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Reviews For Lunière
Reviewer: VampGirl (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 08:55 AM · On: The Girl

You capture Alice perfectly.  



Author's Response:

That is, quite honestly, the nicest compliment someone can give me.  My biggest fear is that I may be taking her in a direction where she shouldn't be going.

 

Thank you so much for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: sunpoet (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Angst

I adore this look into Alice. Too many times, she's presented as someone who cares only for fashion and bossing everyone around. Here, she has depth and emotions that go beyond the superficial. I always wondered how and why Alice grew so attached to Bella so quickly, and you've presented it in a believable, organic way. I really enjoyed this fic, and I can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I am so glad that you enjoyed it!  I, too, am often frustrated and annoyed at the portrayal of Alice in FF.  Meyer left out enough about her that it's easy to make her into what I think she would be.

I am hoping that the direction where I am taking her continues to be believable. 

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review!

Reviewer: RHC (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 07:18 AM · On: The Girl

Congratulations, you've been rec'd! Your story has been chosen for the Weekly Recommendations and poll at The Readers Have Chosen (link below). Visit RHC's forum and join the growing community of authors and readers dedicated to good fanfiction!

Thank you for sharing your work with us.

ChaosHat & the community at The Readers Have Chosen

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Author's Response:

Well thank you very much!  It's an honor to have been chosen!

Reviewer: Avalonia (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Angst

I still don't have the right words for you and this chapter either...I think I'm trying too hard.  Anyway, i just wanted you to know, although I've said it before, that you are an inspiration to me.  Before we talked, when I first read Alice (still heart the old title), I fell in love with it but I was a little afraid to review, because your writing was so intelligent, and I felt so remedial next to it.  So here's to you, poster girl for intelligent fanfic.  You deserve all the praise you get, and a lot more than that.

As you also already know, my very favorite thing about Luniere is that you've not only taken Alice and made her three dimensional, but every single one of the Cullens comes to life in whole new ways for me.  I love the way you see them all, and can't wait to see your interpretation of future events.  Write faster.  :p

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Is all for you, Ava.

I would have stopped a long time ago if it weren't for you.

Baha...postergirl for intelligent fanfic. I'll leave that title to Min, but eventually I'd like to challenge her for the crown.

 

Funny thing is, I was always so excited to be friends with Elisa's creator.  Ironical.

 

<3 you A...thank you for all you do for me.

Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 05:09 AM · On: Angst

Very good, Can't Wait for more.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

I'm working on it!

Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 04:54 AM · On: Amelioration

Very good, I enjoy them joking with each other.

Author's Response:

It makes them seem a little more human...

 

Thank you so much for all of the nice reviews!

Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 04:08 AM · On: Despair

Okay, I just got to the part of..... Angst Boy Distressed Check.  Love It.

Mindless little sheep, Very good.

I can't say enough how much I love your writting. Very good, keep it up.



Author's Response:

laugh...good, I'm glad you liked it!

I'm keeping it up, just slowly.

 

Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 03:43 AM · On: Dissension

Very good. Alice is Awesome as ever (of Course).

Author's Response:

Yes she is!

 

Thanks again!

Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 03:17 AM · On: Accident

Very Good.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: ravenhpltc24 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Angst

You never cease to amaze me with Lunière. I loved this... wow, that glimpse into Jasper's childhood was so interesting! I'm always so excited when you update, it makes my day. Thanks for yet another riveting chapter. :)



Author's Response:

I'm happy you enjoyed Jasper's little story.  I had a blast writing it.

I'm writing 19 right now, but I'll make no promises for a posting date.  School starts back up on Monday. *sigh*

 

Thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Snow War No Peace

So good, Very funny.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all of the wonderful reviews!

I was all sorts of happy when I saw my inbox filled with review alerts!

 

Merci mille fois!

Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Presents and More Presence

Love Jasper, Love Alice, Love the story.



Author's Response:

I feel the love...

Thank you!

Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Marked

Very good,



Author's Response:

Danke!

Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 07:53 AM · On: Promises

Very good, Alice is soooo Awesome.



Author's Response:

Yes she is!

Thank you!

Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Snow

Very good.



Author's Response:

Merci!

Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 07:20 AM · On: Anticipation

Oh My God, That was SOOO funny. Love it!!



Author's Response:

Heh, I liked writing this chapter...happy to see you thought it funny!

Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Decisions

Very good,Jasper's Great.



Author's Response:

Yay!

Thanks!

Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 06:49 AM · On: Homecoming

Great, That's a different side of Jasper at the end, I like it.



Author's Response:

Good!

It's hard to get Jasper just right, I'm glad you think it's believeable!

Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 06:22 AM · On: Heartache

Great, I love your explanation of why Alice didn't see Edward's initial reaction to Bella.  Very Good.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you thought it plausible!

Thank you!

 

Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 05:48 AM · On: The Girl

Great, keep it going.



Author's Response:

Ok!

Thank you!

Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 05:37 AM · On: Huis Clos

Very good, I love Alice, She is So Awesome.  I really like this story, very good.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I love Alice too!

Reviewer: Jooboo (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 11:47 PM · On: Huis Clos

WOW!! Haha I just found your story today and read it all in one sitting.. I am loving it! I now have a sore neck and back from reading off a computer screen for too long but sooo worth it :)

Please, please with sugar on top write more soon! But thankyou for such an awsome read.



Author's Response:

That computer reading will get you every time!

Thankyou so much for taking the time to read and review.

I'm writing as we speak.  I won't promise fast, but there will be more...

Reviewer: verlore (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 04:18 AM · On: Angst

I am in love with this story.   Alice is easily the most fascinating Cullen, in my eyes, and I love to see her character so richly developed. 

Thank you for sharing this, I can't wait for updates! 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Alice -is- the most fascinating Cullen. =)  We might come under fire for that, but I'm willing to take a bullet.

I'm happy that you think I'm doing her justice.

 

Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 08:14 PM · On: Angst

I'm so happy you've updated with a new chapter, a nice long chapter! I love, love, love, love, love this story. It's so fun seeing things through Alice's pov.

I really enjoy the close brother/sister relationship Edward and Alice share in this story. I always sensed that relationship in the books and it's nice to see it detailed here.

The thing about hunting sharks and whales and stuff was priceless! Hilarious! I think Emmett's persistence with it was even funnier though, despite Alice's visions that it wouldn't work. That idea was definitely one I haven't heard before.

I also loved the conversation between Alice and Emmett. I really enjoy your take on Emmett. I hate when people try to make him seem dumb. Like you, I've always had the impression that Emmett was very smart and intuitive; it's just not traits he displays often, preferring to be the charming teddy bear we all love instead!

My favorite characters out of the whole series are Jasper, Alice, and Emmett...so I really, really loved this chapter since it was chock full of all three of them.

The peek into Jasper's past and his assumption about Rosalie and Edward's relationship was great.

And poor Alice! I have some guesses about what it goiing on with her....that her sense of something missing is about more than her "sister" and has to do with her blank past. Because of Bella's experiences, Alice finds out about her history and she can kind of sense that, but doesn't realize it yet. And her vision that confused her so much wasn't a vision but a memory...I'm really eager to see how my guesses match with the truth (in other words I hope you update again soon, lol)!

Anyways, I LOVE your writing and I love this story! Also I'm really sorry for your recent loss. I know how horrible it can be losing a pet. I really hope the new year is better for you. Thanks so much for gettnig the story updated despite all the stuff that has been going on for you! You're Awesome!



Author's Response:

This is one absolutely amazing review!  My goodness, thank you!

The Alice/Edward relationship is one of my focuses because I think that the bond they have with each other isn't seen in any of their other relationships. I adore Emmet now, he really spoke to me this chapter.  I'm hoping to include him a bit more.

I'm glad this chapter had all the right people in it!

 

You are quite a good reader, and you've some very great theories.  I won't spoil here what is right and wrong.  I'm so glad you're patient enough to wait and see how this plays out!

 

Thank you so much for this wonderful review!

 

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 06:14 PM · On: Angst

I love LOVE this story!  It's so intriguing to see the story from Alice's POV.  I hope it doesn't take as long for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Oh god...i hope it doesn't take long either.

Apparently the writing gnomes refuse to work without pay....so that means I have to do it and I'm ridiculously slow.  I'm trying to speed it up.

 

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