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Reviewer: kuntrygal (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

Awesome chapter!  Nice seeing what's going on in Bella's mind.



Author's Response:

I am so glad it made sense and that you enjoyed it!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: kaottic1 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

wake her up already!! get working towards that happy ending you promised!



Author's Response:

Patience, my sweet.  It's coming!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

Not confusing at all!  I thought it read perfectly--I really liked the imagery of her swimming and trying to find the surface/the shore.  It is reminiscent of her cliffdving canon incident. 

I could totally see how E leaving the room now would cause B to panic, but also see how C would want him not to be there just in case. 

Was just thinking...we really haven't seen E/B truly interact much during this story (with her awake), yet we can totally see their connection anyway.  Props to you for that!

--Melanie



Author's Response:

I am so glad you got the imagery and how it was connected to cannon.

Yes, E leaving the room was horribly wrong, but it had to be done.  I will get more into that in chapter 35.

I am so glad you are understanding and enjoying the story despite the fact that you have never seen the two of them interact.  Which they most definitely will.

Thank you for reviewing

Reviewer: Elizabethan (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

I must admit, I was a bit disappointed that you went in the order that you did.  As a reader, I would have preferred to have her waking up scene and reunion with Edward before the happy ending.  I do respect your creative process; just giving my opinion. 

Is this the last chapter or will you you have another with their reconciliation?  And did they get married, or are they just living together?



Author's Response:

Whoa.  We haven't gotten near the happy ending.  She isn't awake yet.  This was just a dream.

There are 9 more chapters written and I haven't gotten to reconciling them yet.  I think you may have thought what I wrote was reality but it was not.  It was only the manifestiation of Bella's desires.

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

Is she going to wake up soon??



Author's Response:

Bella will resurface in chapter 35,

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

Oh, that was good!  If I were Bella it would be very difficult to turn away from that very nice dream and struggle towards a very confusing surface.

And so it seems we get the first hints of how truly conflicted Bella is about Edward.  Wanting to turn away from him but realizing she  needs him to find her baby.  I hope it doesn't take too long for him to convince her that he's never stopped loving her.  Those conversations could possibly be harder for me to read than all of the drama with the baby and Bella's recovery. 

Wonderful update, and it was great to hear from Bella.  Would love to hear from her or Edward again soon!



Author's Response:

The first conversation they have, as short as it is, is incredibly difficult.  Nothing is easy for them.

Thanks so much for all of your support.

Reviewer: prettykisses (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

Loved BPOV!!! Totally got into the dream sequence.  The bestest part is that I think Bells and Edward will have that life!!!!!!!!

Bella's ability to hear what was going on was super awesome.

I wanted to put my hands through the computer screen and help her get up to M-Effing surface!!!

Next chappy will be hella awesome.

Oh and I am thinking that Elizabeth was the name Bella had in mind?  Or was Edward's reference to her name what triggered Little Love's name to be Eliza in her dream.

One question I do have is how much time has elapsed from Bella being admited to now?  I feel like it's been FOREVER!  I am thinking a few days but seriously I have no idea.  And what's up with Renee????  I need to go back to the beginning see if maybe she just isn't in the picture...



Author's Response:

It has been less than a week since she was admitted.  I know it seems longer.  As for Renee - well, she's not much a part of this.  You'll find out more shortly. 

I am glad you made sense of the dream and the reality.

Don't you just want to grab her and pull her up???

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Juliamine (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

Another truly awesome inspiring chapter. You did Bella in coma so perfect! LOVED it!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: laylieb (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

oh PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soooooon!!!!



Author's Response:

I will do my best!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: fletchmartin (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

Oh.My.God. This chapter was so well done! I loved it! I actually understood the dream, what she's hearing, and her thoughts! That's how wonderful of a writer you are! My heart broke when Edward had to leave Bella's side. God, I just want her to say his name out loud and stop him from leaving the room. Wow, wow, wow! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

 

It was so tough, impossible even, for him to leave, but it had to be done.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: luvnrob (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

Please hurry with another chapter!!! I hope their love can survive!!!



Author's Response:

There will be another soon!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

Haha, I cheated and looked down at your note at the bottom of this chapter so I understood it better. So it was really good. I enjoyed it! I'm glad she's finally waking up. I am curious...do we get to know the name Bella was gonna choose for her daughter?



Author's Response:

That you do not.  You know why?  Hmm... I'll let you guess!

I'm so glad that you enjoyed the chapter!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: SpaCullen (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

great chapter!  can't wait for more!  this is such a different storyline from others I have read, so I am really enjoying it!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you are enjoying it!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: PDXSparkler (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

Need More!  This is so heart-wrenching!



Author's Response:

More soon!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: eliza3ame (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

Oh god please update soon, I can't wait to read next chapter



Author's Response:

I will submit shortly!  Promise!

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

lots going on here but i understood Bella i trying to fight her way out of the drug induced coma  and hearing bits and pieces of whatEdward is saying to her,Hope she awakens next chapter.



Author's Response:

I am so glad it made sense and that you enjoyed it!  She will resurface in chapter 35.  We have one last other thing to deal with first...

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: jend (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

i'm always so excited to see this updated! as always, great chapter. i can't wait for more!



Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: spidermonkey_09 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111

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im speechless - no words

amazing as always

wowowowoww

so good 

cannot wait 

shes waking up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 1000000000/10



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review, dearheart!

It's a tough chapter, but our girl is coming back and there are wounds to heal.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

I think Bella should wake up to Angela; she would be the only one Bella would recongize fully considering when she went under.  Princess Bride is one of my very favorite movies, BTW, love the reminder!  We missed you this week, thanks for the new chapter!



Author's Response:

The chapter was submitted on Monday... just our lovely validators had LOTS of work to do!  I will submit another again soon!

And who doesn't love the Princess Bride!

Alas, Bella doesn't wake up to Angela, but she sees her soon after....

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: EmeraldEyez (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

OH SHE HAS TO COME BACK TO THEM... lol n this needs UPDATED AGAIN ASAP!!!



Author's Response:

Be patient.  It will take time!

I will update shortly!

Thanks so much foor reviewing!

Reviewer: kenziemorton (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

i didn't think that the chapter was hard to figure out at all. i loved it and can't wait for the next chaper.



Author's Response:

I am so glad it made sense and that you enjoyed it!

Thanks for reviewing!

 

 

 

Reviewer: kathat (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

Hey E,

I think that was an awesome way to represent Bella as being unconscious/semiconscious and having thoughts that are all over the place.  From the sounds of it, if her vitals are starting to level out, then she's stablizing and going to be OK.

Her dream sure had a lot of specific details!  It's interesting that she called the baby Elizabeth, like maybe thats the name she had chosen for her,too!

Good job!



Author's Response:

Well, part of it was *hearing* the name, but it fits to her.  But it is the name she would have picked herself.

She is all over.  She's trying to make sense of the nonsensical.  But she will awaken sooner than anyone expected.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: iponeddyou (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

Poor Bella.
God, I don't know what kind of wreck I would be if one second I was dreaming of perfection, and then waking to realize I no longer had the baby I fought for with me.

That just, tugged at my heart strings.
I don't know if Edward's leaving was a good idea. I know he gave his word, and promised he would the second she began to stir, but, Bella heard him. And it's just gonna confuse her. Make her think he left her again.

I'm still wondering what Bella wanted to name the baby, even though I'm head over heels in love with Elizabeth. <3

Good job, I can't wait for the next update!
Cherolyn Renee



Author's Response:

It is best that Edward left, if only because her condition is so tenuous.  She's (unfortunately) used to him being gone now.  That is what is familiar, if sad.  If, in her unstable condition, she's faced with her biggest love and biggest fear... it will overload her.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: naeo99 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

Thank you for shirtless Edward!!!!



Author's Response:

Shirtless Edward makes everything okay!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

Ellie...my dear...you'd think I would eventually stop with the "It updated??!?!?" and "YAY!" squeals...but not so much! LOL!

I think this chapter...more than most made me cry! Bella...poor thing....shes so lost and confused...and wants nothing more than to be with her baby. I looooved the line about how she wanted Edward...and she hated that! Sooo damn true. And Carlisle telling Edward to leave...ugh!

You are a master with the written word! *mwah*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Aw, hun!  Your endless support means the world.

This was painful.  She's so lost and confused.  These are her thoughts, free of rationality.  She loves her baby and she loves Edward so much.  So very much.  But part of her wants to run with her child to make sure she isn't hurt again.

Thank you so much for all you do!

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