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Reviewer: ShesDiabolical (Signed)
January 24, 2009 05:59 AM · On:
Charges and Arguments.
Chels you MUST absolutely continue this!!!!!! This is such a great story! Or at least, I like it :P And I lvoe the idea of Jake finally finding someone. I'm such a sucker for the underdog :P OH! btw, i know you've got the next chapter of hell school up and I DO want to read it, but I think i'm gonna wait for a while. I'll explain later. Personal crap. Oh well. This was an INCREDIBLE chapter , of all of them. I like that they fight so much but they both really like each other. And please please PLEASE tell me he imprinted on her. yeah!!! hehe <3 Beth
Reviewer: thebluejayway (Signed)
October 08, 2008 11:05 PM · On:
ooooh my pre-K little sis(it's a program at my school) was named Danika
Reviewer: Ophelia (Signed)
October 08, 2008 04:30 AM · On:
Charges and Arguments.
this is awesome! keep writing...
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it.
Reviewer: sirenastarot (Signed)
October 07, 2008 01:54 AM · On:
I like it. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I just put up chapter 5. It should be accepted soon :-).
Reviewer: EdwardsGirl1117 (Signed)
October 05, 2008 07:58 AM · On:
i love the story!keep going!!!!!!
Thanks so much! I just put up chapter 5, so it should be accepted soon. Thanks for reading :-)
Reviewer: eringobraugh (Signed)
September 02, 2008 11:07 PM · On:
I thought I should point out that it says this story is completed... Also it seems like it may be really interesting. Keep sharing!
Reviewer: berryblue100 (Signed)
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August 14, 2008 07:39 PM · On:
I enjoyed it. I thought you had Jake's character down pretty good. The "sure, sure" and the six cheeseburgers definitely made it seem like his character. However, I do see where qjmom is coming from with the pacing issues. I felt like certain parts (the end to the chapter especially) were a little rushed. You just need to learn to take time to describe more. It will improve the pacing as well as allow the readers to picture it in their head clearer. Good job!
-Your loving beta, lol
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