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Reviewer: iponeddyou (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Yeah, I'm fucking breathless.
That was beyond, oh wow.
I, uh, it seems my tear ducts are dried up, because all I did was hyperventilate.

Your brilliant.
Oh, I'm dying for the next update.

Poor Edward.
Poor Angela.
Poor Bella......

xoxo - Cherolyn



Author's Response:

::: hugs you tight ::::

It'll be all right.  It's just such a hard chapter.  I killed me to write.  Getting into Edward's head was... I wanted to be sick when I was done.

I truly appreciate all of your support and reviews!

Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Bring her out of it!! :(



Author's Response:

It will be a while, alas, but she'll come back to us.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: mom2kandg (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

NO WORDS THIS TIME....just tears!!!



Author's Response:

::: hugs you tight :::

It will be okay.  I promise.

Reviewer: babbling_brooke (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Holy Hale!!!! That was intense!!!!

I love that Jasper is there, I love it... It feels like it will be ok now, I mean aside from the fact that she is currently dying LOL! but they are all together, and I trust you, I can't imagine you torturing these characters for nothing, unless your evil like that, Are you? Evil? ....Kidding...

Poor Angela has been through so much too, It was nice to have her POV again...



Author's Response:

I will not leave Angela out of the resolution of this story.  She's the only reason there can be an HEA.  So she will stay with us.

Yes, they are all back together.  And they will suffer.  And they will heal.  Just have faith.

Thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: eddiesteddy (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

You can't leave it like that for long! Please update again soon-I think I'm addicted!



Author's Response:

LOL!  There is a 12 step on the thread!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

So Sad And Emotional!!!! :(



Author's Response:

It is definitely a tough chapter.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Dominatall (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Tears :( I'm glad you believe in HEA because I would have been bawling if I didn't know better. Excellent writing.
I've been following this story for awhile now, and it's my no#1 favorite

Author's Response:

Wow!  Thank you so very much!  This review means the world to me!

Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

oh so heartbreaking.



Author's Response:

It is a such a difficult time for these folks.  All of them.

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Oh God--beyond hearbreaking!   I am so anxious to find out what happens next!



Author's Response:

It is a tough chapter, I know.  Keep the faith.  It will be okay!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: dmb392 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

oh i can't wait for more!!! i'm going to have to trust you on the whole happy ending thing!! (even though it doesn't look that way now!!!) :D lol



Author's Response:

It sure doesn't look like it, but that's what will make it all the better!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilighted007 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

she believes in happy endings she believes in happy endings she believes in happy endings she believes in happy endings she believes in happy endings she believes in happy endings she believes in happy endings she believes in happy endings she believes in happy endings she believes in happy endings she believes in happy endings she believes in happy endings she believes in happy endings she believes in happy endings she believes in happy endings she believes in happy endings she believes in happy endings she believes in happy endings she believes in happy endings she believes in happy endings......

Yep, I think it would be wise to wear a bullet proof jacket! But, I believe you when you say you'll make it better! :)



Author's Response:

LOL!  Keep the chant, sista!  I do believe in happy endings and I will make it better (and I will be wearing my bullet proof jacket a while longer).

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: t1nkerbell9598 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Man poor Edward and Bella that's so so sad.  Thanks, Jennifer

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Author's Response:

Yeah, they are both suffering enormously.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

My heart is pounding in my chest!!!!!  I feellike I want to scream out in agony right next to Edward. I also wantto hold him rock him back and forth whispering words of reassurance into his ear.  I want peace post again soon and at least give us hope.



Author's Response:

There is hope.  I promise.

I know - you just want to wrap Edward up and tell him it's going to be okay.  Alas, he is learning, in the worst way possible, the consequences of his decisions.

Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

sorry for the swearing, that was all that was running through my head when i read that.

 

this is awesome btw!!



Author's Response:

Please!  I curse like a sailor! (you read Jasper, right?)

Yeah, that's a tough, tough chapter.  Thank you for reading it and reviewing!

Reviewer: Mom4Carlyle (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

I don't mean this to sound callous, but I really find your code warnings really enjoyable.  I have decided I am a bit more cynical or something as I really don't find this story that "horrible" on the emotion meter in that I will be crying or overly upset.  Mostly your "code" system means how much I will be angry that the chapter has ended and leave me wanting more.  (I had Code Scarlet.)

I have faith in you that you will give Bella and Edward will have their happy ending so I don't find the angst so hard to deal with.  (And they better or I will send Emmett after you, and not in the good way.)

Look forward to future updates.



Author's Response:

LOL!  You're not callous!  I base them on the feedback from my beta and my 4 pre-readers (to make sure I stay on track) as well as gauging reaction on my thread.  They're their to warn folks of emotional impact only.  But I'm glad that you enjoy them.

Now, though I get your point, sending Em after me is hardly a threat:) 

I will update soon.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

that one killed me!

But in a way this is good..in New Moon/ Eclipse I never saw other than when he saw through sams memories of what bella looked like when he left her...that he actually got what he did to her...in this story edward is seeing what the consequences are...that you cant choose for other people that they have real feelings .. and how much Bella really loved him.

 

cant wait for some lighter stuff but i have a feeling its going to get worse when she wakes up..somehow i dont see your bella forgiving as easily as SM's Bella



Author's Response: Thank you. I was disappointed at how easily they were reconciled in NM as well. I wasn't sure anyone learned anything. I was hoping to make sure Edward really understood this time so that he could correct his mindset with regard to Bella. Thanks for the review!

Author's Response: Thank you. I was disappointed at how easily they were reconciled in NM as well. I wasn't sure anyone learned anything. I was hoping to make sure Edward really understood this time so that he could correct his mindset with regard to Bella. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twimom2-4 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Wow! I have thoroughly enjoyed reading your work. You truly are talented.



Author's Response: That is an amazingly kind thing to say. Thank you.

Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

OMG!!!!!!! OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!
no words :'(

I think i felt a little tug on my heart in this chap...Code RED indeed!
OMG when she started bleeding and EDWARD!

OH my GOSH! When he was screaming and then when he got away from Em and jaz to run! NO  NO NONONONONONO!!! Ahhhh!* gah* Gasp*

Im crazy right now after this :(



Author's Response: Trust me, I felt crazy writing it. Painful painful stuff. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

You are completely evil.  I have snuck onto my work computer (my home one is still down and can't review other than a 10 from my iTouch) to just say you're killing me here.

I keep repeating to myself 'she believes in happy endings' 'she believes in happy endings'.



Author's Response: Hang in there! I had wonndered where you had run off to! We miss ya! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Megan_redemption9688 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

You cannot kill bella. This is so SAD!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON



Author's Response: It will be okay. Bella won't die, Edward just thinks she will. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Hide well. Hide very well. I always win hide and seek, so don't think for a moment taht you can hide behind the couch, I will find you.

Thanks for the stress for the day.

I will hold my breath until you give me the next chapter. Or until I turn blue and pass out. But the chapter better ocme before that damn it.

Great update!



Author's Response: Lol! Don't turn blue!!! I like you just as you are! I will update soon, I am sure! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Purple83 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

omfg! I am speechless!



Author's Response: It is a tough chapter. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: SarahElizabeth (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

OKay, I read through it all, I didn't review until now, because honestly I was hoping it would get better and I'd have something happy to say. As of right I'm just shaking with sobs, and ready to hunt you down where ever you are and throttle you. I'm a mommy I know how precious babies are. I'm a single mom, I know what it's like to go through it alone. But DAMN woman, this is PAINFUL. Oh. Please tell it gets better, I can't handle the heartfail. I'm holding you to the fact that nothing will happen to baby Cullen...and that you do believe in HEA...cause woman if you don't...I'll revolt.



Author's Response: Lol! Ok! I promise I believe in HEA!!! For what it is worth, I am a mommy too and I would never let anything happen to our wee Swan/Cullen. Keep the faith. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Wow that was heart wrenching. I loved it so much can't wait for what comes next!!!



Author's Response: Isn't funny how we can enjoy something that rips our heart out? Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: RingTheBella (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

dry shampoo?! I've never heard of such a thing. Did you make that up for the story?



Author's Response: Nope! It is real. Its a spray like hairspray and takes oil and dirt out of hair. I used it when I worked as a wilderness guide. Models often use it when hair has to be changed between photos on shoots.

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