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Reviewer: EmeraldRain (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 1

lol

Reviewer: jessica-cullen (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 1

So I got inspired from your story and just wanted to see if it was cool if I kinda went with your breif metion of Emmet Jasper Bella and Edward going to the movies together?

Reviewer: ILEAMC (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great story

Reviewer: Antonia Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great story.

Author's Response:
Thank you very much! =D

Reviewer: ChangVang218 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

Haha! Hilarious! Totally wasn't expecting that.

And the Emmett and Jasper interaction: so cool!

Author's Response:
I think my writing reflects my favorite kinds of stories. When it comes to humor, I always enjoy the ones where there's this twist at the end. :) It makes me want to reread it again, since I know what's coming.

And I adore Emmett and Jasper - they rarely get the attention they deserve. :D

Thank you for the R&R!

Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is such a cute start. Bella took Edward to the ZOO for entertainment. Very interested in reading more.

Reviewer: IluvRobandEdward (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

very cute

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 1

This was so sweet! Great snipet!

Reviewer: teamswizterland (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

ohh, this could get very interesting, update soon!

Author's Response:
Thank you for your interest and comments! I'm afraid that this is a one-shot though, and will not have any additional updates. :)

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very cute

Reviewer: the_real_MrsEdwardCullen (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

That was sweet and funny!!! I just finished doing the play at school the wizard of oz so I enjoyed that immensly.

Reviewer: Tayanna-Ushlee (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh my. Very cute and fluffy and light. I mean, you have Emmett in here. This story made me smile (not a lot of light moments in the series). Great one-shot. Enough said =) xoxo-Tay-Ush

Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 1

LOL very cute.... I've seen a couple of fics where Bella's still human and goes to the zoo with the Cullens... who are vamps... which can cause a bunch of hilarity in and of itself.

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