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Reviewer: gogggle (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
All I can say is that is not a happy ending. How about you make another chapter about her ending up married to Edward or something? Because that is just not right.
Author's Response: Nope. We aren't to the happy ending yet. We have a lot of damage to clean up before we get there.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
Thanks again for another wonderful chapter. You deserve your nomination. I do feel sorry for poor Charlie and you're right he is the innocent in the middle of this. Every time I read your story it's like you're ripping my heart out of my chest and stomping all over it. But you know what - I keep coming back for more. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I will put it back! I promise!
I am so glad you are enjoying this story. It means a lot
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
Wow I feel sorry for Charlie. Another great chapter. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Poor Charlie. So much to absorb.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: KBfan (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
Great chapter, like always. Can't wait to read more. =)
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying it!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: jazzy-cullen (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
seriously fabulous chappie!! brought me to tears.
Author's Response: It's painful, I know. I am glad youa re staying with me.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
So SAD!!!!!!!!!!! I'm hoping there will be something more positive soon..
Author's Response: There is. Certainly not in the next chapter, but there is hope on the horizon.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
THis Charlie is awesome. I know he wants to make Edward pay, but that's to be expected.
Author's Response: Charlie will really, pleasantly, surprise you in this story. This was a completely acceptable knee jerk reaction for him. He was utterly unprepared and could have been SO much worse.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
Ugh I am SO hooked!
This one is my favorite out of the 89 that I have read or saved!! Please keep updating quickly woman! LoL
Author's Response: I try to update fast!
I am so honoured that you truly like this story. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Penny_Dreadful (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Sound of Music
Angry Jasper just makes him so much hotter! I love this story great work xxx
Author's Response: I completely ADORE this Jasper. He is SO much fun to write.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
Major props go to Charlie for not killing anyone!
"Aw, Bells. Why didn't you just tell me."
*sobs uncontrollably*
It should be so simple.
Author's Response: That's the real tragedy. It *was* that simple. Everyone just made it so much harder.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: mychild (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
ok, that is absolutly heart breaking. poor poor charlie!! :(
now for the strip tease..hmmm...how about Jasper dancing to "Achey, Breaky Heart" by Ray Cyrus. Now that's straight up country! LMAO!
Author's Response: OMG, I'm laughing so hard now I'm crying! Too funny!
I am glad you enjoyed Charlie. He was so different than writing the Cullens, but I enjoyed getting into his head.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: LoveBugged (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
I've never thought that out of all the POVs, Charlie would be the one person who'd make me cry the most. Did I tell you that you're a wizard at deciphering and telling each POVs. They sounded more than real-- that everyone of them were (are) to break my heart. I want to tell you this as much as I can, YOU'RE AMAAAZIINNGGG! My heart is telling me that Carlisle's POV is coming up next because he's more sympathic toward Charlie....
Or...Rosalie's POV, haven't heard much from her.
Charlie, I love you.
Author's Response: Thank you SO much. I wanted to make this so you could read a chapter and tell who's voice, who's mind, it was without the ___POV. It's difficult to get so deeply into each of their heads though. It hurts in there. And I have to feel what they feel and write what it feels like and it's a very draining exercise. But worth it!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: mychild (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
(Chapter 25) ok, so i tried to read that very, very fast as to try not to cry...and i failed! i am like inches away from doing the ugly cry!!
Author's Response: You mean the choking sob, snotty nose one? That's what I did when I wrote it!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: my2galspal (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
You're right, that was not pretty but it was very insightful. It was nice to see Charlie's POV. Now hopefully we get to see what will become of Bella. The suspense is killing me.
Thanks again for sharing your story. I live for the updates and so a little happy dance whenever the new chapter alert arrives.
Author's Response: You will get more of Bella's condition in the next chapter, but I warn you, it's not a nice chapter. Maybe the hardest to read so far.
I am so glad you are enjoying the story! Your reviews mean the world.
Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
Woah. Charlie had way more violent thoughts then I thought he would have. He is really really really pissed. When he was yelling at Edward and wouldn't stop to listen to what he had to say I felt so sorry for Charlie. He's been put through so much crap these last few months and then the people who abandonded her in the first place are the ones who found her and are helping her.
And when he was asking her why she left and he was worried that Bella thought he would have kicked her out cause she got pregnant. That was horrible (but in a good way).
Author's Response: Charlie, I think, had a perfectly natural gut reaction. I mean, what parent wouldn't just... lose it? But he will get it together and get the whole story in the future. I think you'll be pleasantly surprised.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Teaser is up for 27 on the thread.
Reviewer: Beautiful_Distraction (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
Hey Ellie,
I want all 4 of the Cullen men naked and dancing to....oh hell, they're naked, it doesn't matter what's playing in the background! Hahahha....so, does Bella wake up in the next chapter? LMAO!
XOXO
-Whitney
Author's Response: I would totally smack you for that if I didn't puffy heart you so bad! LOL!
Hmm... what could they be dancing to? How bout "I'm Too Sexy"? All four of them:)
Thanks for the review, love.
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
She believes in happy endings... she believes in happy endings... she believes in happy endings...
Author's Response: Keep repeating. You'll need it next chapter!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: iponeddyou (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
I... I love Charlie. Always have. Though he's introverted and quiet and... even though he sided with Jacob in the books. Charlie's always been my favorite adult in Twilight.
This update broke my heart. And his rage is totally understandable. And, I, wow. I'm speechless.
Brilliant.
xoxo - Cherolyn
Author's Response: Charlie is a stand-up guy trying to do his best by his daughter. He will pleasantly surprise you in this story, I think.
Thanks so much for your reviews!
Teaser is up for 27 on the thread.
Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
I am enjoying the story, but I'm ready for her to wake up and deal with Edward. Also for Jasper & Rose to come back into the picture.
Author's Response: Well, Jasper and Rose will be back in the picture soon. As for Bella... there are complications. But hang in there. It's coming.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: mychild (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
ok, great, so now i am tearing up at work. just fabulous! lol and i already get enough crap for being the only girl working today. I love this story.
Author's Response: Edward certainly is going through hell right now. Sorry to have made you cry!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
wow!!! i can't wait for more
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Purple83 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
for some reason I don't really feel for Charlie...maybe because I love Edward despite his mistakes and shortcomings and Charlie hates his guts...Charlie makes me mad, although on a logical level I understand his reasoning...
Author's Response: Give Charlie a chance. That was his first, knee-jerk reaction. He's going to surprise you in the end.
Teaser for 27 is on the thread.
Thank you SO much for your support and review!
Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
I think you have Charlie's reaction spot-on. I'm enjoying this story (despite the angst, because of the angst?) so much.
PS You've got my vote. =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for loving this story. I love it to. So much of my heart goes in it!
I appreciate your vote and your review!
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
Poor Charlie! I can't imagine how hard it would be to see your little girl like that!
I'm glad that he can see how much Carlisle is doing for Bella; even if he does partially blame them all.
How long before we get to find out what exactly happened to Bella?
Author's Response: Not long now. Although there is never an "offical" diagnosis, but there is more information.
I am so glad you liked the story and thank you for reviewing!
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