I sure as hell don't! Gah! Why didn't he just tell her he loved her?!? Gosh darn't!
~IAOF~
Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 10:00 AM · On: Oh No You Didn't
Great chapter, can't wait to read more! :D
Reviewer: rosedreamerr (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Oh No You Didn't
douchebagerry i dont even think i spelled it right... reminds me of dean.. come to think of it... so does the character of edward... nice chapter. keep them coming
Reviewer: Dramatic (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 05:22 AM · On: Oh No You Didn't
I love this fic! Edward is so freakin hot! Keep up the good work! I cant wait for the next chapter! :) Well done!
-Erin
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 04:17 AM · On: Oh No You Didn't
Yahhhhhh! Hotness!
Reviewer: lathechef (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 02:10 AM · On: Getting To Know You
very good loved it
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 12:31 AM · On: Oh No You Didn't
Oh wow... well she can't say he doesn't want her 'girly parts'. That was intense.
I loved the chapter. Can't wait to read more. What's going to happen at the fight? Please update soon.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Oh No You Didn't
Great chapter. Edward and his caveman ways....
He does have a point with Bella not letting people take care of her. She needs to see that she needs help sometimes too and Edward needs to see that he can't all caveman all the time.
I have a feeling that him not saying her statement back is going to back on both of them.
Please update soon?
Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Oh No You Didn't
Umm..that lemon was fucking delicious. And hmm..I wonder what the alternative reason Edward didn't say 'I love you' back to her was..Well I'm thinkin' something but I don't know if I'm right so I'll just keep it to myself! I love this story! It's not too soon for me to say that ;)))) Update soon!
Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 10:38 PM · On: Mi Casa, Su Casa
I SERIOUSLY CRIED OF LAUGHTER. You, my darling, are fucking HILARIOUS. WOW, now on to the next chappie!
Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Winning, Deflections, and Declarations
This STORY is definitely worth it! Lol sorry, idk if that made any sense but basically I'm lovin' it.
Reviewer: sweetpea (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Mi Casa, Su Casa
awww....bella with a concussion is almost as funny as drunk bella. she was too cute in this chapter! loved it :)
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Oh No You Didn't
Well it's about time!! I'm so worried about this fight. I wonder if Bella realizes he is going to really get hurt??
She loves him but he can't say that right now? It seems like he is in love with her....
Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Converting Anger Into Love
Fucking yum. And is it horrible I find this story funny?? For instance.."He wasn't going to rape me.He was going to stick…” LOL AHAHHAHAA I love it. Keep this story up, it's good
Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Because You Needed Me
This story looks reallllllly good so far!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Oh No You Didn't
great chapter! i cant wait for the fight chapter! update soon!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Mi Casa, Su Casa
bella being tackled was kind of random but thats bella for you. great chapter!
Reviewer: Humble (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Because You Needed Me
Interesting story so far.
Question:
Why did none of the guys question what Bella was doing at the gym at that hour of the night when she found Edward?!
Author's Response: Probably had something to do with the fact that she was almost raped and they found out Edward had gotten injured. Also...it's not in the script.
Reviewer: anabanana219 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Oh No You Didn't
yuuuummmm!!
xx
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Oh No You Didn't
Excellent! I love how they let each other in and express themselves a bit. Also, the hot hot sex.
Reviewer: bubbadoghouse (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Oh No You Didn't
Very Nice! That was hot!
Reviewer: atmachine (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Oh No You Didn't
i love this story. the girl telling the boy she loves him and him not being able to say it back is so true. feeling wanted is such a powerful emotion that everyone feels. you do such a good job portraying those emotions. :)
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