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Reviewer: smalls (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

i'm just going to put this out there...if you're going to leave us hanging like this, then you just have to update faster...

...still remaining optimistic...but am also sad.  when will the actual edward/bella reunion take place?



Author's Response:

I update as fast as I can.  Validation takes time, alas.

And as for Bella/Edward... it's a while off.  Bella resurfaces in chapter 35, but I haven't written her awake conversation with Edward quite yet.  There is plenty to keep you occupied in the interim.

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

OMG!   We’ll hang on till next chapter, but it is not good to give heart attacks to your reviewers.


 



Author's Response:

I know, dear.  I didn't mean to.

But I've already submitted the next chapter.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Please let Bella live!!  I know that baby's can live and mothers not make it through the birth.  Will Bella and Edward get together by the end of this story?  Very angsty..



Author's Response:

They will.  But all of us, especially them, will work for it.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: nelln (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

::digging my fingers into my hair, pulling clumps away from my head screaming at the top of my lungs::

WTF!?!?!?!!?  OMFG!!  I know what you said, but Holy Sh!t monkeys!!  I'm so upset that I think I'm gonna have to watch Sound of Music and Mary Poppins just to bring me back on an even keel! 

I'm not sure I can take anymore of this angsty sh!t.  My heart is beyond broken right now.  I'm trying to keep the faith, but it's really, really, REALLY hard...is this gonna mean she's gonna have some sort of radical surgery to save her life and there will only be the one Cullen/Swan "spawn" (I must say that word does not have the best connotation attached - couldn't you have used progeny or offspring?  It would have been a little less....negative)??

XOXOXO (I'm sorry I'm so mean sounding...it's a reaction to all the angsty stuff in your story.  I do love you though...really!)



Author's Response:

LOL!  That was the politest mean I've ever heard!

And spawn was tongue in cheek.  Swan/Cullen beautiful princess is more like it:)

Yup.  That was a HARD chapter and it will be okay.  But you will have to have faith.  And watch lots of happy movies in the interim.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vysed (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Heavy sigh. Intense. Love the EPOV. That was heavy. I literally feel weighted down. Great great chapter. Thank you for updating.

Author's Response:

It is a very difficult chapter.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

This killed me. Sorry I can't say much else. I'm unconscious on my floor. 



Author's Response:

::: hugs you :::

It will be okay.

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: slaybelle (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Ugh Damn you. I'm crying. Reading Edward so broken is not something I'm used to reading...it hurts.

 

 

Love you! :D



Author's Response:

Edward needed to be broken down to realize the true error of his ways.  He cannot make decisions for others.  He must learn that fate will do what she may.

Thanks so much for believing in me!

Reviewer: HaleyDK (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

I love this story SO much

. I just started reading it about two hours ago, and I knew I couldn't stop til I had read it all! Cannot wait for the next chapter. Your style of writing is very strong- you convincingly switch between characters and give each of them their own personal voices. Is any of their voices more close to your own style than the others? Thanks so much for writing!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you SO much for this review.

Well, I find Carlisle and Edward easiest to write and Jasper and Emmett the most fun.  I would have to say Carlisle is probably the closest to my own style, but I'm not quite that formal.  It's weird.  I'm like a cross between the two.  Big words in potty mouths?

LOL!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: amandahugnkiss (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

OMG- I am loving your story and can't wait to see what happens next



Author's Response:

I am glad you are enjoying it!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: amylouwho (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Great job on the emotions in this story. I'm really enjoying it. Guess I'm a masochist. :) Thanks for writing!

Author's Response:

LOL!  It's definitely difficult to read!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Jadalulu (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh! I'm dyin and cryin over here!!!!!!!!!!! This fic is so gooooood!!!!!! PLEASE update soon!



Author's Response:

Tough chapter, I know.  Just hang in there!

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

You believe in happy endings. You believe in happy endings You believe in happy endings You believe in happy endings You believe in happy endings You believe in happy endings You believe in happy endings....



Author's Response:

I believe in happy endings.

I believe in happy endings.

I believe in happy endings.

I believe in happy endings.

I believe in happy endings.

Reviewer: angmclure (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

You don't have to hide, I need you to finsh the story to much to be to mad at you.  I read this and my heart just broke for Edward.  I so feel for him.  It really suck that the chapter ended where it did.  I need more even if I can barely read through the tears a first.  I keep the thought that you believe in happy ends in the back of my mind when I read these chapters.  Thats the only way to get through them.  So now I'm now begging you to come out of hiding and update.



Author's Response:

I know it seems short, but they are all about the same length!  I guess that speaks to which chapters people are most involved with.

I know it was a hard place to end, but remember, I write one or two character's stories per chapter.  Edward's story, for this chapter, ended at those doors.  Sad as it was, that was the end of his part.

Thanks so much for your review!

Reviewer: MyBloodSmellsBetter (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

I don't know what to say....that was truly code scarlet....I'm gettin all teary eyed over here...  :(



Author's Response:

It is such a tough chapter.  I know.  But it will be okay.

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: mayian2 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Whew!  You can really get my heart pumping with scenes like that!  I can't wait for you next update...I need to go find a paper bag to breathe into!

Michael Ann



Author's Response:

It is a tough, tough chapter, right?

But it will get better.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Ok, that was DEFINITELY a code scarlet!  Thank you for the warning....and I'm so glad that you believe in happy endings because I don't think I could read that otherwise. 

Now my guess is that she'll have the baby now and will wake up to Edward holding the baby in his arms?  (Ok, not angsty enough for this story...)

Beautifully written, as always.



Author's Response:

LOL!  Not quite angsty enough, no.  But it will be okay, I promise.  And you will get your happy ending.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: jrojrojro (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

HOLY MOLY.  HEART FAIL MAJOR IN THAT CHAPPIE.  I'M GOING TO BE DYING UNTIL I FIGURE OUT WHAT HAS HAPPENED.  HAVE PITY ON US DEVOTED READERS AND LEAVE US HANGING AS SHORT A TIME AS POSSIBLE!  LOVE THIS STORY AND CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!  KEEP UP THE BLOODY BRILLIANCE, LOVIE!



Author's Response:

I will update quickly, I am sure!  Have faith.  It will be okay.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Sounds terible but I have faith your will fix it. I can only hope that the baby and Bella will be ok. Glad to see Edward even in pain has been staying by her side. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Edward is on a journey and he grows in leaps and bounds.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: juneforever (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Please hurry! I love this story.



Author's Response:

I will update quickly.

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: kenziemorton (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

omg is she going to have the baby now! i so can't wait for the next chapter. you got alll those reviews b/c you rock.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for believing in me!

There is a lot yet to happen!

Reviewer: loolupe (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

I don't what just happened but I know that you'll take care of her.

Author's Response:

That I will.  Have faith.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: laleangel (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

OMG I'm sooooo sad at this chapter. Dam My eyes are filling up too!!  Jesus what are you doin to me? To Edward, to Bella. My heart is honestly breaking for him here.  I need more, more now please with a side of happy!!!

Lee Anne x



Author's Response:

It is so very difficult, I know.  There are small rays of hope coming soon.

Thanks so much fo reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

OMG Poor Edward!!! *hugs Edward* It's gonna get better!!! She believes in happy endings...she believes in happy endings *keeps rocking Edward while repeating this*

My heart broke AGAIN! Edwards thoughts and emotions were beautifuly written and really made me feel what he was feeling. These characters are going through such hell and I can't wait for it to end for them so they don't have to go through this emotional hell.



Author's Response:

They are *all* suffering so very much.  There is so much damage to heal.  But keep believing!  It will be ok.

Thanks so much for all of your support!

Reviewer: sstreger (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

wowsa.  I wonder if they're going to take the baby out?  she is 8 months along so it would probably make sense to have an emergency c-section.  But a baby without a mama is so sad :(



Author's Response:

Have faith that Bella will make it through this.

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Great chapter!  It was very heavy, but oh so good!!  I have great faith that you will make it all ok and will hang on to see what you come up with next!!



Author's Response:

It's a tough chapter.  I know.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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